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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

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Wicked_Dreamer

@msm98

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

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Ohh god V!!! Neil will know about her real identity? Shit! I am soo excited. Please update next part sooon. Cliffhanger, the part is.
Honest confession of ur reader
When dr ssks her name and she says Avni, I literally paused reading for a second, my mouth wide open, eyes..ready to pop outta their sockets.
Dayyum!! I am greedy reader of ur stories. Do update soon.
Also, ur another story The World Is Ours. Plz update that part as well. 😳 (Greedy reader I am)
-Matty

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Somewhatwriter

@Somewhatwriter

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Ending the story within the month? Aw damn... I completely understand but its so sad... your writing is sensational, this story is irreplaceable. And this is chapter and that cliffhanger... my god! Wow! It was just stunningly, so vividly written. Please update as soon as possible, but also remember to update the world is ours, that was another desperation inducing cliffhanger. But also take the time you need, good luck with moving back and final year and everything... best of luck V

Shreya xxx

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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

It's really amazing...

Neil concern for Ananya or better say Avni...

So, finally Avni/Ananya mystery will be resolved..

Waiting for that...

And we too want them to date.. Eagerly...

All the best for your Final year...

And we are waiting here for the next update, take your time but not too long...

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

DAMNNN AVNI AYESHA???? oh man

All the best for your moving 🤗

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BB_CallmeC

@BB_CallmeC

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Fudggeee! This is torture! You really had to end it there!
Man you know how to keep your readers gripped to your stories! Amazing update!
Can't wait for the next one

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pri12

@pri12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

Oh My My!!. u always manage to give me surprise...I had goosebumps when she said AVNI...She is related to Mehta clan..Neil will come to know about her identity know

He will surely question her and if she does not give satisfactory answers he will dig the past

I am eager to know neil's reaction...

plz continue soon

P.S All the best for your final year 😳

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vidya dasan

@vidz2122

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

small updates ..

😭

buut small and perfect yaar ... its too good 😳

finaly neil found out avni's identity .. pls updater soon

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Arisha

@lol_rofl

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Veee!!!

What was that??😲 You end the chapter with such a hell cliffhanger, damn it!! *hyperventilating*

AVNI AYESHA???? WOAH MAN WOAH!!

What a brilliant way to solve this mystery girl. I never thought that concussion will lead to this, i just thought Neil will be afraid to lose her and I don't know this story has Juhi in it or not but Neil will be super scared but you... you just rocked everything!! Your storyline is going damn amazing!

But that rascal was not sent by Ketan, so who was behind it? Hope this question will be answered when Neil and DD will do the meeting.

In the last finally you gave your further cast's pics, WOW Arjun Shinde and Fatima Bano, nice choice you have V, salute to your imagination and hard work for it!

V well best if luck for your finals, but can i say update soon?? *greedy reader*

Edited by lol_rofl - 8 years ago