AvNeil TS: Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga(Epilogue updated on Page 17) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update
Avni is trying hurt herself
But at least Neil got his senses back
Update epilogue soon

Originally posted by: pri12

Amazingg..loved it :)

This was all Ali's plan..

Love him in this story only 😆

Originally posted by: vidz2122

Dramebazz

Hihi .. i wantd to kill ali

Sorry yaaar mujse bohth badi galti hi hayi .. maaf kardee

I cursd him and nanno like hell

When avni told that nanno wasnt well .. she forcd her for marrg ...

But u always come up with surprse ...

Woww ... phir bhi tumko chahunga ...

Waitng for epilg ...

Do an ff aftr that ... i love ur stories ..

Originally posted by: vu1998

Deepu... Absolutely fantastic...

Initially.. I was like.. Uff ye Ali pyaar ka dushman.. But I really wanna give him a hug for last line...

Deepu.. You break my heart many times.. But finally.. Do dil milne hi wale hain..

When Tillu hid the ring... I laughed out loud...

Bebe always rocks..

The ceremony... Avni clapping for him even being disheartened... Main phir bhi tumko chahungi...😳

Overall mast mind blowing... Shaandaar jabardast jindabad...

Lots of love..

Update epilogue soonish..

Originally posted by: nimarious

read all the parts in one go...
such a beautiful story...
the way u described each n every scene was tremendous...
Judi murder case...
I was like how can avni do this...
but finally was relieved ...
poor Neil he thought it otherwise...
I just hated Ali in the whole story
but after reading the last line I just wanted to hug him tight ...
loved how u added that ceremony in this story...
n the song was just awww
very well written...
plz update epilogue soon
waiting...

Originally posted by: Kshailja

Bechara Ali ko pata nai maine Kitni galiyan de di hongi..

Hahahahahahahha..

Thank God it was their plan to make Neil realise..

But Neil bhi na, itna late kr diya..

Chalo der aaye par durust aaye...

Now time to see everyone's reaction..

Update soon...

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

We all detest Ali so much that even if he does good we just curse him n I could imagine his face speaking those dialogues . jhoot ya sach tode pal ke liye he was able to enjoy the moments

I expected Bebe to speak to Neil .

Hayee you are gonna make them have phere again . then I will break dance

nice turning of tables 😲 and Alas ! it's short . dil mange more 😔

it was awesome . aise hi likha karo

Originally posted by: ANNU30

Too good👏

Originally posted by: srividhya68

nice upt
finally neil told the truth
waiting for the epilogue
cont soon