O tere sang yaara (PART 5 FINAL) UPDATED PAGE 13) - Page 3

Originally posted by: zaara610

Amazing updates.. loved it..😛

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..

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Originally posted by: shikhsk

I feel like sharing this that today when I was working out this song played n right that moment I remembered ur story...see the impact of ur story on me

Oh wow thank you so so so much for sharing this because its the sweetest thing I've ever received. I'm on cloud nine knowing my writing has impacted someone. Thank you so much for all the support and love, thank you. That is so lovely.

It's awesome
Loved it so much
Well beautifully written
Everything was so amazing
Aww...you are so so bad...why did you killed my Neil poor Avni ... 😭
Everyone is killing in Neil in their ff,rs,os and even you did the same
I hate you 😭

But you described everything so beautifully
👏

Amazing
Update next part soon 😛

Hey guys, I'm sorry this update is really late. I really really realy hope you all enjoy it, Ireally have put a ton of effort in to this and I would really appreciate if you guys could leave a like or a comment telling me what you think, good or bad... it would really made the work behind it all worth it. Thank you for taking the time to read it. Hope you enjoy...

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maine chode hain baaki saare raste

bas aaya hoon tere paas re

meri aankhon mein tera naam hai

pehchaan le...

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Avni laid on the bed clutching on to her now big belly, with a frown on her face. Neil sat at the foot of the bed, slowly massaging her feet gently, watching her in concern.

Neil- Ek jhanta hogaya aur tum abhi bhi mujhse baat nahi kar rahi hu... mainne kya kiya?

She pursed her lips like an adamant child, picking up the pillow beside her and chucking it at his face. He gasps as it smacks him in the face. She lightens up and giggles endlessly.

Neil- Hey bhagwaan (he mutters under his breath.) Iske mood swings mujhe maar doonga...

Avni- (She glared at him and he froze in fear, cowering.) Tuhne kuch bola!? Hello mister mein pregnant hu, deaf nahi...

Neil- Mein bus bol rahi thi ki... ki... tu aaj kitni khubsurat dikh rahi hu... (he smiled awkwardly with an open gesture.)

Avni- Jhoot bolne ke liye zarowath nahi hai! Mein ek tapad tera mu par maaru kya?! (She pointed a finger at him with intimidating eyes. He shook his head with adorable child-like scared eyes.)

Bebe appeared at their door, hearing all the noise.

Bebe- Aarey aarey... sab shaant hoga... kya hua idhaar?

Avni- Bebe... (she pouted cutely and Bebe immediately rushed to her in care.) Mein aap ke haath se bana hua laddo khana chaati thi aur yeh idiot mujhe khane ko nahi deh raha hai!

Bebe- itini choote se baat? Sad mat ho...Mein meri pyaari bahu ke liye abhi abhi fresh laddoo bana ke leeti hu (avni smiled as Bebe stood up to leave but Neil stood up and held her hand to stop her.) What is it tillu?

Neil- Mein abhi dekh liya ki aap humesha tumare ladli bahu ki side main hu, tumhare tillu ki nahi (He frowned like a baby, and bebe pinched his ear playfully.)

Bebe- Of course, after all she is carrying my pyaar sa baccha na? Tu kya kar rahi hu nalayak? (Neil pouted cutely.) Now let me go and make...

Neil- Nahi bebe, doctor bola hai ki avni ko too much sugar nahi kha sakta hai, wo mujhe sun ne ke liye tayaar nahi hai aur proper khana nahi kha raha hai. Bolo usko bebe, maa bane wala hai aur phir bhi wo bacche ki tarah tantrum kar raha hai! (He spoke in a panic, exactly like an over protective husband which made Bebe smile in amusement.)

Bebe- Ek baar ke liye uske chood do Neil... one time won't hurt (He frowned reluctantly.) Aur mujhe bhi mere bahu ke liye kuch meri haatho se bana ne chati hu. Okay tillu? (He looked at Avni's expectant face and gave up, nodding.) Wonderful! (Then suddenly her face changed as she remembered something.) oh damn it. Mujhe maaf kardo avni beta we've run out of sugar... (She looked sad and apologetic.)

