AvNeil TS: Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga(Epilogue updated on Page 17)

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__VIHU

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Deepu... Absolutely fantastic...

Initially.. I was like.. Uff ye Ali pyaar ka dushman.. But I really wanna give him a hug for last line...

Deepu.. You break my heart many times.. But finally.. Do dil milne hi wale hain..

When Tillu hid the ring... I laughed out loud...

Bebe always rocks..

The ceremony... Avni clapping for him even being disheartened... Main phir bhi tumko chahungi...😳

Overall mast mind blowing... Shaandaar jabardast jindabad...

Lots of love..

Update epilogue soonish..

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RaindropsNRoses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

read all the parts in one go...
such a beautiful story...
the way u described each n every scene was tremendous...
Judi murder case...
I was like how can avni do this...
but finally was relieved ...
poor Neil he thought it otherwise...
I just hated Ali in the whole story
but after reading the last line I just wanted to hug him tight ...
loved how u added that ceremony in this story...
n the song was just awww
very well written...
plz update epilogue soon
waiting...

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Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Bechara Ali ko pata nai maine Kitni galiyan de di hongi..

Hahahahahahahha..

Thank God it was their plan to make Neil realise..

But Neil bhi na, itna late kr diya..

Chalo der aaye par durust aaye...

Now time to see everyone's reaction..

Update soon...

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Electro.Cutie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: shikhsk

I want to say the exact same thing.oh god zuu ki zain ... So zuu s post cut cope paste

Nice recycling 😆

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srinithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

We all detest Ali so much that even if he does good we just curse him n I could imagine his face speaking those dialogues . jhoot ya sach tode pal ke liye he was able to enjoy the moments

I expected Bebe to speak to Neil .

Hayee you are gonna make them have phere again . then I will break dance

nice turning of tables 😲 and Alas ! it's short . dil mange more 😔

it was awesome . aise hi likha karo

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie
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Hey how nicely the tables turned. 😆 I am in shock.. This was Ali and Avni's planning.. Oh god I was cursing Ali throughout hehehe sorry ma man! 😳😆
Nainooo. It's over? 😔
Waiting for the epilogue.. Loved this update!
Main phir bhi tum ko chahungi..
And yayy.. I am first!
Lots of love
Zuu

I liked Ali in their childhood so thought of making him positive in this story...

Yep its over, Epilogue will be given soon...

Glad you liked the update

Love you❤️

Edited by Deepti_98 - 8 years ago

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Deepti_98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Nice update :)
It was nice to read that Ali is a positive character :)
Awesome :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)

Thanks:)

Glad you liked the update:)

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