AvNeil FF: A Fate Intertwined NEW THREAD PAGE 27 - Page 12

Hi Dear
I've been terribly late with this.

Just caught up with chapters 10,11 and 12.. As always it was brilliant👏 and so thrilling to read them all at once

Enjoyed that small moment with AvNeil at the balcony. No work, no sexual tension, no fighting. Just a moment and it was lovely.
Gosh, Diksha is such a biatch. It's a wonder how DD remained calm.

Okay, now I loved the party. It was an amazing written chapter.
Kareena-Neil bonding was a treat. And even Ketan was cool. Ananya was fab and I liked that Neil got those vials. Kareena's opinion of Amol was very interesting. I'm thinking if there's more to him especially since he is known as Ketan's son!
Was also anxious about Mitali. Oh, and when Ananya left and Ketan said about a sore festering, I just knew he was up to something. And it seems so after reading Chapter 13 preview.
I also think along with the drink, the scent in the air of that room was drugged. Dunno if I put that correctly but I've heard how drugs were put into AC's and once you switch them on it gets in the air and you're drugged.

Ch12 was an edge of the seat part, one for obvious reasons..😆😳
Was so scared of what will happen to Neil but am relieved he was able to do something. So we finally get confirmation of the Mehta's.
I knew Avni would be spontaneous in trying to get to Neil and help him. Loved their moment...Finally☺️. It was electrifying and the reactions were perfect and expected.
It's a shame they had to have a showdown after such a hot moment but oh well😆.
Avni was desperate/reckless and you described that well
Absolutely relieved that Mitali was found and eager to read how it goes from here onwards

Not to forget, I like all the Gifs and pictures you post after each part. The models are stunning and Randeep- Tabu are excellent choices👏

Sorry if you got bored, but I get so involved when I like something
Take care

it was brilliant
loved it
update soon

The chapter was amazing...

Originally posted by: Rozy77

Hi Dear
I've been terribly late with this.

Just caught up with chapters 10,11 and 12.. As always it was brilliant👏 and so thrilling to read them all at once

Enjoyed that small moment with AvNeil at the balcony. No work, no sexual tension, no fighting. Just a moment and it was lovely.
Gosh, Diksha is such a biatch. It's a wonder how DD remained calm.

Okay, now I loved the party. It was an amazing written chapter.
Kareena-Neil bonding was a treat. And even Ketan was cool. Ananya was fab and I liked that Neil got those vials. Kareena's opinion of Amol was very interesting. I'm thinking if there's more to him especially since he is known as Ketan's son!
Was also anxious about Mitali. Oh, and when Ananya left and Ketan said about a sore festering, I just knew he was up to something. And it seems so after reading Chapter 13 preview.
I also think along with the drink, the scent in the air of that room was drugged. Dunno if I put that correctly but I've heard how drugs were put into AC's and once you switch them on it gets in the air and you're drugged.

Ch12 was an edge of the seat part, one for obvious reasons..😆😳
Was so scared of what will happen to Neil but am relieved he was able to do something. So we finally get confirmation of the Mehta's.
I knew Avni would be spontaneous in trying to get to Neil and help him. Loved their moment...Finally☺️. It was electrifying and the reactions were perfect and expected.
It's a shame they had to have a showdown after such a hot moment but oh well😆.
Avni was desperate/reckless and you described that well
Absolutely relieved that Mitali was found and eager to read how it goes from here onwards

Not to forget, I like all the Gifs and pictures you post after each part. The models are stunning and Randeep- Tabu are excellent choices👏

Sorry if you got bored, but I get so involved when I like something
Take care

This was superb...loved it

wow
another master piece from u...i'm no more surprised by ur work...
awesome update
the tension btw avneil was superb
their kiss seemed electrifying😳...my screens were burning
i'm happy that neil acted quick
ah finally they found mitali
no surprise it was ketan...there were lots hints(ofcourse given by u)
avneil's tashan is a treat to read
waiting for the next upt
cont soon

P.S: ur gif for the kiss was fantastic😆

Originally posted by: srividhya68

wow
another master piece from u...i'm no more surprised by ur work...
awesome update
the tension btw avneil was superb
their kiss seemed electrifying😳...my screens were burning
i'm happy that neil acted quick
ah finally they found mitali
no surprise it was ketan...there were lots hints(ofcourse given by u)
avneil's tashan is a treat to read
waiting for the next upt
cont soon

P.S: ur gif for the kiss was fantastic😆

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