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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Behirlove

Awesome...I wish,u can continue...u can write on wattpad...😊



Hey, welcome to the forum!

Wattpad is actually out of my comfort zone but I will consider it. 😳

Thanks for reading the story. 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: behirlover

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your dream combos YULA MANU like seriously you think they are fun.

I also got YuVish if you want? 😉


there are many sequences for HYLILY like they in college again continuing their education they going to being all friendly with each other sharing things

HY:ILY ka sharing will be very different! 😳 It will be pure friendship as I am now writing flashbacks and I have to maintain the continuity.

GOA😭

I am going to write a short Goa sequence just for you in HBTBEDKL


I have seen loads of in laws who dont get well along with their son but with their DIL its a different connection. I really dont know whether to be happy or sad about word limit because there is so much to say and write and explore further but the word limit has stopped it but your health is more important.

Right now I am thankful for the word limit. Otherwise I would have continued to write and my ma would become Ma Chandi!


see i told your imagination is way different then mine although i love behir being all jealous for each other but sadistic way i dont think so.

Awww but that is so much FUN!!! 😆


oh its just feelings it should be expressed whenever you feel right and with right person thats what i feel but you should be matured enough to handle this.

Mahir is not matured enough to handle anything other than a kiss.☺️ And as far as I am concerned, shadi is the official license to have fun. 😉

if thats the case then i am going to trouble you so much now after all APNO KO HI SATATE HAI

Ermmm 🤔

i so wanted to have this mahir make bella blush but alas this ended😭😭😭

That will happen only years later.😆


soft kissable lips😳😳

Woh toh hai!! 😉


i know he will never drink but i wanted him to be like that so that bela can fayda uthao of his cuteness waise its good he is not tally otherwise he will end up doing his own accident so bela being tally is much better option

Mahir doesn't need any nasha. Bella is his nasha and dawa both. And it will be so much fun if Bella takes advantage of him. 😉

i did not get his relic wala part also is there any chance you want to continue it any further no pressure just asking.

Maybe. Not sure.

even i sleep a lot 😉

Okay I am NOT asking with whom. 😉
I meant teddy or panda or pillow. 😳 What did you think? 😉

mahir being all shy and bella managing things all alone OMG😳😳

☺️ Andy will officially declare that she is my daughter and this boy is my son-in-law😆

ASH never gives books ohhh thats interesting

Never ever. 😆 Get's me in not end of trouble as people get offended.


you cannot even dare to have dancing car with anyone other than BEHIR

Nope!


of thats fine i am waiting for a yes from your mom and can wait till eternity and also your health to improve. Well moms are very stubborn when it comes to their child health and happiness.

That I know!! 😳


oh thats fine but imagine ash harkate of bella now that she knows he loves her and specially after he fantasizing about her their time together OMG he will make sumi sit infront of them all the time but still bella will manage to turn him on.

☺️


oh no no no naagin I am just pure and pious tharki soul.



Yeah right!! 😃




see now you coming up with the idea of killing him. Ash dont put words in my mouth specially your thoughts.

See Preeti we are brain sisters. Your thoughts, my thoughts. My thoughts your thoughts. 😆

limited time with bella well i trust bella for this she will make it up to him because as much as mahir wants bella even she wants him so much.

Yup!!

comfort over fashion is always me and may be he was asking so that he can buy it next time waise i trust him to bring very decent clothes but you never know people planned their first kiss so i doubt he will be all sharif for her.


First kiss toh har koi plan karata hai. That doesn't make one tharki! 😳


thats the difference in love and lust no matter what you always feel it when the guy is lusty or is actually loving one. and with mahir she will have a different intimacy level.

That's true!


well for me her kiss is very natural but here banda is going sharam se pani pani

Well go sharam se pani pani after everything. 😆

i wasn't very keen to read climax okay😭😭😭 and yes there are tones of things to include in other 2 ffs

Yes yes I know 😳

I am not RO she is just a botox ki dukan and i never hurt people😕😕

😆


he is looking cute as kiddo mahir specially when he pouts but i really want that old mahir


Me too 😭

yup let them bond only on things and not about bella

😳


college romance is best and is very rosy away from all the worries because the whole college life is like that behind college gate in college campus we have a different world altogether.

Never had the experience😕

i have this bad habit of predicting and analyzing stories 😆😆


👏



no one is perfect and that is the case with aurangzeb also even i hate some of his qualities but then we need to appreciate him when he deserves that.


That he does.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014


Just read u r reply dear ...why I said mahir should Ccept with a .gap .isnot bcos of. Bela past ...it's bcis she lacks perseverance ..and also I felt ..for mahir thus is all new right ..so he will be overwhelmed and he might think . He needs time ...

Past bf relationship is . Immaterial
..but i don' see her being patient ..

but .she is honest ...

Perseverance is as much important as being honest and love in a relationship

Many relationships fail not bcis theeres no love or honesty ..at one point of time in any relationship there will be honesty and love

But it can be sustained only through perseverance ...
I don't see her patiently trying to mend her relationship with her dad ..at least u did not touch that aspect bcos of word limit ..might be

Her mom ...I don't have any words about her ...but still did bela ever try to understand her mom ..from her mom view point ...

