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Khushi

@--khushi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Res

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lovely Reshu... just loved it...

awww poor mohan accident kar diya uska 😔 ...chal koi nai ab Megha dhiyan rakhegi uska 😉

btw if the new promo is mohan's dream then pertik is taking revenge for what 😕???

ok precap is abt mohan's mom-dad...

so before show we have Reshu's story for Mohan's dad 😆

Edited by --khushi-- - 13 years ago

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Wow ! I just love the way you write ! 🤗

Perfect dialogues - "Teri mummy pooch rahi hai ya daant rahi hai" 🤣

Love it, as usual.. 😳

Vaise, title change kar lo - from OS to FF 👍🏼

Itna achha likhogi to hum aise hi thodi na chodenge 😈 😊

Right friends ? 😉

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SUMAN GHOSH

@big_007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Are yaar Nanhi_Angel...U have the magical power to mesmerize the reader of ur story...It's so nice,mature and well composed that it just reflect the very true nature of our NBT...Excellent work...Keep going...

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

@ reshma :

nice story. waise humlog kaafi dur ki soch te hai, nahi 😆?? matlab, abhi show mein dono ki dosti tak nahi hui aur yaha tumne prateek aur deenanath ko ek saath milwa diya 😆 !! but you know what, mujhe nahi lagta hai ki prateek aur deenanath ek saath milenge, dono ki independent stories hogi, although after the Jannat resort incident prateek and mohan will be daggers drawn at each other, par phir bhi prateek deenanath ke saath nahi milega, agar usse mohan aur megha ke khilaaf kuch karna hoga to apni neeji dusmani ke wajah se hi karega .. anywayz lets see what happens, this is just my point of view.

precap sounds interesting, lets see how you deal Senior Mr. Bhatnagar and his son's story. 😊

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Nanhi_Angel

@Nanhi_Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

@Neelima

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Nanhi_Angel

@Nanhi_Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

@ Sofiya,

Thanks a lot dear😊

@ Khushi,

Thanks a lot Khushi😊

Ha ha...😆 Are yaar... Chota sa accident hain... Don't worry😃

Yeah.. i want to write a story abt Mohan's dad😊

@ Shaili,

Thanks a lot dear😊

Lagta hain ab title change karna padega... OS to SS... Let me see... 😃

I'll try to write FF... But not now... I have one exam in May... have to prepare for tht... After tht i'll try...

Thanks for the love😃

@ big007

Thanks a lot dear😊

@ polly,

Thanks a lot dear😊

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Nanhi_Angel

@Nanhi_Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Khushi :btw if the new promo is mohan's dream then pertik is taking revenge for what 😕???

Polly: but you know what, mujhe nahi lagta hai ki prateek aur deenanath ek saath milenge, dono ki independent stories hogi, although after the Jannat resort incident prateek and mohan will be daggers drawn at each other, par phir bhi prateek deenanath ke saath nahi milega, agar usse mohan aur megha ke khilaaf kuch karna hoga to apni neeji dusmani ke wajah se hi karega

@ Khushi & Polly...

Gals, i will tell u wat i actually imagined for Pratik's track.. Pratik gifts jewellery to Megha nd talks something rubbish... Megha gets shock... then understands tht Mohan was right abt Pratik.. She gets angry and slaps Pratik. Mohan enters the cabin nd slaps Pratik😆 Seeing Mohan Megha cries loudly... Mohan consoles her☺️ Then Mohan threatens Pratik tht he will tell everything to Prerna... Pratik thinks tht if Prerna comes to know abt it, she will give divorce and throws him out of PL as Prerna owns PL...(Kaash yeh sach hota😍 ) Afraid Pratik pleads Meghan not to tell this to nyone.. And also says that he will change, doesn't repeat such things .. So He acts like he has changed and become gud person... But he wants to take revenge on Meghan for his insult... So he acts like gud infront of everyone... But joins hands wid DN( lik destroying evidences) so tht Meghan can't prove Amar's innocence...

(I would prefer to see Pratik track going this way rather than Jannat resort scene🤢)

Edited by Nanhi_Angel - 13 years ago