Avni- Its okay bebe (Neil looked at his wife. She tried to sound gracious but she was extremely hormonal and this slight disspointment made her eyes well up with tears. And Neil could stand every pain on earth, but not Avni's tears.)

Neil- Nahi bebe, its okay. (He looked at the clock, it was 10 pm. But he looked back to see Avni trying to hide her tears- the time didn't matter.) Mein abhi dukhaan jaake cheene kared ke le aati hu...

Avni- Neil? (avni frowned in concern, but Neil just smiled back at her reassuringly. Bebe smiled knowingly and signed for Neil to go.)

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Avni literally inhaled the ladhoos into her system, not stopping to breathe between her bites. Neil sat cross legged on the bed, happily admiring the glow of joy on her face. He wanted to see her this way forever, she had suffered too much now. Avni finally stopped eating to look up at Neil. Realisation gloomed on to her face.

Avni- Shit. Yaar... tujhe bhuk lag rahe hai? (She stared at him in concern, Neil just shook his head with a smile.)

Neil- Tu kha... (Yet Avni still shoved the laddoo in to his open mouth, suprising him. Avni laughed seeing his shocked face while she wiped away the crumbs of food that surrounded his mouth.) Tu bhi yaar... pagli... (He smiled at her affectionately.)

Avni- (She rubbed her belly with a cute sad face.) Mujhe abhi bhi bhuk laga raha hai

Neil- I told you to eat it instead right? My god Avni! What will i do with you, 24/7 hungry...

Avni- Hey! I have to feed 2 people now... And you never let me eat proper food... (She frowned angrily but then Neil pinched her nose and shook it making her giggle.)

Neil- Mein bus tumhare sehat ka chinta hai meri ma... (He held his ears like a school child but Avni surpressed her smile which confused Neil.)

Avni- kitna jhoot bolunga? I thought tum bohot sacch ka saath dene wala aadmi ho? (She narrowed her eyes at him.)

Neil- Mein sacch hi bhol rahi hu!?

Avni- bakwaas...Tumhe meri parvah nahi hai! Tumhe bus tumare baccha ki baare mein pareshaan ho... (She stuck her tongue out at Neil.) and because of that now you are making me miserable with all these healthy drinks and salads and making me sit in bed all day and do nothing... hmph. (She scrunched up her nose cutely and grunted in frustration., Neil tried to hold in his laughter and tried to look serious.) Maybe I shouldn't have gotten pregnant... tum mujhe pehele pyaar kartha tha, aur ab dekh... torture kar rahi ho mujhe!

Neil- Aree baba pagal hogaya kya... (He laughed as he kissed her cheek sweetly making her smile.) mein kabhi tumhe pyaar karne band nahi kar saktha... even if I want to...

Avni- (She leaned in to him, and he closed his eyes expecting a kiss in return.) You better not. (She whispered with her classic determined challenging stare he loves.)

Neil- haan haan... I wont... (He says brushing it off, tucking her in to bed and fluffing up her pillows.) Abhi sau jao... mein jaake kuch kaam karti hu...

Avni- par bus 10:30 hogaya yaar... (She whined.)

Neil- Avni... Mein akri baar bol rahi hu, mein pehele bola tha ki sleeping late is not good during pregnancy, (he threatened, raising an eyebrow.)

She pulled the blanket over her head, sighing. She hated being forced to sleep while he is not by her side and goes to his study.

Avni- fine. Dekh kuch bhi bolte... 'mein kabhi tumhe pyaar karne band nahi kar saktha' blah blah blah... saach me wo mujhe force karte ho... (She mumbles and mimics under her breath.)

Neil smiles and shakes his head before turning off the lights as he leaves the room.

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sab kuch mere liye tere baad hai

sau baaton ki ik baat hai

main na jaunga kabhi tujhe chood ke

ye jaan le

O karam khudaya hai

tera pyar jo paaya hai

tujhpe marke hi toh

mujhe jeena aaya hai

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DD picked up his phone looking at Neil who was working at his desk but not putting his mind in to it, DD knew he was feeling restless leaving Avni at home without him.

