My Angel BeHir FF IF_NC_ENTRY Ch 13 on Pg 44

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fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#391

I haven't commented for a long time . I finally checked how many chapters I missed 😲

I will start doing the reviews now!

Here it comes 😃

Edit: I hope IF does not give me spamming messages 😭

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fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#392

Chapter 6

This was so funny 🤣

Mahir setting conditions for Bella was amazing! He is finally showing his confident side 👏

Bella meeting Sumi at the end of the chapter 😲. I can already tell that you are going to show their bond together 😳

I miss Sumi and Bella's bonding in the show 😭. Why did you turn evil Sumi?

Congratulations on completing 8,000 words 🥳

Amazing update Ash 👏

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fortitudeoth

@fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#393

Chapter 7

Bella arrived early, WOW! I can already see the changes in her 😆. She definitely took away most parts of the story but even Sumi had her moments

I knew it! You are already showing a bond between Sumi and Bella . Thank you for this 🤗

I could imagine Mahir's face when he read that note 🤣. I think I know where you found inspiration to write his about his tharkiness 😉

It looks like Bella is making progress with her studies and Mahir seems to be a good teacher.

I can't wait to see where this goes!

Amazing chapter Ash 👏. Going to read the next chapter now 😃

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fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#394

I just noticed that I made a mistake with the chapter numbers .

I'll fix them now 😆

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fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#395

Chapter 8

Bella is being very dedicated 👏.

Ash, why are you doing this to me? 😭 Sumi and Bella 💔

Sumi didn't mind that she smoked and she even made her eat 😭. It even became a routine now 🥺

Wow! I really miss their bond. I'm going to mention this every time you write about their bond 🥱

Oh and great chapter again. This word limit makes the chapters so short 😕. But even then amazing job Ash 👏

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fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">People GOOD NEWS!!!</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">My Angel has been selected for round two. Thank you for your support. I hope you will continue to read and like my story. Love ya all!!!</font>

I don't know if I properly congratulated you for this. If I haven't, then I'm sorry. But if I have, let me do it again

CONGRATULATIONS ASH 🥳

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fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#397

Chapter 9

Mahir is making Bella study even on a Sunday? 😲 Doesn't he ever take a break?

Mahir is starting to fall in love 😳. You had to write about Sumi and Bella again 😭 😡. We need a ship name for them

🤣 Bella always manages to find a way to tease Mahir. She's perfect for him. This side of hers brings out a different Mahir

What was that shriek? 😲

Amazing chapter 👏

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fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#398

Chapter 10

🤣 dress troubles. That's very typical! Aww Sumi helped her dress up for the party

"What is this? Gang up on Mahir day?" You said something similar to me a few days ago when I sent you that PM 😉

Mahir asks many questions 😆. But he's asking the right ones!

The best part for me was when you mentioned that the kiss left a tingling feeling 😳

Another amazing chapter 👏. Finally I have reviewed the first 10 chapters! I have 4 reviews left 😃

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fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#399

Chapter 11

Bella is in love

She finally took the exams. Wow! I'm proud of her 👏. What treat will she give him? 😳

Bella is even bonding with Andy 😭. She is already loved by the Sehgal family. They even let her stay over!

When will Behir realize they are in love?

Great update 👏. I am giving you a clap after every chapter 🤣. You'll be getting a few more

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fortitudeoth

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Posted: 6 years ago

#400

Chapter 12

They are still in a routine even after the exams! Isn't that so cute?

I need to learn how to post GIFs. I really do! They would help me with my reviews. I will ask Varsha again and maybe this time try to at least do it. But I have already asked her too many times 🤣

Andy and Sumi haven't missed anything about these two kids! They're trying to set them up. It's good they went to Bella instead of Mahir

I am running out of words to praise you 👏

I am almost coming to the end of this story 😭

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