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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: VARUNI2014


Make mahir agree fir bela proposal but just with some time leap ..i.e not immediately ..bcos it does not seem logical if he accepts it readily ..just mu suggestion ..I know u have word limit ..but see if it is possible



It was actually not possible. Sorry. But I have another reason for not going down this lane. See, as you said Mahir is not trying to change Bella. And you are right. MAhir has not seen Bella lying or being sneaky. She has always been very straightforward with him and others.


Bella has many bad habits, she has a prickly side to her personality, she can sometimes be a bully as well, but has one very good quality and that is honesty and loyalty. She has been honest about herself. She has been unapologetic about her behaviour. She did not try to portray herself as someone she is not just to impress anyone. This honesty id refelcted in her behaviour. She honestly told Mahir about the nature of her relationship with Yuvi. She willingly confessed about her words that she said in a fit if anger to Janvi when Andy found out about Bella being Janvi's daughter. She is indeed a no filter girl. So her previous relationships will not matter to Mahir as he knows she will be very honest and loyal to him. He can see it in her eyes. No matter what you can't hide the emotions from your eyes. There is child like innocence there. No deceit or hidden agendas.

The way she wholeheartedly accepted his mother and father, her bonding with them was pure. It has impressed Mahir. The plus point was that she is her own self around SuDy. She is not being fake around them just because they are parents. That takes some guts. Mahir knows, despite her many flaws, she has a pure heart that craves love.


So he will accepted her immediately. And then there are no conditions in love. The past doesn't matter as long as your honest about it. And once the past has been spoken about and dealt with, only the present and future matters.


And I was going through your old comments. There was one where you mentioned about kid's hypocrisy about wanting luxury and complaining if parent's don't provide them money but also complaining about parent's not giving them time.I had purposely not answered t back then. I wanted you to read the full story and then I wanted to answer your comment.


As I have mentioned in one of the chapters, it was her biological father who pays for her expense right form her childhood. Janvi never paid for anything. Omkar also gives additional cheques to Janvi for her own personal expenses. Janvi is basically his mistress. Even now Bella's credit cards bills are paid by Omkar and not by Janvi. So Bella has every right to complain about her mother and say horrible things about her. Janvi has really not done anything for her daughter. She neither gave her any time nor did she earn for her daughter.


So this the reason why Bella hates her mother. She doesn't hate her biological father. She in fact appreciates him for providing her with money at least if not time and attention. He at least covered one aspect of parenting.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

So much u have written in single part..

Jhanvi and Bela relationship broke
Andy summi mahir Bela relationship got strengthened
Bela became like q family member
Bela changed a lot leaving most of bad habits with good company around her
She is discovering new things in her and it lead to her feelings for mahir
Now summi and Andy want Bela to propose mahir
Wow waiting for mahir side where how he will react to Bela's actions and how will he discover his feelings
As usual my complaint is small part 😉
Update soon tomorrow


Well can't do anything about the short update but I am glad that you liked it. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Great update.

Plz update soon.


Thanks dear😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Varsha001

Reading half way through...i thought you would again give a cliffhanger before mahir's answer...but you proved me wrong😆

Such an awesome awesome awesome! update.❤️


Thanks Varsha. 😃


I know you all have complaints that the story ended so abruptly. As VAruni rightly said the word limit got to me. But there is another reason to it. I will explain that reason in a bit.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

Great update. So sad it has to end so abruptly.
Nice ending for everybody. 👏

Hope you win the competition. 🤗



Thanks Nuomi!! Thanks for your never ending support and love. I will keep you posted about the developments in the competition. 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

U eneded ash 😭

A nice story though was short
But I actually I would like to say u have completed a family..
Andy ND summi relation was bitter in almost all the ff but I guess this was the one which has mostly broken relations that got healed with span of time by love
Looking for such cute stories ahead
Hope u win the competition
All the ash dear



Yes Pranu it was a bitter sweet feeling for me as well. But like all things even this had to end at some point.