Avni- Hi DD (She smiled brightly, she was stretched out on the sofa and panting slightly, feeling a little nauseous.)

DD- (He smiled happily and in excitement.) Hi bhabhi! Kaisi hu aap aur mera pyaar sa chotu? (Neil immediately snapped up his head to look at DD, and then looked slightly dissapointment. He had been turning on the screen of his phone every five seconds to check if he had missed a text or a call- why didn't she call him? DD glanced at Neil from the corner of his eye, typing dejectedly and smiled a little.) Kyu bulurahi hu mujhe? Bhaiyya se baat karne? (Neil looked up again with hope filling his eyes.)

Avni- Mein sacch me bohot bored hu yaar mujhe company chaata hu. Maa, nanno, rhea, mithali... sab log unreachable hai, ghar se sab log bahar gaya hai... aur Neil doesn't like me inviting over Ali without him. Kya mein Neil se baat karna chaata hu ? Bilkhul nahi... mein saar mein dard ho raha hai, im not in the mood to hear his nagging DD. Wo khao, wo tusso, kaam mat karo, all day bed mein beto... uske hi waje se mein itini bored hu...

DD- (He chuckled at her childishness, watching the still expectant Neil.) Okay okay, I wont give it to bhaiyya if you don't want to talk to him. (DD falls back in to his seat and puts his feet up on to his desk, while Neil gasps hearing that Avni didn't want to talk to him.) Bolo bhabi how can I entertain you? Sorry okay par mujhe gossip karna nahi aata... (he and avni laughed and Neil now angrily tapped at his keyboard making loud clunky noises and turning up his nose in frustration.)

Avni- (She felt a metallic tasting bile travel up her throat and sat up straight as she swallowed it back, holding her dizzy head. DD frowned at the retching noise.) teek hai na DD, mujhe bhi gossip nahi aata... Kaam kaise chal raha hai?

DD- Acche se chal raha hai bhabi par- (Avni shot up as she felt vomit slide up her throat, she sprinted to the bathroom, doubled over the toilet bowl and retched as she vomited repeatedly.) Bhabhi! Aap teek hai?!

Before DD coud hear her reply, in quicker than a split second Neil had snatched the phone from his hand after sprinting over from his desk with a face of absolute horror.

Neil- Avni!? What happened!? (He could hear her gagging and heaving and DD smiled seeing how tears of worry came in to Neil's eyes, and seeing his love for her.) Avni!

Avni managed to wipe away at her mouth and collect herself for a second to try and comfort and calm Neil.

Avni- Arrey mera jaanu... mein bilkhul teek hu yaar, morning sickness sab hota hai pregnancy- (she puked again and the sound of disgoring made his heart race.)

Neil- Nahi mein abhi abhi aa rahi hu... Stay on the phone okay avni? Are you dizzy? (He got ready to leave at the speed of lightening as he panicked.)

Avni- Mein teek hu Neil... (She sighed at his over reaction.)

Neil- Answer my question... are you dizzy? (He spoke in a stern voice, frowning in worry.)

Avni- Haan thoda sa. (She spoke defeatedly, giving up in fatigue.)

Neil- avni! Mein bola tha ki mein aaj leave leenga.. Ghar ka sab log kaha gaya?

Avni- Shopping- (She was cut off by another belching of vomit.)

DD- (Neil sprinted to rush to his avni, unable to withstand hearing her sick. DD called out behind him.) Bhaiyya meri phone!

Neil- DD chup kar... mein wapas deenga next time... (DD sighed with a smile seeing a teary eyed concerned Neil jump in to the car and zoom off, chattering in to the phone.)

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Neil rubbed her back gently, holding up her, and frowned at her state as she finished vomiting. She fell to the floor in fatigue, leaning against Neil who immediately embraced her to him stroking her arms comfortingly. Her eyes were shut in dizziness.

Neil- Mein doctor ko bularahi hu. (He declared starting to stand up. Avni hit him in the arm roughly.)

Avni- Kyu nahi sun rahi hu meri baat mr ziddi! I told you all this is normal... dont waste the poor doctors time...

