AvNEIL FF:Woh Humsafar Tha(Chapter21 pg33 parts1-2-3 pg 34,updated)

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#91

awesome upt
loved it
why just avni cant let him speak for once...she always keeps running from the problems
waiting for the next upt
cont soon

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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Res

Will Unres after sometime.. Lots of thing to write...

Unres...

First of all, Yeayyy... Update aaya update aaya...

Finally koi toh dekha Avni ko Mumbai mein...

And i was too happy that it was Amol..

Not Amol, now he is Avni's Aman...

And that was so cute scene when Ash was tugging Aman's shirt and was saying, "Leave, she is my mom"(something like that, not exactly remember the line while writing).. But it was so so so cute.. Possessive Chhotu Neil.. Hahahahaha..

And then that Aman and Ash bonding..

Cool Mamu ka Cool Bhatija.. Hehehehe.. I can just imagine that scene..

And then finally the most awaited scene was here..

AvNeil ka aamna saamna...

The way Neil said 'Avni' and they both were not believing their eyes...

And then Avni went into her cold exterior..

It was so hurtful to see Neil like that.. Avni just once hear him out.. Bas ek baar toh Tillu ko sun lo..

And then Neil's outburst.. And that followed by Avni's..

Uff each line was just awesome..

Superrr se bhi uparrr...

But the most catching line was Neil's, " I have a wife to talk"... Hayeee

Ab mera Tillu Avni ko wapas pyaar krwaega..

It will be treat to read them...

So please please please, update soon se bhi soon..

Can't wait..

Surprise us.. And do teen update de daal..

Hahahahahaha..

But seriously update soon..

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#93

wow I love boss chic's 😆😆 And yeah Avni will be just perfect in that avtar .

As you said it's a big day of reunion . So if Aman met her he will surely convey to Neela n everyone will get to know . and also Neil has met her . So it's gonna be emotional rollercoaster .

nice way to run away from ones emotion . act cold .

I just loved the line I'm the boss here and I can show you out . dagger ! and purposely she greets DD

So now baki reh gaya Ash n Neil ka proper meeting .

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Asr_Kkg122

@Asr_Kkg122

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Just read the update and it's AMAZING!!!!👏👏 finally Avneil met thank you so much for that 😳 I just loved how you explained avni's feeling! WOH MAN!!! she is such a BOSS!!!😉😉😆 keep writing like this Norma ur a WONDERFUL writer! Lots of love to you and your FF!! ❤️🤗 and yah update jaldi karnaaa 😆😆

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NormaAra

@NormaAra

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Naina_Arora
You are such a sweetheart.. Thank's for dearly considering me.. you made their meeting is a lovely one. I loved it to the core.. Anvi's attitude is❤️
So, again my next demand is onn..
I want Avni to introduce Neil as father his father infront of Ashneel..
Will be waiting for next chappy..
Loads and loads of love to you..

thanks😳 for the awesome comments. and your love.❤️

your demand is accepted and I'm working on it.

Have to wait for next chapter.🤔

I couldn't write anything in advance for next so. but will update soon.

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NormaAra

@NormaAra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Kshailja
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Will Unres after sometime.. Lots of thing to write...

sure take your time.😆

I specially wait for your comments. 😃

they can be very enlightening some time.😉

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NormaAra

@NormaAra

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
wow I love boss chic's 😆😆 And yeah Avni will be just perfect in that avtar .
As you said it's a big day of reunion . So if Aman met her he will surely convey to Neela n everyone will get to know . and also Neil has met her . So it's gonna be emotional rollercoaster .
nice way to run away from ones emotion . act cold .
I just loved the line I'm the boss here and I can show you out . dagger ! and purposely she greets DD
So now baki reh gaya Ash n Neil ka proper meeting .

Had to show girl power. Boss chic is kind of badass.😉

Mere liye sare comments were about reunion.😆 so I had to like "lo jile apni zindagi"

Well we have to see about who tells who but as I can say 'some knowledge can be dangerous too.'

and Neil is a different story.

Definitely, the rollercoaster is started and it always goes up and up.

A reunion pending already. 😆 we will see.

thanks for your cool comments.😊

always waiting for more.😳

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NormaAra

@NormaAra

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Ayesha134
Just read the update and it's AMAZING!!!!👏👏 finally Avneil met thank you so much for that 😳 I just loved how you explained avni's feeling! WOH MAN!!! she is such a BOSS!!!😉😉😆 keep writing like this Norma ur a WONDERFUL writer! Lots of love to you and your FF!! ❤️🤗 and yah update jaldi karnaaa 😆😆

Again thanks for all your love and comments. 😃

Ya. our awaited reunion. well people were dying😉 and I couldn't let that happen😆.

well had to change Avni from dependent to bold and bossy. its sexy.😎

have to wait for the update🤔 but will upload soon.

till then.lots of love.🤗