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Hello lovely people. I am here once again with a piece of my mind penned down. Hope you like it.
Neil's car speeded up with a roar on one of the busy road. If had any witnesses, they would definitely conclude he was on a suicidal path heading straight towards death. But that was not the case. His destination was a place that scared him more than death. A place that could make even the deepest corners of his soul to cry out loud. A place where he lost a very important person to him and yet again this fateful day has forced him to go in there with the same restlessness and worry he had few years back, when he lost the love of his life, Juhi.
The car came to a halt with a screeching sound due to a sudden pause in its acceleration. It had reached the large parking lot outside the lavish hospital. The whole place was lit up with bright white lights as if no one ever sleeps there. The irony is that, it is the same place where people tend to go into deep sleep and never wake up. Nevertheless, all this failed to gain his attention as his feet raced into the wide reception area, his hazel brown eyes searching here and there.
Outside the emergency room, Neela sat with her elbows glued to her knees, palms joined together touching her forehead. Her beautiful kohled eyes were closed, tears noticeable on her cheeks. Ali stood near the entrance of the ER, peeping through the round pane of glass on the door. His gaze moved onto Neil who was standing about ten steps away from them.
Ali had a good look at the man infront of him.. He cannot believe that it was the same Neil that he was used to seeing everyday, who was focused and composed. The person standing infront of him was not the same. His space grey shirt was crumpled as if pulled out from the bottom of a cloth pile. Blood shot eyes were full of salty tears. Hair strands disordered as if he stopped styling his hair since the beginning of the new decade. This Neil was totally different and seeing him like that Ali's heart ached a bit more for his buddy.
N: How did this happen Ali? Neela ma? Will someone please open their mouth and tell me how my wife ended up here...
With the last shout, he kneeled down on to his knees holding his head hard. Both Neela and Ali were heart broken to see him. To see this helpless and shattered side of him that they didn't even know existed.
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Index
part 1: page 1
part 2: page 3
part 3: page 6
part 4: page 9
part 5: page 13
part 6: page 15
part 7: page 18
part 8: page 21
part 9: page 23
part 10: page 27
part 11: page 32
part 12: page 35
part 13: page 40
part 14: page 44
part 15: page 48
part 16: page 53
part 17: page 57
part 18: page 61
part 19: page 67
part 20: page 71
part 21: page 77
part 22: page 81
part 23: page 88
part 24: page 92
part 25: page 100
part 26: page 105
part 27: page 109
part 28: page 116
part 29: page 123
part 30: page 127
part 31: page 134
=Haal-e-dil=
Part 1
Luminous stars lit up the dark night sky. Everything appeared black and grey from a distance. Huge trees and tall buildings showed up as scary silhouettes. Amidst the calm nature, the noise of the busy highways and city streets overtook the soothing silence.
Neil's car speeded up with a roar on one of the busy road. If had any witnesses, they would definitely conclude he was on a suicidal path heading straight towards death. But that was not the case. His destination was a place that scared him more than death. A place that could make even the deepest corners of his soul to cry out loud. A place where he lost a very important person to him and yet again this fateful day has forced him to go in there with the same restlessness and worry he had few years back, when he lost the love of his life, Juhi.
The car came to a halt with a screeching sound due to a sudden pause in its acceleration. It had reached the large parking lot outside the lavish hospital. The whole place was lit up with bright white lights as if no one ever sleeps there. The irony is that, it is the same place where people tend to go into deep sleep and never wake up. Nevertheless, all this failed to gain his attention as his feet raced into the wide reception area, his hazel brown eyes searching here and there.
Outside the emergency room, Neela sat with her elbows glued to her knees, palms joined together touching her forehead. Her beautiful kohled eyes were closed, tears noticeable on her cheeks. Ali stood near the entrance of the ER, peeping through the round pane of glass on the door. His gaze moved onto Neil who was standing about ten steps away from them.
Ali had a good look at the man infront of him.. He cannot believe that it was the same Neil that he was used to seeing everyday, who was focused and composed. The person standing infront of him was not the same. His space grey shirt was crumpled as if pulled out from the bottom of a cloth pile. Blood shot eyes were full of salty tears. Hair strands disordered as if he stopped styling his hair since the beginning of the new decade. This Neil was totally different and seeing him like that Ali's heart ached a bit more for his buddy.
N: How did this happen Ali? Neela ma? Will someone please open their mouth and tell me how my wife ended up here...
With the last shout, he kneeled down on to his knees holding his head hard. Both Neela and Ali were heart broken to see him. To see this helpless and shattered side of him that they didn't even know existed.
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