Neil- But avni... mujhe dhar lag raha hai tumhe is haal mein dekh kar (Avni heart broke and was warmed seeing his scared expression and care, she sagged in tiredness.)

Avni- Mein teek hu... bus mujhe bed mein lee gawu, agar mujhe thoda rest mil gaya mein bilkhul teek honga... (Neil frowned, unconvinced, but lifted her easily in his hands bridal style and placed her on the bed softly.)

Avni looked up at Neil who leaned over her and fussed around her, still chewing his lips in concern. She sighed as she looped her arms around his neck to make him face her. He raised her eyebrows at her as if asking 'what?'. She just smiled at him innocently.

Avni- Batao muhje, meri handsome super cop... hum hamare bacche ko kya naam rakhne chaiye? (She tried to change the topic to cheer him up.)

A gradual smile appeared on to Neil's face as he thought about it for a while, admiring his wife at the same time, watching the love she held for him in her enchanting eyes and the way she refused to let go of him the entire time. He smiled with an idea.

Neil- Humare ek prince hogaya tho Nishaan, aur agar hum ko ek princess hogaya tho Nishaani

Avni- (Her eyes turned glassy in happiness she couldn't explain.) wo naam bohot khubsurat hai neil... par kyu ?

Neil laid down beside her, propping himself up against the headboard. He put his arm around her side and she leaned in to him. She placed her head on to his chest, neil rested his chin on her head after placing a love filled kiss against it.

Neil- (he reached his arm that wrapped round her to touch her stomach.) Kyunki meri wifey... humare bacche hum ka pyaar ki nishaan hai na? (Avni shut her eyes as tears of emotion spilled out, she nodded. she snuggled in to the cranny between his neck and head. He gently stroked her hair.)

Avni- mujhe pyaar karne ke liye thank you Neil... (She whispered leaving a smile on Neil's face.) Par when i wake up... you better have gone back to work okay? Im not a kid that you stay at home and miss work for me...

She complains like his usual wifey does, murmuring nonsense in to his neck and he just sits and enjoys the music of her voice.

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O tere sang yaara

khushrang bahara

tu raat deewani

main zard sitaara

O tere sang yaara

khushrang bahara

main behta musafir

tu Thehra kinara

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Bebe and Shweta had arranged Neil's college reunion at their house so that his old friends can meet his new family- avni and their baby. The house had been lightly decorated and shone in an atmospheric pink glow but Neil's eyes (or anybody's) couldn't peel away from Avni as she walked down the stairs.

She looked stunning, as if she was a carved statue of a goddess. Her face was radiating that motherhood glow as her long eyelashes fluttered highlighting her big doe-like lined eyes. And she wore that killer smile on her full pink lips. She wore baby blue gown with a tight upper half and that clung to her sculpted hips, the back was sheer showing her milky white complexion and beautiful back, and the v cut was low enough to allow some cleaverage to peer through. Her hair was in a loose updo, some strands framed her face and tickled against her collarbone teasingly. The men were doing double takes watching her walk down the stairs, and some women had curled lips of envy. A proud and breathless smile was stuck to Neil's face, this gorgeous woman was his and his only, and his favourite part was her now slightly protuding belly that held their baby because that truly marked her as his ...

He rushed over to her, after being frozen in breathtaking shock for a few seconds, to help her down the stairs. He held her tightly around the waist, possesively, as if claiming her as his. The girls around didnt like this, Neil made every girl swoon back in their college days... and today too, especially today in his tight blue vest, and his white shirt with a few buttons undone that teased his toned chest. And his ruffled bed hair that they were dying to run their hands through.

He leaned down to Avni's ear to whisper something just to her, her skin tingled feeling his hot breath against it.

Neil- Aaj raat sab ko sambhal ke rehna hoga, kyunki meri wifey is looking dangerously hot today... (Avni smiled shyly and Neik smirked against her skin.)

Avni hit him in the chest playfully as he led her to sit on the sofas, where everybody had congregated. Bebe shook her head with a knowing smile at their constant intimacy, even in public these two couldnt keep their hands off each other.

Avni- Mein hamesha dangerously hot nahi hu? (She whispered back with a joking pout.)