Bela was always thinkingthat mom did not give her love ..but dud sshe try to love her mom unconditionally ..and patiently ..after all she gave birth ..dies not matter why she gave birth

'i don't think so ..bcis if she tried ..she would not have those bad habits ..which she took up ..just bcis to inflict pain in her mom ..and in turn her mom will get angry on her and notice her...that's what she us expecting


And regarding that kids not understand ing parents it's not regarding this story ..it is general comment after observing so many tich spoiled kids ..always blaming their parents ..rather introspecting . And trying to understand their parents view point




You are right perseverance is important and Bella does lack patience. But that is where they both will balance each other out. Mahir is super patient. She will learn patience from him.

Bella never had parental support. No matter what you say Varuni, I feel a parent should support a child no matter what shit they are going through. That is their bloody job as parents. Maybe since you are a mother, you are able to look at it form a mother's perspective. But as a child I hold JAnvi responsible for failing as a mother.

Bella did not hate her mother since her birth. If you read the story carefully, you will see that the interview where Jnavi called Bella a burden on her and a the biigest mistake of her life on national television changed Bella's way of looking at her mother. The journey of hatred began form there.

And anyways at 20 years no one is mature enough to understand the parent's perspective. Later on Bella did realise that she cannot shy away from her duties.Despite Janvi never fulfilling her duties Bella cared for and looked after Janvi in her final years. That level of maturity comes only after a certain age.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: behirlover

Hey ash hi sorry for being late here was busy a bit.
🤗

chp 12

Behir are having frequent study sessions wow things are interesting for them i wonder how they suppress all the sexual tension in between them and focus on studies mahir i can understand but bella i doubt that although chances of mahir being the hyper one is more given that it was forbidden fruit for him.

There is no tension as of yet. They both are blissfully unaware of the feelings.Tension will come later on after they confess.


i so so wanted this scene of how mahir reacts in bella's apartment and also how bella defend him in front of andy but alas. Andy is right in his place of being a caring father its just that his way of expression is different.

I had written both the scenes but then... You know right? 😕

both SYDY adored her and wanted their son to have the mentos moment soon but i guess he is tubelight in that department. behir are the future no doubt on that part.

Well MAhir is an old fashioned tubelight. even after the switch is on it will take a few more seconds to light up. 😆

janvi this women she want everything but dont want to work for it what was she thinking and its good she created scene in front of sehgals atleast they know what all she went through and will love bella even more. how ridiculous and miserable feeling it must be when the one who gave birth to us is denying our existence and bella had more then her share of pain.

Yes she is the worst. 😡 But that helped Bella in sealing a permanent place in the Sehgal Mansion.

you really like diwali dont you? waise it was very wise of SUDY to have bella stay with them otherwise even though the relationship was dead for her loneliness would have hurted her badly. this is first time i am happy that KT related result came positive😆😆

YES!! I LOVE DIWALI!!

😆


see now this is good combo YUNU they are perfect for each other anu valuing friendship of bella above her love i am certainly dreaming it.

They are a match made in hell. 😈


bella being all nervous to approach now i am pakka in dreamland. how she realised this thing that she is in love with nerdy and also that she is nervous about him. she getting rejected OMG love does make people stupid😆😆 mahir is unaware oh thats not something new he is always like that jab tak ellan na karo nahi smjhta.

Mahir is a dumbo!! 😳


see this usually people approach parents that they are in love and here parents are approaching them that they are in love.how cool are SUDY they know very well that mahir se na ho payega and thats why pinning their hopes on bella. sharam karo mahir.


They know their son only too well. 😳


and then this of andy sumi going out i thought bella will do kitabe bahot see padhi hongi when they are out. maybe they will still have this song after confession when SUDY go outside next time.

You really like that song don't you? 😆

this chapter was very short then usual and then again you leave it on cliffhangers


BI love cliffhangers.


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Posted: 6 years ago
Let's part here, take care of oneself. Next year when the fields are green; old friends will not be the same. Bound by the vast seas, we remain bosom friends; we are neighbors albeit apart at the end of the horizon.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Let's part here, take care of oneself. Next year when the fields are green; old friends will not be the same. Bound by the vast seas, we remain bosom friends; we are neighbors albeit apart at the end of the horizon.


Hey are you okay? Why this sudden goodbye? You have been rather quiet these last couple of days. Anything wrong? You know right I am just a PM away. If there's anything I can do, just pm me. If there is any problem then please PM me and we will talk about it. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Let's part here, take care of oneself. Next year when the fields are green; old friends will not be the same. Bound by the vast seas, we remain bosom friends; we are neighbors albeit apart at the end of the horizon.

What the hell is this? Could u please explain 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer



Hey are you okay? Why this sudden goodbye? You have been rather quiet these last couple of days. Anything wrong? You know right I am just a PM away. If there's anything I can do, just pm me. If there is any problem then please PM me and we will talk about it.😊



Arre no yaar. Nothing is wrong. I have been busy these days and then had a bit of health problem. Since this story is ending thought I'd share a poem that's all. 😊
Edited by nuomi.riceball - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_


What the hell is this? Could u please explain😳

This is a Chinese poem. From the Qin dynasty. 😉
Edited by nuomi.riceball - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

This is a Chinese poem. From the Qin dynasty. 😉

😡😡

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