Behir Fan Fiction : THE FAULT IN OUR STARS - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31
Aww
So sweet of u
U r definitely able to convey ur point
We can easily understand
Thanks for continuously updating
U r super sweet
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Nice updates dear
Loved it
Mahir saved & living his life in small village.
Bela also reached there unconscious.
Mahir finally saw her & treated her.
I want misunderstandings to clear soon
Waiting for next update
Thanks
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Posted: 6 years ago
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-- So your are not a Muslim. We have another non-Muslim here.
-- Who?
-- Are wohi! Who did your treatment. You know what, he was also found in the river like you. It was the day to go to the town. When they went there by the river, they saw that boy almost dying.
Bela's eyes widened suddenly and her heart started biting fast.
-- What's his name?
-- Aditya.
-- Oh
Bela sounded disheartened. But there are still some hope. What if Mahir had also make it till this village !
-- Did you have another man who came here? You know maybe some 5-6 months back?
Safia couldn't reply Bela. She was talking to her while working in her vegetable garden, just then spotted the goat coming inside the fence.
-- Hey...hush...hush
Bela stood up and began to go outside the dawa.
-- Where are you going ?
-- Just like that...to see the village.
-- Yesterday at this moment you were about to die. Now you want to roam around the village! Only to get some curse for me from the villagers. No need, go and rest inside.
Bela didn't argue. How are they supposed to know that she is a naagin, she heals faster than any human being. She can breathe under the water.
Bela thought of meeting this guy called Aditya. She'll ask him had he seen anyone else in the jungle. She knows that's stupid, his condition might be so bad to notice anything. But she won't leave any stone unturned. Besides, she has to thank him for saving her life. She have to do it quick. She have to get back to the city soon, the snake charmer is still at large. She has to save the naagloke.
Mahir was just time passing in the jungle. Why has she come here? He doesn't want to face Bela. He has finished his work early in the morning and since then sitting in the jungle. Hekim ji called him yesterday in his chamber. and was so pleased with his smart actions. Seeing him happy, Mahir asked him to tell mukhya ji to let him go in the town. Thus he can stay out of Bela. He doesn't have any plan to return until Bela leaves. He knows she'll leave. Those who have nothing to live for will only live in this desserted village. The girl who ran away to not to get arrested is certainly not one of those kind.
Mahir heard someone coming through the woods. He went ahead and waited.
-- Imran?!
-- Areh Mahir!
He is the only person who knows Mahir's identity. Initially, Imran was very suspicious about the bullet of Mahir's arm. Just to assure him that no Mahir is not a member of any goons' gang, he had to tell him his entire journey. Mahir also helped Imran, who was so desperate to leave the village, in escaping 4 months ago.
-- So tell me. Did you get any job in the town?
-- Not yet Mahir. All my savings areare gone now, still nothing happened. I have to move away from the town to the city. I don't want to get caught by abbu.
-- Why don't you go and apologies to Mukhya ji and get back in the village ?
-- I can't do that Mahir. I have a vision, to change the fate of this village. That's why I have to stand up on my own feet and that's not possible living in this remote area. I can't hold our past to destroy our present like them.
-- Ok, I understand. So why have you come now?
-- I'm going to the city tomorrow. Won't be back for a long time. Wanted to see my family for that.
Mahir got an idea that will solve every problem.
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-- But why are you sleeping here?
Rafi said by giving signs that Adi bhai has asked him to do so.
-- Okay then.
In this village everyone sleeps early. Bela had roamed around the village in the afternoon. Even the hekim's chamber. But didn't find Aditya. She plans to go away the next morning. When the villagers will go to the town, they will take her along with them. Bela decided to meet Aditya before leaving.
-- Areh Mahir, it's not that deep wound. Stop smashing turmeric.
-- Chup kar ke bainth.
-- Suddenly there was a knock on the door.
-- Imran, go and tell Rafi to manage for tonight.
-- Apne bhai ke liye aise ek din macchar bardasht nahin kar sakta kya!
Imran was blabbering while opening the door. He wasn't wearing a shirt. So the moment he opened the door and saw Bela, he got panicked.
-- I'm sorry ! I'm sorry!
Bela turned her face away. Imran got the shirt and wore it. While Mahir hided himself behind the door.
-- Who are you?
-- umm...Aditya?
imran nodded yes, understanding the whole situation. So he began to act as Mahir had told him.
-- I actually came to thank you for doing my treatment.
-- It was my duty. Anything else.
-- ummm... actually I heard that you were found near the river of...
-- Listen young lady. I don't think it's appropriate to chat at this hour of the night. I'm very tired.
He could hardly finish the final line but Mahir closed the door on Bela's face. Bela astonished by the action felt so disgusted and went towards Safia hatun's hut.
Mahir was still holding the door. Only he knows what he felt while only a thin layer of fence was in between Bela and him.
-- Are you alright bhai?
Mahir nodded yes. Imran went to the chauki to sleep. If he could see the face of Mahir, he would have seen his eyes being red with tears.
Before the sunrise, Mahir and Imran went near the hut of the Mukhya ji. Imran saw each of his family members and then began to leave the village. Mahir handed him a letter.
-- Go to the manager of the Sehgal Industries and show him this recommendations letter. Tell them that you had helped me once and I promised to get you a job. And maintain distance from Andy Sehgal.
Imran felt so greatful, tears roll back from his eyes. He hugged Mahir and then began to leave.