Neil- Haan hai... par aaj itini log hai ki unbearable horaha hai... (He pouted back cutely but Avni stared at him in confusion.)

Avni- Matlab?

Neil- Matlab I'm struggling to keep my hands off you yaar... if these useless people weren't here, don't you know what i would do with you? (He winked mischeviously making her gasp in shock, she freed himself from his grip in embarassment as they sat down.)

Avni- Besharam... mein maa bane wale ho aur tum ek papa...

Neil- (he smiled naughtily.) Exactly... because of what i did with you only right?

Avni went pink and had to hold herself back from facepalming herself, the guests just watched the couple expectantly.

Neil- Oh yes. (He recovered finally returning to his senses.) This is my beautiful wife... Avni... aur uske pet mein hai meri cutie baccha... (His smile glittered as he introduced Avni to all his friends, avni shook hands with all of them with her gracious smile.)

One man, Adarsh, leaned in to Avni too much fot Neil's liking. Avni leaned away slightly, with an awkward smile.

Adarsh- Bohot jyaada khubsurat lag rahi hu tum... (She felt uncomfortable at his suggestive smile and wandering eyes and clung to Neil's hand tightly.)

Neil shoved him back away from her with a very pointed smile.

Neil- Bhabi. (Adarsh frowned at him in confusion.) Bohot jyaada khubsurat lag rahi hu tum bhabhi. Wo bhabhi hai tumhara...Understand? (Adarsh could feel the heat of his glare and the strength in those fists and gritted teeth and so he retreated and sat down, Avni smiled at Neil gratefully as they sat down.)

Neil- tum aisa kapada kyu pehen thi hu? (He frowned at her in frustration as they spoke under their breath.)

Avni- but you were just saying that I'm looking-

Neil- I know, but look around... dekho all these men kaise dekh rahi hai meri biwi ko (She smiled at his protectiveness and tried to hide with her hand the way she kissed his cheek from the guests, turning his frown in to a smile.)

Avni- par dekh? Tere biwi sirf tum ko dekh rahi ho na?... (Neil grinned at her ,in his usual way that made her heart melt and her knees weak, holding her closer to his side.)

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Avni was suddenly feeling extremely sufforcated in this room, and a frown was plastered to her face. She was getting frustrated seeing the girls with their gaga eyes at him and overacted giggles and how they found baseless excuses to touch him and what angered her the most was that he wasnt bothered.

Neil spotted that Avni looked a little flustered but figured it was because of the heat in the room and her pregnant state. He reached out to get her a cup of orange juice of the coffee table. Diya purposely reached over at the same time with a sly smile, her fingers brushed his hand, Neil barely felt it but Avni definitely saw it and it enraged her. She reached over and held his hand that held the cup, subtly shoving Diya's fingers off it. Diya eyed her jealously as did all the other girls, Neil looked at Avni in question, she smiled sickly sweet.

Avni- Juice chaata tha tumhe meri jaanu... mujhe batane chaiya tha, mein pillati hu (Neil made an extremely weird confused face at her weirdly romantic behaviour, everybody else had become silent and had their eyes on them.)

Neil- Nahi avni... Mein dekh rahi thi ki tum bohot garmi lag rahi hu tho I was getting it for you.. (He watched her warily. Avni smiled at Diya who frowned seeing Neil's concern for Avni, which bothered all the other jealous girls in the room too.)

Avni- Oh okay, aww tum mujhe itna parvah karti hu mera pyaara sa pati... (Neil fed her the drink, almost in a plea to keep her quiet, he had ever seen her behave this way before.)

Neil- kya hogaya miss ajooba? Kya chaal raha tumare dimaag mein? (He stared at her with narrowed interogative eyes, avni looked scared for a second but then suddenly began to straighten his already straight collar and neaten his hair running her hands through it, making him even more confused.)

Avni- Itini childish ho tum... collar be correctly nahi pehen the?

'par tumare mumma abhi isse pehele hamare kamre mein tho wo meri collar teek kiya tha? Phir se kyu kar rahi ho? Yeh sab wo karmre mein hi karthe hai hamesha... koi chaal hai miss ajooba ki dimaag mein... hai na mera bacchu?' he thought. Then he saw Avni throws a shady smile at a reddening diya and it occurred to him. He smirked knowingly.

