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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: pri12

Amazing...

History is repeating itself...poor Neil
Plz update soon...

Thanks Pri. Wait for more amazing updates like this. 😆😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Please continue it is interesting
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Originally posted by: aishwarya12joys

Please continue it is interesting

Will do, Thankyou😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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When ??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my goodness.. it's superb... 😊👏... cannot wait for the nexterm update... I wish I could tell you to update tomorrow but I know lot of work goes into writing and editing... please update soon. ..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Same question 😛... it's can't wait for the next update...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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=Haal-e-dil=
Part 3
Neil headed straight to the parking lot. He rushed to the car as he picked up his phone from one of his pockets. He didn't have to wait for long as DD came on the line.

D: Sirji how is bha..
N: DD there's no time to waste. I need you to inform all the traffic police checkpoints about a Jeep with two bl**dy drunkards. *gritted his teeth hard* probably rash driving. Quick! Find out by hook or crook but bring them to me... FAST!
D: Oka..

Neil disconnected the call without giving DD a chance to speak even for once. He was red and trembling with anger. People would perceive him as a masterpiece portraying the true definition of "sorrow". He hit the car tire and dropped down on his knees, looking up at the sky.

N: I am scared of promising now. I can't even promise her that she'll be fine. I won't be able to assure all the family members that she will return safe and sound. But I know that my girl is brave. And for her, I'll have to be strong because how can I disappoint her? I just want to ask why are you doing this to me? Why do you always snatch away the people I love from me? What sin have I committed that I have to bear all this again?
***
"Neil, make it fast! We need to buy your clothes before the party, not after" Juhi called to Neil who was in the room from past half an hour since she arrived. She was already starting to think if he was applying make-up or something.
"Relax baby, My birthday is tomorrow. The party is also tomorrow. Why do you worry so much huh? He came out and caressed her cheeks. "And I don't even know why you and mom want to have a party for me so badly. I am not a baby you see."

"Shutup! You have no say in this okay? Aunty and I are never wrong. Now let's go Neil. Or else we will reach the shops when the keepers are already asleep at their homes." Saying this she grabbed him out of the apartment.
"My crazy girl!" It was only audible to himself and he put on his irresistible smirk looking at her affectionately.

"Neil now that you got your clothes, stay inside the car. I am coming within a few minutes."

Neil tried to protest but he knew she was planning a surprise for him so he let her go. As she was heading towards the shop situated on the other side of the road, a speeding truck came from nowhere and hit her which carried her several steps away. Her loud scream that faded into thin air forever was enough to shatter Neil's whole world.
***
Neil jerked out of his trance as he felt the scream. It felt so real, as if it happened just now, then and there. He looked in all directions before calming himself realizing it was all in his mind. A memory that will never leave him, haunting him through any disasters and making him weak when he clearly didn't want to.

He sat their thinking of Avni when DD called back. "Sir ji. We found the jeep and both the people in it, wasted due to intoxication in a Dhaba. But they are gaining conciousness now. What should we do?"

N: Keep them tied in the interrogation room. I am coming.
With that Neil drove his car catching acceleration as he headed to the police station. He promised to himself that he won't let them get away with it. Out of all the emotions, anger is something he is least familiar with but tonight he couldn't help it. After all, it's all about his Avni's life. She is fighting against life and death only because of some careless people not worthy of being left on the roads and he was not going to tolerate it.

"Doctor! doctor! Come fast doctor, the patient in the ER is sinking!" A nurse ran from the room to the doctor's cabin shouting, which alerted everyone outside the ER. They were hoping to get good news and god knows what they were going to hear the next minute. Within seconds the doctor came instructing the nurse to make arrangements to shift Avni to the ICU which was a bit too unbearable for Nanno to listen. She was about to drop down on the floor when Ali cleverly held her. She started crying on the spot making it difficult for Ali to hold on to her.

"Moi bacchi ke saath kuch galat nahi ho na chahiye Ya Allah. Moi guddo toh chali gayi. Ab moi nawasi... Moi umar lelo par uss bachi ko teek kardho."

Shweta who was sitting near Prakash leaned on him. "Prakashji.. Where's my tillu.. Oh gods! What if kuch kardi usne.. tillu ka hearts twice toot the huve mein nahi dheksakti. Avni will be fine na Prakash ji boliye!

Prakash himself was worried for his son and daughter-in-law but he had to console his wife. "Shwetaji, humaara Neil bohot samajdhaar hai, woh kuch ulta seedha nahi karega. Aur rahi baath Avni bahu ki, toh barosa rakiye. Kuch nahi hone denge woh use." Shweta eased herself at the comforting words of Prakash but she was too worried for her son no matter what.

