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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Dmad

As usual amazing update!!!


Sharma family looked so surprised to see singhania brothers in kitchen😆esp. see tapish cook. They don't just lounge around and party uncleji!!!

I am loving tapeera!! The way they bicker with each other and tapish's quirks!!👌👌


Veeranshu Singhania is the epitome of fearlessness!! No care in world, no boundaries and no limits and that's what makes him soo special!!!

I absolutely love the way veer thinks two steps ahead of everyone. He's so god damn sure that suryash wouldn't sit empty so he goes ahead and takes necessary precautions.


Bani and veer conversing about future plans was so very normal.*in a good way*. Bani always had that sense of independence and self fulfillment that i liked. Her plans for future show how she wants her life to go back to normal and not have deal with being a saviour or a fighter!!

Veer and his gharwali's family planning was adorable. Veer those reasons she told you were actually the times when your adi naagin started falling for you!!😳

Bani's insecurities show how far she's come in this relationship. From wanting to go away from him and hating his attention to feeling uneasy and jealous over alaknanda. (Bani feeling jealous over someone else calling her pati "veeranshu"😳) Bani wants the exclusive rights to call him Veeranshu. Veer toh sabh bulate hai use, Veeranshu sirf Bani bulati hai.


Ach, suryash how stupid of you to think that you'll win. You killed the baba...sure and it marked the beginning of your downfall!!!

The whole backdrop of aakesh and naageshwari was beautiful. Naageshwari never saw cheels as someone worthy of love,care or compassion. All she could see was enemy and all aakesh could see was the purity, the light in which she lived, the light she embodied.

And the light she disgraced when she killed aakesh!!!

The show left so many loopholes. The most one was why Nageshwari was cursed. They just couldn't explain it properly. To think that Bholenath cursed her just because she killed Aakesh when he didn't attack her didn't fit. He's Shiva. He knows inside and out. How could it be wrong that she kills someone who had killed the person she considered her other half, her soulmate? So, I wanted to go the other way. To actually explain why she was cursed. Shiva is the lord of all creatures. Just as how Narayan saw a ray of hope in Aakesh, Bholenath did too. He expected Nageshwari to realize it and somehow find a way to make him see why he was to fight Markaat.


Markaat might have said veeranshu / aakesh was his heir, But what he did was try to mould him into killing machine who would just follow his orders. He wanted a senseless demon who'd just kill/maim and destroy on his orders. But he didn't realise that the demon might just want things for himself and bite him back.

The basic rule of raj is that a person who's on the throne has to either accept defeat and step back to let the heir sit on the throne or be killed. Rule of the Jungle that he wanted to break. There's always going to be a bigger hunter than you in the jungle. No one can be the ultimate.

Veeranshu/aakesh was suryash's heir. Suryash could not sit on the throne when the heir is ready to take over. Either step back or die!!


The whole fight sequence was a mark of your brilliance as a writer. Kudos!! It was really well written, i could just imagine being there!!👏👏

Bani standing upto veeranshu and going "kya hai sabko darate phir rhe ho??"...full biwi mode on huh!!!😆 Mujhe bas yeh accha lagta hai toh think that Bani would go in full biwi mode.


Sharma family is a riot!!!!🤣🤣

Bani being older than ram ji!!!🤣🤣

Konsi cream use krti ho...omg!! I laughed out loud reading all that!!!🤣

Singhania's the chidiyas!!🤪

But man sharma's a tough bunch aren't they, rather than being afraid here they are playing 20 questions.....🤣


Thanks ki aapne finally comment kiya. Maine socha ki aap toh bas chale gaye. 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

As always..reading the new chapters when I wake up ..I feel this giddy excitement I used to have all the weekends when I waited for the new n5 episode.

I loved the final fight between markaat and veeranshu..it was amazing. And the way the markat met his end..the showdown was so powerful.

I loved the details you always put..how the kawach was broken..it was brilliantly explained.the only other story where I found this brilliant detailing was Harry Potter series which is my favorite. Haayee!!! I love Harry Potter too. Not to that level of JK Rowling but that's a huge compliment for me. I'm sort of obsessed with Harry Potter.

And the last scene..even I was as terrified as ballu and pawan for bani when she actually went in front of veeranshu who was like an erupting volcano..but the way he responded 😍😍their love is so unique..and the way bani was so excited hearing sweetheart❤❤. Bani is after all his sweetheart. She knew how he was erupting into temper but she also knew that under no circumstances would he hurt her. Veer had earned that kind of trust. When he called her sweetheart, she knew that somewhere her Veer is still there.

Last but not the least,My earnest request to you..please don't end this story soon..🙏🙏🙏🙏.There is so much more..so much we want to read..so much we wanted to see in the show(..for example tapeera marriage..all the functions and vani celebrating the rasms in their own way and romance in between them..but I never got to see it in the show..I wish I could read that in this story ..and so many other things)..for many of us who read this story..this has become our happy place after n5 was cruelly destroyed by mukta. Don't know how many people are going to read here but I'll try to keep updating on Wattpad. I'll update here, sure.

So please keep writing this amazing story..can't wait for the next chapters.


Thank you ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: urmita

wowwwww....Just Wow...Hats off yaar...I mean I have been reading and u write so well I can actually see the story unfolding in my head...but Veer in all his glory in this latest update...just......I have no words that's how awesome this was...Vani/Akeshwari in this story are just perfect...

❤️smiley27smiley27smiley27smiley27

update real soon...coz now I am waiting for a very interesting conversation/scene between vani (or Akeshwari maybe? 😃) in Akesh's room.... The convo is still pending but got something


I'm happy that you're enjoying it.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AliChase


Thanks ki aapne finally comment kiya. Maine socha ki aap toh bas chale gaye. 😆

Are na na, kahi na jaa rhi main..😆

It's just that lately I've been so busy so kahi baar tumhari update pr comment krna reh jaata hai!!

But i do follow it here and on wattpad as well. Aage se pakka timely comment..cool??😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Mind blowing. So so so good. Loved each part.

Vani day out.

Their date and everything. The way u explained. It's so good 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just read the new chapters..and wow❤️..this is exactly the balm our broken hearts wanted after yesterday's nightmare.


Can't thank you enough for this🤗.


This is the positive feel good things I want to read..loved every word of the update..THE PERFECT DATE INDEED😍😍😍😍.From the game zone to aakesh room which veer made into a paradise for both of them.


And the romance..speechless🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥❤❤❤❤❤❤.


Can't wait for the next chapters. (And I hope here vani gets the morning after which mukta so cruelly ruined in the show..oh how I hate that woman!.)


P.S please do not worry about forum going silent and readership. Many including me are only coming to the forum just for this ff..and though I'm following the story on wattpad..it will take time for the story to reach up to the current point there right?...just know this that you will always have me as your reader and please continue this amazing story as this has become lifeline to many of us.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Finally its here and as usual amazing one 😍😍😍😍

It's just so good to see veer as the powerful one here and bani being with him forever.

So happy and contented with this story that couldn't explain in words

Please tell about you username on wattpad as well

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow...

Fantastic...

Excellent update...

Kaas N5 bhi tumhari story ki tarah hota...

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AliChase


I'll continue to write but not sure how much people are going read here since the forum is going to go silent since the show had ended.


Thanks for the amazing updates!!! We will be here untill the story completes..Please continute

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: AliChase


I'll continue to write but not sure how much people are going read here since the forum is going to go silent since the show had ended.

Mein ye froums mein ati hu srif tumhari story padhne k liye...

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