Bol na Mahi Bol na - Neil's Version (An AVNEIL ONE SHOT)

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: priyanvs
well written
loved it dear

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Areesha_jawwad
Wow. You explained everything woww just woww!
Hey please do write longgg fanfic on AvNeil. You are an amazing writer.

Thank u so much dear! 😃 Glad u enjoyed reading it! 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: vu1998
Superb loved neils pov

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Originally posted by: ReeshAxym
Beautifully captured Neil's thoughts. ❤️ This is a lovely read

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: nRiya
I was thinking What might have going on Neil's mind when Avni asked to release Aman. Seems like you portrayed exactly what was going inside his mind that to so beautifully👏. I really loved it.

I read your previously written stories on SwaSan & on manmarzian, please Write more on AvNeil 😊 too

Thank u so much dear. 😃 I was actually thinking the same thing and this came up, especially because Zain's eyes are so expressive, I really wanted to decode its language or at least my version of it... 😳

Btw wow, its grt to know that u hv read my previous works, esp mmz bcz I find very few fans of the pair I have written about! Hope u liked them too. 😃

N yeah, will surely write more on avneil too, they sure look like a really promising pair to me.😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Always welcome dear. True girl, one day his eyes will kill me BTW you justified all his expressions so damn perfectly😳.

ArDhika were one of my favs coz they were different from other couples 😆 I got really sad when it went off air🥱

Eventhough they're still not an official couple, but they're started to get into our heart. Looking forward to when their lovestory will start. Also I'm looking forward to reading more of your amazing stories❤️.

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Thank u so much dear. 😃 I was actually thinking the same thing and this came up, especially because Zain's eyes are so expressive, I really wanted to decode its language or at least my version of it... 😳

Btw wow, its grt to know that u hv read my previous works, esp mmz bcz I find very few fans of the pair I have written about! Hope u liked them too. 😃

N yeah, will surely write more on avneil too, they sure look like a really promising pair to me.😃