"I am asking you both nicely, tell me how did the accident happen?" Neil leaned forward holding the table firmly and interrogated the two men tied up in front of him. They refused to admit anything that happened and Neil was getting furious by each passing minute.
"God dammit speak up! I very well know how to make you guys spill the beans but I am going to ask nicely for the last time. SPEAK UP!" Both the men looked terrified but still refused to open their mouth.

"Okay then you won't.. No worries! DD get me the lash."
DD: Si..Sirji.. la..lash? He was surprised to hear what Neil said. Neil was that officer who never assaulted a criminal no matter how big a crime he did when all other officers did.

N: DD did you forget how a lash looks like or forgot that I am Neil?
DD gulped and ran to fetch it. As soon as the men saw the lash in Neil's hand they got even more terrified. Horror was evident on their faces.

"Please let us go.. We were just drunk. We were given money to execute the accident. It wasn't our fault... " When he realized what he had done the other person sighed. Out of fear, one of them spilled half of the truth and now the other half was what Neil awaited.

"Who is behind all this? I AM ASKING WHO IS BEHIND ALL THIS!" Neil shouted making them almost pee in their pants.

The other man spoke up and not to Neil's surprise he confessed something that Neil had a feeling of since he started the interrogation.
"Da.. Dayawanti Mehta paid us to finish her off. We don't know if she survived or..."

Neil's anger shot up. He hit hard on the table but instead of him the two criminals sighed in pain. "How dare you! She is a survivor and will survive.You have no right to speak about her... and DD, lock them up in Jail right now."

When he was left alone in the dark interrogation room he made up his mind to face Dayawanti Mehta. But before that he had to go see Avni. Maybe she was just waiting for him to come and wake her up.