In the morning, some 8 to 10 men from the village, along with Rafi, Jamil and Bela, began to leave for the town. Mahir heard that Bela will be leaving with the clan, therefore he told hekim ji that he doesn't want to go. Hekim ji confusedly agreed.
Mahir carefully opened the small window of his hut, saw the clan moving, and saw Bela. As if someone was stabbing his heart with a knife. He kept watching until they got disappeared in the woods.
-- She was very pretty girl. I told her to stay more but she said she has some important things to do.
Mahir saw Afia and Safia hatun talking this while leaving the premise. Mahir got inside the chamber and began to look for work to forget everything.
-- Aditya! You here? You asked for leave!
-- It's not needed anymore hekim ji.
He palely smiled.
He finally got sone herbs that needs to be separated from other leaves and began to clean them while standing. His face facing the opposite direction of the door.
-- Areh tum? Tum gayin nehin?
-- Kuch bhool gayin thi.
Mahir was shocked hearing the voice. And turned around and faced Bela. Bela's eyes red and flooded with tears.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
thanks for updating
nice
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
Finally Bela was Mahir alive
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
update please
update please
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
as if something is left behind. But what? Bela had this feeling while walking out of the village. The clan walked in front, Jamil-Bela-Rafi were walking behind with a distance.
-- Did you like our village? Jamil asked.
-- Yes, its very beautiful. Like a heaven.
Bela replied with a smile. Then she asked Jamil
-- Who is your favourite in the village Jamil?
-- umm...Samira, my friend.
-- Oh Mukhya ji's daughter.
-- Yes. we play board games together. We chat a lot.
-- Ok. And who's favourite of our Rafi?
Bela asked while putting her hand on Rafi's shoulder.
-- Definitely Aditya bhai. And if you ask Adi bhai also, he will take Rafi's name.
Jamil replied with a laugh. Bela also laughed.
-- By the way, he is my second favourite.
Jamil said.
-- But he is so arrogant no!
Said Bela and both Rafi and Jamil stood shocked.
-- Arrogant! and Aditya bhai! never! He is the sweetest person among the elders. He never scolds us like other elders. He has made us a board game also. And he never closes his hut's door so that we can go and play to him. Yes but one thing I don't like is when he tries us to teach. I don't like to study.
Bela was listening to Jamil while walking. The she asked
-- I heard your Adi bhai was also found in the river like me!
-- Yes. But his condition was worst than yours. You know, he had all the bruised marks on his entire body, there were days he didn't wake up at all. Hekim ji had appointed Rafi for many days to only check if he is breathing or not. Besides, hekim ji was also afraid if his left arm would work ever or not. He was shot on his arm.
The last line shook Bela. She stopped. For moments she was numb. She had met Aditya the day before, she had seen his arms, but there was not any mark of bullet shot. And Mahir was also shot in his arm. Which means ...
-- What happened didi. Why have you stopped?
Jamil asked.
-- Hey, don't take too long to walk kids. We have to pass it by dark.
One of the clan member shouted to them seeing them so behind.
-- Didi plz walk.
But Bela's entire world has stopped moving. Rafi was looking at Bela's face.
-- I would go back. Bela said.
-- Huh! why?
-- I...I...I have forgotten something. I have to go back.
Saying this Bela started to go towards the village again while Rafi followed her and Jamil went to inform the other clan members.
Rafi couldn't get how is she walking so fast, what has got into her. Bela didn't know anything else, she just knows that there is now a 60-40 possibility of Mahir to be alive and in that village. But if it is, then why did he choose to avoid Bela?
Soon Bela reached the premise.
-- Where can be your Adi bhai at this time?
Rafi pointed towards the hekim's chamber. Bela reached the chamber as if with a blink of eyes. She entered the chamber room, saw hekim ji and him facing opposite and doing something. It was not hard for Bela to recognize at all. Her eyes flooded with tears.
-- Areh tum! Tum gayin nehin?
-- Kuch bhool gayi thi. Bela replied still her eyes on Mahir.
The voice shocked Mahir to the core. He turned Back and saw Bela. Bela neither could hear nor see anything except for Mahir now. Mahir also stood numb with his eyes on Bela's eyes. Hekim ji was still saying something but the rest of the two couldn't hear what he was saying. Then Mukhya ji called hekim. He went outside. Bela didn't know what happened to her. She ran off to Mahir and hugged him tightly. Mahir unable to understand what he should do was only standing.
-- Mahir...Mahir...thank God You're alive! I thought I have lost you.
Bela's tears were not about to stop. A mixed emotion of pain and happiness was all over her. Suddenly she felt a push. She shockingly looked at Mahir and saw the rage on his eyes.
-- Kya chahiyen? Why have you come back? Can't you endure that I'm alive? You have come to kill me as well huh!
Bela couldn't believe her ears. Is it Mahir really saying this? How?
-- Mahir yeh ap kyan...!
-- Kya karoon! How dare you come and acting in front of me? What did you think? You'll come and hug me and I'll forget everything you did to me.
-- Mahir...Mahir listen I can explain.
-- Tumhari baat sunna to dur ki baat hain Bela main tumhari shakal tak nehin dekhna chahta...
-- No Mahir ji plz ek baar meri baat toh sunlijiye
-- Aditya, bring the pot for mukhya ji's daughter. Hekim ji called him. Mahir took the bowl and began to leave.
-- Mahir...Mahir listen. But Mahir left without paying any heed.
When Mahir went out Bela collapsed on the floor.

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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Nice update dear
Finally they met
Hope that their misunderstanding finish soon
Thanks
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Awesome...
update soon
story is amazing 🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Thanks God
You finally updated

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