AvNeil FF: A Fate Intertwined NEW THREAD PAGE 27 - Page 16

Hey Again
Happy to see the comments and support😃

Loved and enjoyed both Chapters⭐️
I cannot get enough of telling you just how much I love these intricate details. The thought and effort you give to this, is outstanding👏👏.

Ananya was in a terrible state and yet managed to stay focussed and participate in a conversation with Neil⭐️.
Ketan is definitely not as straight forward and simple to understand. I wonder what is his real agenda here?!
This Shinde dude seems cool. His interruption at the end made me scared too..

I was so sure the bas***d was sent from Ketan to harm Avni. Excited for this new angle
Poor Neil is also injured but he is worried for Avni. Hope she will be okay
My eyes flew wide open when she responded to her name being Avni. I couldn't believe it and thought, oh hell, she's busted, game up.
But then it's Neil and he is no villian and your end note gave me some relief.

I'm sad to know this story is ending soon. But I guess it's best when it's to the point. And atleast you want to complete it. Thank you for being so considerate to your readers🤗.
All the best for your final year. Hope you rock 🤗

sorry for late comments
fabulous updates
suspense getting increased
waiting for the next chapter
cont soon

No events ..

nice upt
setting the stage for bigger events
waiting for next part
cont soon

This chapter was needed to built the base for upcoming chapters..Loved it

Neil's being restless. You penned down his inner turmoil so well. Even the 'DD-Neil-Arjun' scene was so much fun to read.
Matty

Awesome Part👏
Enjoyed the exchange between Neil and DD⭐️. Neils frustration and obsession (oblivious to himself, ofcourse) with 'Ananya' was wonderfully described👍🏼.
Enjoyed it even more when Shinde joined it😎. It was so cool how he casually announced Ananya as Neil's gf😆... Poor Neil😆
I'm also excited for the bet😉. Amidst all the intensity and danger, there's this cute and light-hearted angle😃.

Hospital scene was lovely too
Wonder what conversation these 2 will have in the next part...
Hope they progress😆

Take care

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Dear i haven't read ur before posts , like the kiss of avneil that u mentioned here. Can u tell me what happened and how there kiss happened in brief?