Yes SuDy had a bitter relationship in all my FFs, but here they were just a couple who had developed a distance over the years. It happens to best of us. Bella was the trigger that brought them closer. So many families are like this. They love each other but are unable to express it. Sometimes a third person perspective helps.


I have seen so many fathers share a bitter relationship with their sons. Men are unable to express their affection the way women can. Although there is love in the father and son relationship, they are unable to express it. Bella did just that. With Bella Mahir saw a different side to his father's personality. A loving and friendly side. Bella herself is a practical girl. So she understood Andy's concern for Mahir. Being kind and just is fine, but the world is brutal and kindness can be taken as weakness. So it is important for Mahir to be shrewd and smart as well.


While Andy's intention's were well, his way of expressing was wrong. Bella stuck for Mahir when Andy taunted him, but at the same time made Mahir realise that ANdy's intentions were not wrong. So that way girl coming form a broken and bleeding family managed to stitch together a family that was on the verge of breaking.


Andy, due to various experiences in life had begun abhor love and kindness. While Mahir thought of shrewdness as something terrible. Bella helped the father son duo to find a balance in these necessary but harmful in excess personality traits. 😳


Thanks for the wishes. Will keep you posted of the developments. 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: nuomi.riceball

One question Ash ji.

Are you going for a sabbatical directly or are you going to update HYLILY first then take a sabbatical.



I am going on a at least a two week long sabbatical without updating anything. Post that I will update as and when possible. Some really exciting developments are happening in life career wise that will take up a lot of my free time. But I do realise that we are heading towards the end in the show and I want to finish HYLILY before that happens. The other one I don't know, but since it is an ongoing one, I don't see it ending anytime soon. Also some health issues have come up. So a 2 week break is a must right now. Sorry for making you all wait. 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer



It was actually not possible. Sorry. But I have another reason for not going down this lane. See, as you said Mahir is not trying to change Bella. And you are right. MAhir has not seen Bella lying or being sneaky. She has always been very straightforward with him and others.


Bella has many bad habits, she has a prickly side to her personality, she can sometimes be a bully as well, but has one very good quality and that is honesty and loyalty. She has been honest about herself. She has been unapologetic about her behaviour. She did not try to portray herself as someone she is not just to impress anyone. This honesty id refelcted in her behaviour. She honestly told Mahir about the nature of her relationship with Yuvi. She willingly confessed about her words that she said in a fit if anger to Janvi when Andy found out about Bella being Janvi's daughter. She is indeed a no filter girl. So her previous relationships will not matter to Mahir as he knows she will be very honest and loyal to him. He can see it in her eyes. No matter what you can't hide the emotions from your eyes. There is child like innocence there. No deceit or hidden agendas.

The way she wholeheartedly accepted his mother and father, her bonding with them was pure. It has impressed Mahir. The plus point was that she is her own self around SuDy. She is not being fake around them just because they are parents. That takes some guts. Mahir knows, despite her many flaws, she has a pure heart that craves love.


So he will accepted her immediately. And then there are no conditions in love. The past doesn't matter as long as your honest about it. And once the past has been spoken about and dealt with, only the present and future matters.


And I was going through your old comments. There was one where you mentioned about kid's hypocrisy about wanting luxury and complaining if parent's don't provide them money but also complaining about parent's not giving them time.I had purposely not answered t back then. I wanted you to read the full story and then I wanted to answer your comment.


As I have mentioned in one of the chapters, it was her biological father who pays for her expense right form her childhood. Janvi never paid for anything. Omkar also gives additional cheques to Janvi for her own personal expenses. Janvi is basically his mistress. Even now Bella's credit cards bills are paid by Omkar and not by Janvi. So Bella has every right to complain about her mother and say horrible things about her. Janvi has really not done anything for her daughter. She neither gave her any time nor did she earn for her daughter.


