AvNeil TS: Main Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga(Epilogue updated on Page 17)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome..

Thenks...😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

I'm the latest of all late lateef

I read the day you posted but forgot to reply . I'm really sorry

Best way to end the story . I loved the entire part ESP Ali . Ali - Avni's friendship is goals . If it hadn't been him maybe AvNeil would have separated . You are wonderful with dialogues .👏

Why on earth should Avni feel she doesn't deserve him after it seems like ages the have accepted their love . But that small part too was perfectly penned .

And wedding scenario was million dollar 😳 And Ali pulling Neil's legs was fun .

Tu likh rahi hai kuch aur kyunki dil mange more😃

lots of love 🤗 And forgive me for being so late . Best friendship day present one could give !

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: taarey25
amazing

Thank you so much!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: AgnesFan
I'm the latest of all late lateef
I read the day you posted but forgot to reply . I'm really sorry
Best way to end the story . I loved the entire part ESP Ali . Ali - Avni's friendship is goals . If it hadn't been him maybe AvNeil would have separated . You are wonderful with dialogues .👏
Why on earth should Avni feel she doesn't deserve him after it seems like ages the have accepted their love . But that small part too was perfectly penned .

And wedding scenario was million dollar 😳 And Ali pulling Neil's legs was fun .

Tu likh rahi hai kuch aur kyunki dil mange more😃
lots of love 🤗 And forgive me for being so late . Best friendship day present one could give !

Arrey yaar its Ok! Happens with me too😆

No need to say sorry... I am happy that you all liked the story❤️

Your comment is always very lovely and touching!

Yeah I particularly wanted to focus on their friendship...I adore it a lot...

Avni ko tubelight dikhana tha isiliye aisa likha😆

Glad you liked the wedding part!

I will write something soon!!!

Awww glad I gave you a friendship day present

Lots Lots Lots of Love❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

superb upt
loved it so much
keep writting more

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: aishwarya12joys
Awesome ff

Thanks Aish😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: srividhya68
superb upt
loved it so much
keep writting more

Thank you so much!!!

Will try to write more soon😊

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
awesome story loved it

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Posted: 7 years ago

#129

Amazing story yaar!

Absolutely loved it!

What a coincidence here also Neil left her at alter and in serial too Neil left her at alter and reason is Juhi only. Here she is dead while in serial she attempt suicide...

Superb!

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