AvNeil TS: Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga(Epilogue updated on Page 17)

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AVNEIL TS: MAIN PHIR BHI TUMKO CHAHUNGA

INDEX: PROLOGUE- PAGE 1
CHAPTER 1- PAGE 4
CHAPTER 2- PAGE 8
CHAPTER 3- PAGE 13
EPILOGUE - PAGE 17



PROLOGUE
Avni broke down on the road. She was sitting there motionless. Her eyes didn't blink even for a minute. Tears were steadily flowing down her eyes.
Her newly bought dress was completely wet due to her tears.

Few minutes ago, the world seemed to dance for her. Everyone was very delighted.
But now it seemed like her world was broken into pieces.

Avni caming running towards the road to stop the car. But the car had already left from there. Neil was driving the car, his eyes red in anger.
He was rash driving, completely losing his senses.
Avni tried to shout from behind but Neil didn't hear even a single word.
He looked at Avni through the mirror of his car, with guilt and anger in his eyes.

Avni was too shocked to react upon anything. Everything happened so suddenly that she couldn't even understand what had happened.

This day was supposed to be the happiest day of her life but her dream was shattered...

~~
The Day Before
Avni's Diary

Tomorrow I will be Neil's wifey once again. Last time we had bitter memories of our marriage, but this time the things will be completely different. Its a special day for both of us.

I will get to wake up to his smile every morning and hear the honeyed words fall from his loving lips day in and day out. My heart races at the thought! Neil will be so happy to see me in bride's gown. His smile will be one I cannot shake from my memory.

The ideas of sharing his last name gives me a sense of completion. Tomorrow, Neil will take his dulhania away...

~~

Avni remembered the words she wrote in her diary last night. Her hands were shaking...
Bebe, Neela and rest of them came running towards her.

" Kya hua baccha? Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?" Neela asked in a soft and concerning tone.

" Voh chala gaya Ma. He left everything and went from here." Avni spoke with much difficulty.

Bebe has lost her ability to think. She came near Avni and sat near her
" Puttar, joh dikhta hai vaisa hota nahi hai. My Neil can't do this. He was the most excited person for this marriage. There is definitely some reason why Neil has taken this step."

They all took Avni inside the room. The decorations were removed from there soon afterwards...

Hii Guys!!!
I wanted to write something different this time
This one is pretty dark and serious as compared to my previous work, but I hope you all will like it afterwards
Do leave your valuable comments, whether its praising or bashing❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Deeptiii You are back 🤗
Thanks for this 😳
This is so emotional..
I wonder what happened with Neil that he left her
Plz continue soon
Edited by pri12 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Arre yeh kya ho gaya 😲
Dard bhari daastaan hai lagta hai 😭
Clear all the MU soon. I am sure you will.
But Nainooo so happy to see your new FF.
Update soon.. I wanna know ki aisa kya hogaya ki Neil hi waha se chala gaya. Avni ko chod ke 🥺 Oh dear poor girl!
Update was nice dear but I think many many heart breaking scenes are in store for us.
Love the title.. main phir bhi tumko chahunga 😳

Edited by Electro.Cutie - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I guess this story is gonna decode the title mei phir bhi tumko chahunga
I am gonna wait for the next to understand the story
he left her in bride's dress . itni badi baat kya ho sakti hai ?
so all had accepted her .
so u are gonna write a dhukiyari kahani
it was like a teaser . I know it's gonna be heartbreaking
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hiii naina...
this is the first time I m reading ur story...
n it's awesome...
such an amazing start ...
beautifully penned...
full of emotions...
that diary's part was written perfectly...
but it's gonna be a very painful story I guess...
I hope all mu gets clear soon...
just cannot imagine Neil doing this...
he must be going through a lot...
otherwise he wouldn't have taken such a drastic step...
do update soon
can't wait for the story to unfold
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I will not assume anything and let you offer what you have in your mind...
And the prologue is awesome and well written..
Neil toh apni dulhaniya le jaega.. Chahe jo ho jaye..
And title is awesome... "Main fir bhi tmko chahunga"
Bas Neil wapas aa jaye apni Dulhaniya ko le jaane...
Aise nai jaa sakta h wo..
Waiting for next update...
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: pri12

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Deeptiii You are back 🤗
Thanks for this 😳
This is so emotional..
I wonder what happened with Neil that he left her
Plz continue soon

Pri you are back with your lovely comments🤗
You will get to know what happens next soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie

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Unres
Arre yeh kya ho gaya 😲
Dard bhari daastaan hai lagta hai 😭
Clear all the MU soon. I am sure you will.
But Nainooo so happy to see your new FF.
Update soon.. I wanna know ki aisa kya hogaya ki Neil hi waha se chala gaya. Avni ko chod ke 🥺 Oh dear poor girl!
Update was nice dear but I think many many heart breaking scenes are in store for us.
Love the title.. main phir bhi tumko chahunga 😳

Awww Zuu... Your words are so encouraging and lovely
Glad you liked the update
Lets see what is in store for all
I also love title😳
Lots.of Love
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

I guess this story is gonna decode the title mei phir bhi tumko chahunga

I am gonna wait for the next to understand the story
he left her in bride's dress . itni badi baat kya ho sakti hai ?
so all had accepted her .
so u are gonna write a dhukiyari kahani
it was like a teaser . I know it's gonna be heartbreaking

Yep you got it write...
Kya baat hui hai voh toh baad mai pata chalega..
Actually I love emotional episodes so thought to write one...
Stay tuned
Thanks alot😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nimarious

hiii naina...
this is the first time I m reading ur story...
n it's awesome...
such an amazing start ...
beautifully penned...
full of emotions...
that diary's part was written perfectly...
but it's gonna be a very painful story I guess...
I hope all mu gets clear soon...
just cannot imagine Neil doing this...
he must be going through a lot...
otherwise he wouldn't have taken such a drastic step...
do update soon

can't wait for the story to unfold

Heyyaa Sneha
Thank you for commenting...
This comment is very encouraging
Glad you are liking the story...
Mu will get cleared soon
Stay tuned🤗

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