He grabbed her arms that were playing with his collar and used them to pull her closer, avni's heart raced slightly, hoping he hadn't realised her motives.

Neil- Oho! Mujhe laktha hai... I need to make you jealous more often... all the romance that I begged for all this time you are showing today. Nice wifey (He winked at her, making her turn bright red in embarassment. She frowned and looked away.)

Avni- Mujhe kuch jalan nahi aa raha hai... kuch bhi...

Neil- (he hugged her from behind, her back pressing against his chest. He rested his chin on her shoulder as he whispered in to her ear, which obviously made all the girls annoyed.) Dekh Diya ko jalan aa raha hai, anshu ko jalan aa raha hai, chandini ko bhi, sab ladkio ko jalan aa raha hai, tasali mili tum ko? (He smiled at her cute ashamed face as he spoke animatedly.)

Avni- pfft... arrogant much... Wo sab log kyu jalega? Tum koi superstar hu ki wo log sab hum ko dekh kar jealous hoga? (She tried to move out of his tight grip because it started drawing her in and she hated losing.)

Neil- (he chuckled at her and just gave up whisering, let the whole room witness their conversation. He held her belly and look down at it as he talked.) Mumma ko dekh, jhoot bol rahi hai... jhooti hai wo...

Avni- Hey! Tum mera bacche ko meri kilaaf batkar rahi ha! Tumare nalayak papa ko suno mat, wo hi jhoot bhol rahi hai teek hai? (She pouted at him, putting her hand over his on her belly. Some were jealous and others were grinning at their cute fighting.)

Neil- usko samjani ki koshish karna bekhaar hai avni... wo mera baat hi sunega... wo papa ki bacche hai na?

Avni- Kya bakwaas bol rahi hu idiot? Mumma ka bacche hai wo... (She smiled at him proudly, he made his lips a thin line of playful anger.)

Neil- nahi! Mera baccha mujhe most pyaar karthi hu! hai na beta? (She pushed his hand away from her stomach in annoyance.)

Avni- Nahi wo mujhe zyaada pyaar karthi hu...

Bebe- Areey mere bacche.. Sab log tum dono dekh rahi hai... kuch sharam karo. Tumare pyaar ko tumhe aande bana diya hai... jaldi se tumare ladai katam karo na?

They both blushed pink as they looked around at their friends who had all fallen silent and were watching them in awe or in anger , they laughed awkwardly.

Neil- Okay okay (he muttered to her under her breath.) argument sab bhul do...

Avni- Bilkhul nahi... pehele sorry bolo... (She muttered back, he smiled and gave up seeing her adorable stubborn face.)

Neil- Mujhe maaf kardo meri maharani... mujhse galti hogaya, mein aur humare baccha tumse hi sabse jyaada pyaar karthi hu... teek hai madam? (He signed her to smile and she smiled back slightly, hitting his arm.)

Avni- haan haan maaf diya mein... par only this time. Your charm won't win me over every time okay? (Neil smiled pleased at himself, hearing that he had charm from his ladylove, she shook her head at his cute childish vanity with a smile.)

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Nurse- Doctor wo gayab hogaya ...

Doctor- What? But I told you he cannot be realeased under any circumstances!

Nurse- I'm sorry sir... but he signed the release forms himself...

TBC

avni's dress

Omgggh lovely...love the cute romance between these two.neil s concern for his wife.DD entertaining his bhabhi. N loved party sequence...wowww

Originally posted by: shikhsk

Omgggh lovely...love the cute romance between these two.neil s concern for his wife.DD entertaining his bhabhi. N loved party sequence...wowww

Hey This was amazing...Loved it

Originally posted by: pri12

Hey This was amazing...Loved it

Loved AvNeil romance and their talks with their baby

And The jealous Avni is a treat to watch😆

Who ran away from hospital?

Is it same terrorist who killed Neil

P.S I dont want this to be a sad story...

Originally posted by: Ravinanaik

Lovely update.

thank you so much... im so glad you enjoyed it,thank you for commenting