tbc
~~~
I know guys I am going slowly, but i really want to write about everyone's emotion and every single thing. Hope you don't mind. I dedicate this part to all those who wanted a quick update because I wasn't going to do it today but you all forced me to.😛 After all, how can I leave such lovely people hanging? Especially Shikhs, who kept asking me for an update in whichever thread she met me in.😆 Love you all. Do give feedback. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38
Res
Unres
Yipeee!!!🥳🥳
Dhan ta nan
First one to comment for the first time.
Cutie... That was damn awesome...
Angry side of Neil and a glimpse of Juhi was really a wonderful treat...
I just loved it...
I know Tillu won't let anything happen to Avni and will surely punish that chudail Dayawanti😡
I just wish Avni to be fine soon...
God bless you dear...
And may he keep your spirit high to update next part faster than this one...
Edited by vu1998 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Amazing cutie...Loved it
Daya is such a cruel woman..But Avni will survive for her Neil and her family...Plz continue soon

P.S. Now I have one more story writer whom I will pm to update soon..😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Electro.Cutie

=Haal-e-dil=
Part 3
Neil headed straight to the parking lot. He rushed to the car as he picked up his phone from one of his pockets. He didn't have to wait for long as DD came on the line.

D: Sirji how is bha..
N: DD there's no time to waste. I need you to inform all the traffic police checkpoints about a Jeep with two bl**dy drunkards. *gritted his teeth hard* probably rash driving. Quick! Find out by hook or crook but bring them to me... FAST!
D: Oka..

Neil disconnected the call without giving DD a chance to speak even for once. He was red and trembling with anger. People would perceive him as a masterpiece portraying the true definition of "sorrow". He hit the car tire and dropped down on his knees, looking up at the sky.

N: I am scared of promising now. I can't even promise her that she'll be fine. I won't be able to assure all the family members that she will return safe and sound. But I know that my girl is brave. And for her, I'll have to be strong because how can I disappoint her? I just want to ask why are you doing this to me? Why do you always snatch away the people I love from me? What sin have I committed that I have to bear all this again?
***
"Neil, make it fast! We need to buy your clothes before the party, not after" Juhi called to Neil who was in the room from past half an hour since she arrived. She was already starting to think if he was applying make-up or something.
"Relax baby, My birthday is tomorrow. The party is also tomorrow. Why do you worry so much huh? He came out and caressed her cheeks. "And I don't even know why you and mom want to have a party for me so badly. I am not a baby you see."

"Shutup! You have no say in this okay? Aunty and I are never wrong. Now let's go Neil. Or else we will reach the shops when the keepers are already asleep at their homes." Saying this she grabbed him out of the apartment.
"My crazy girl!" It was only audible to himself and he put on his irresistible smirk looking at her affectionately.

"Neil now that you got your clothes, stay inside the car. I am coming within a few minutes."

Neil tried to protest but he knew she was planning a surprise for him so he let her go. As she was heading towards the shop situated on the other side of the road, a speeding truck came from nowhere and hit her which carried her several steps away. Her loud scream that faded into thin air forever was enough to shatter Neil's whole world.
***
Neil jerked out of his trance as he felt the scream. It felt so real, as if it happened just now, then and there. He looked in all directions before calming himself realizing it was all in his mind. A memory that will never leave him, haunting him through any disasters and making him weak when he clearly didn't want to.

He sat their thinking of Avni when DD called back. "Sir ji. We found the jeep and both the people in it, wasted due to intoxication in a Dhaba. But they are gaining conciousness now. What should we do?"

N: Keep them tied in the interrogation room. I am coming.
With that Neil drove his car catching acceleration as he headed to the police station. He promised to himself that he won't let them get away with it. Out of all the emotions, anger is something he is least familiar with but tonight he couldn't help it. After all, it's all about his Avni's life. She is fighting against life and death only because of some careless people not worthy of being left on the roads and he was not going to tolerate it.

"Doctor! doctor! Come fast doctor, the patient in the ER is sinking!" A nurse ran from the room to the doctor's cabin shouting, which alerted everyone outside the ER. They were hoping to get good news and god knows what they were going to hear the next minute. Within seconds the doctor came instructing the nurse to make arrangements to shift Avni to the ICU which was a bit too unbearable for Nanno to listen. She was about to drop down on the floor when Ali cleverly held her. She started crying on the spot making it difficult for Ali to hold on to her.

"Moi bacchi ke saath kuch galat nahi ho na chahiye Ya Allah. Moi guddo toh chali gayi. Ab moi nawasi... Moi umar lelo par uss bachi ko teek kardho."

Shweta who was sitting near Prakash leaned on him. "Prakashji.. Where's my tillu.. Oh gods! What if kuch kardi usne.. tillu ka hearts twice toot the huve mein nahi dheksakti. Avni will be fine na Prakash ji boliye!

Prakash himself was worried for his son and daughter-in-law but he had to console his wife. "Shwetaji, humaara Neil bohot samajdhaar hai, woh kuch ulta seedha nahi karega. Aur rahi baath Avni bahu ki, toh barosa rakiye. Kuch nahi hone denge woh use." Shweta eased herself at the comforting words of Prakash but she was too worried for her son no matter what.

"I am asking you both nicely, tell me how did the accident happen?" Neil leaned forward holding the table firmly and interrogated the two men tied up in front of him. They refused to admit anything that happened and Neil was getting furious by each passing minute.
"God dammit speak up! I very well know how to make you guys spill the beans but I am going to ask nicely for the last time. SPEAK UP!" Both the men looked terrified but still refused to open their mouth.

"Okay then you won't.. No worries! DD get me the lash."
DD: Si..Sirji.. la..lash? He was surprised to hear what Neil said. Neil was that officer who never assaulted a criminal no matter how big a crime he did when all other officers did.

N: DD did you forget how a lash looks like or forgot that I am Neil?
DD gulped and ran to fetch it. As soon as the men saw the lash in Neil's hand they got even more terrified. Horror was evident on their faces.

"Please let us go.. We were just drunk. We were given money to execute the accident. It wasn't our fault... " When he realized what he had done the other person sighed. Out of fear, one of them spilled half of the truth and now the other half was what Neil awaited.

"Who is behind all this? I AM ASKING WHO IS BEHIND ALL THIS!" Neil shouted making them almost pee in their pants.

The other man spoke up and not to Neil's surprise he confessed something that Neil had a feeling of since he started the interrogation.
"Da.. Dayawanti Mehta paid us to finish her off. We don't know if she survived or..."

Neil's anger shot up. He hit hard on the table but instead of him the two criminals sighed in pain. "How dare you! She is a survivor and will survive.You have no right to speak about her... and DD, lock them up in Jail right now."

When he was left alone in the dark interrogation room he made up his mind to face Dayawanti Mehta. But before that he had to go see Avni. Maybe she was just waiting for him to come and wake her up.

tbc
~~~
I know guys I am going slowly, but i really want to write about everyone's emotion and every single thing. Hope you don't mind. I dedicate this part to all those who wanted a quick update because I wasn't going to do it today but you all forced me to.😛 After all, how can I leave such lovely people hanging? Especially Shikhs, who kept asking me for an update in whichever thread she met me in.😆 Love you all. Do give feedback. 😳

Omg DAYAWANTI MEHTA behind dis.grrr .Neil khanna won't leave this time.Awesome update.Ur story is so good that m gonna mock you for the next update too.Thank you for dedicating this to me .Much love to you sweetheart.thank you n yes when is the next part.give us Eid treat

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