O tere sang yaara (PART 5 FINAL) UPDATED PAGE 13)

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shikhsk
N also I love ur song choice ... beautifully used

Thank you so much... I'm very glad that you liked the flashback and song. I just thought the song will give it a very atmospheric feel. Thank you again

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Starfish03
Oh gosh my heart stopped lovely os on these two truly heart touching well done and keep doing more they always brighten up my day :)

Aww thank you thats soo sweet. Im so glad that something i type up during my free time can brighten your day, that makes me so happy. And your praisea are way to nice! Thanks for the support... please look out for the next 3/4 updates 😊

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Amazing start
And superb update
Neil is killed by Daya no I can't believe it
Waiting for next update

Zainab

Thank you so much... im really glad you liked it. Hmm lets see what happens right? Of course, I'll post asap xxx

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: vu1998
Yaar Shreya your hindi is cutest...
I literally cried in first part... But a smile was plastered on my face for rest of the post..
Or haan jhuth bolna baap nahi paap hota hai🤣
The way you described Avni with the child... Fab yaar...
Please bring him back...
The way Neil reacted after Ali dancing with his wife.. Beautifully written...
You always write a power pack post..
Tillu will surely be the bestest father..
I m waiting for it to continue...
Lots of love...
Vihu...

Thank you vihu! Aww i didnt want you to cry but I'm glad that my writing could convey all the emotions correctly, like your wriring always does.

Oh shit yaar 🤣 i know that too! I dont even know what i wad thinking while writing

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Your comments always make me feel over the moon and your praiaes are too sweet... i dont deserve the. Bring him back? We'll see... 😉

Im update asap for you all, thank you so much

Shreya

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: vidz2122
neil ko maar ne jaldi hai sab ko kya ?? but last two was wondrful .. realy wondrfl ... first one ... you kild me

Im sorry... i know... i know... its hurt to kill him. But we'll see what happens later right? Thank you so much for those praises they made my day. Please look out for my next update xx

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srinithi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

it was so good😭😭

par Neil ko Mar kyu diya wo bhi Dayawanti ke jariye wo apni bache ko dekna ka Pal nahi jee sakta💔

I really loved it so much🤗you were so good

ESP when he finds Avni is pregnant 😳👏

update sooner . I think this is gonna be ff😆

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Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
it was so good😭😭
par Neil ko Mar kyu diya wo bhi Dayawanti ke jariye wo apni bache ko dekna ka Pal nahi jee sakta💔
I really loved it so much🤗you were so good
ESP when he finds Avni is pregnant 😳👏
update sooner . I think this is gonna be ff😆

Aww thank you so much...

I know its heartbreaking but i felt it makes the flashbacks even more precious. But lets see what happens in the end right?

Thank you so much you are the sweetest...

Of course, asap...

Haha an ff? Mhmm...Maybe...

Hope to see you commenting on my next update xx

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Ravina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Neil ko zinda karo

BTW i loved u r story

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shikha

@shikhsk

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

I feel like sharing this that today when I was working out this song played n right that moment I remembered ur story...see the impact of ur story on me