So this the reason why Bella hates her mother. She doesn't hate her biological father. She in fact appreciates him for providing her with money at least if not time and attention. He at least covered one aspect of parenting.


Just read u r reply dear ...why I said mahir should Ccept with a .gap .isnot bcos of. Bela past ...it's bcis she lacks perseverance ..and also I felt ..for mahir thus is all new right ..so he will be overwhelmed and he might think . He needs time ...

Past bf relationship is . Immaterial
..but i don' see her being patient ..

but .she is honest ...

Perseverance is as much important as being honest and love in a relationship

Many relationships fail not bcis theeres no love or honesty ..at one point of time in any relationship there will be honesty and love

But it can be sustained only through perseverance ...
I don't see her patiently trying to mend her relationship with her dad ..at least u did not touch that aspect bcos of word limit ..might be

Her mom ...I don't have any words about her ...but still did bela ever try to understand her mom ..from her mom view point ...

Bela was always thinkingthat mom did not give her love ..but dud sshe try to love her mom unconditionally ..and patiently ..after all she gave birth ..dies not matter why she gave birth

'i don't think so ..bcis if she tried ..she would not have those bad habits ..which she took up ..just bcis to inflict pain in her mom ..and in turn her mom will get angry on her and notice her...that's what she us expecting


And regarding that kids not understand ing parents it's not regarding this story ..it is general comment after observing so many tich spoiled kids ..always blaming their parents ..rather introspecting . And trying to understand their parents view point


Edited by VARUNI2014 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: The.Wanderer




I am going on a at least a two week long sabbatical without updating anything. Post that I will update as and when possible. Some really exciting developments are happening in life career wise that will take up a lot of my free time. But I do realise that we are heading towards the end in the show and I want to finish HYLILY before that happens. The other one I don't know, but since it is an ongoing one, I don't see it ending anytime soon. Also some health issues have come up. So a 2 week break is a must right now. Sorry for making you all wait.😳



Get well soon Ash ji and take care. 🤗
Edited by nuomi.riceball - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey ash hi sorry for being late here was busy a bit.

chp 12

Behir are having frequent study sessions wow things are interesting for them i wonder how they suppress all the sexual tension in between them and focus on studies mahir i can understand but bella i doubt that although chances of mahir being the hyper one is more given that it was forbidden fruit for him.

i so so wanted this scene of how mahir reacts in bella's apartment and also how bella defend him in front of andy but alas. Andy is right in his place of being a caring father its just that his way of expression is different.

both SYDY adored her and wanted their son to have the mentos moment soon but i guess he is tubelight in that department. behir are the future no doubt on that part.

janvi this women she want everything but dont want to work for it what was she thinking and its good she created scene in front of sehgals atleast they know what all she went through and will love bella even more. how ridiculous and miserable feeling it must be when the one who gave birth to us is denying our existence and bella had more then her share of pain.

you really like diwali dont you? waise it was very wise of SUDY to have bella stay with them otherwise even though the relationship was dead for her loneliness would have hurted her badly. this is first time i am happy that KT related result came positive😆😆

see now this is good combo YUNU they are perfect for each other anu valuing friendship of bella above her love i am certainly dreaming it.

bella being all nervous to approach now i am pakka in dreamland. how she realised this thing that she is in love with nerdy and also that she is nervous about him. she getting rejected OMG love does make people stupid😆😆 mahir is unaware oh thats not something new he is always like that jab tak ellan na karo nahi smjhta.

see this usually people approach parents that they are in love and here parents are approaching them that they are in love.how cool are SUDY they know very well that mahir se na ho payega and thats why pinning their hopes on bella. sharam karo mahir.

and then this of andy sumi going out i thought bella will do kitabe bahot see padhi hongi when they are out. maybe they will still have this song after confession when SUDY go outside next time.

this chapter was very short then usual and then again you leave it on cliffhangers
Edited by behirlover - 6 years ago

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