AvNeil FF: A Fate Intertwined NEW THREAD PAGE 27 - Page 13

Damn, such a fantastic part👏👏

Ananya and Neil going head to head was freaking awesome😎. I didn't imagine I would enjoy them like this👍🏼. Both were right in their own way but I'll very slightly take Neil's side. I dislike that she put herself in danger and see what happened towards the end. It was terrifying😭. I usually don't like fighting and especially violence, but this was superb. Thank goodness Neil showed up. I'm wondering if he'll give it nice and solid to her later on and say I told you so, not because of ego but care
I love Mithali's spirit⭐️. Such a brave soul. I enjoyed her character👍🏼.
Surely Ketan must have heard of Neil being such an honest, no nonsense cop and yet he's beginning to trust him? Sounds weird and good😆.
I felt terrible for Ananya😭. She has issues which is why she is so fierce and independent. It's not all bad but yeah, she definitely deserves to have someone like Neil around her who would genuinely care for her. I wish to read them growing more comfortable in the long run. And hell yeah, she needed to cry, who's gonna object to that?😲
This was such an intense chapter and yet I found myself laughing when Neil brought up the kiss😆😆.. after all he went through, he still had time to think of that and a lot more.

No matter how long it takes, I'm waiting for the next part ok
Take care🤗

This was amazing yaar

Amazing gurl. Do update soon...

just superb
loved it
update soon
thnx for pm

if comments have dropped from my side I'm really sorry 😔

You are an excellent writer... Its an absolute masterpiece. Do continue soon...
N please don't think about discontinuing the FF...

awesome upt
i'm in hurry so no long comment...sorry
loved the upt
avneil are slowly progressing...i like that
all girls are allowed a breakdowm from time to time
waiting for the next upt
cont soon

Amazing chapter...

Hi, I'm a silent reader, but I just want you to know just how amazing I think your FF is. Since the first chapter I have been hooked to your story. I love the way you write, and your characters have such a raw and fresh appeal to them. Also, I love the the maturity with which you portray their sexual tension; it's not everyone's cup of tea. Trust me I wait for your updates as eagerly as I wait for the written updates for the actual show. So, please don't stop writing! And I promise from now on I will comment and like regularly.

Chapter 13 was so action-packed! I love the argument between Neil and Avni. I think they were both right in their respective places, but I think Avni is underestimating Ketan a bit much. I loved the whole fight sequence between Avni and the offender, it was so realistic. But what I liked the most is that she fought back!! I wonder how Neil mange to find her?? Waiting to see their bond get deeper.

Hi! This FF is absolutely amazing! The storyline and characters are so fresh and such a delight to read. I love the dark edge the characters have as compared to the show. I feel like this is the Avni as the creatives/writers imagined her but obviously they cannot present such a dark Avni to the Indian audience and so have watered her down in the show. But if she is really filled with rage and revenge, then she would be something like she is in your FF. Neil is also so beautifully depicted in your FF. He is a cop, a damn good one, and very dedicated at that. For the sake of the show, they have made him flirty and romantic at times but I never really imaged Neil to be like that. Not only is your story very intriguing but you are a very talented writer and I hope you continue. I apologize for not writing sooner but only just discovered your FF a couple of days ago and have just caught up. Having said that, I also hate writing comments for the sake of commenting. I will only comment on a writer's update/work in general when I have something truly constructive to say. Thus, it is very likely that I may not have a comment for every chapter you write but that does not mean I don't await for your updates with bated breaths :) I can imagine as a writer it must be frustrating to not have people comment but I just wanted to respectfully offer insight into why there are so many silent readers. I hope from the bottom of my heart that you continue bc I, like many others I'm sure, are truly hooked to your story!