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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3:

Megha : Nanhi aao beta... Chalte hain.

[Nanhi looked at Mohan and winked. Mohan caressed her chin and Nanhi Mohan's]

Megha : [looking at Guru] Uska khayaal rakhana' Use rest karna chaahiye.

[looking at Mohan] take care Mohan.

Guru : Didi, bhaiyya mera baat kahaan sunenge?

Megha :[saying to Guru] Uski maa ko bula lo'

Guru : Mummy ji ghar mein nahin hain.. Voh bhaiyyaji ki maasi ke ghar gayi hain' Aur phone bhi nahin lag rahaa hain unka.

Megha : Aur papa?

[Guru didn't say nything and looked at Mohan. Mohan is disturbed and looked away.]

Guru : Ji, voh bhi gaye hain. Mein bhaiyyaji ka khayaal rakhoonga'

[Megha smiled and went from thr wid Nanhi]

[Mohan was still upset. He was trying to control his emotions. But he couldn't ' Old memories came to his mind]

Flashback: ****************************************************************

[Mr.Bhatnagar returned from a business tour wid Indu Bhtnagar. Mohan was sitting writing something in his room]

Mr.Bhatnagar: Mohan' Mohan' [his voice was filled wid anger]

Indu : Suniye, Aap shaant ho jaayiye. Itna gussa aapke tabiyat ke liye theek nahin hain.

Mr.Bhatnagar : Tum aaj chup raho Indu...

[Mohan who was unaware of the matter came wid joy and wished them.]

Mohan : Are maa' papa' kaise hain aap?

Mr.Bhatnagar : Tumne Virendra ke bare mein akhabaar mein kyaa likha hain?

Mohan : Paapa' Aap ab aaram kijiye. Hum baad mein baat karte hain na'

Mr.Bhatnagar : Nahin' Abhi baat karna hain mujhe. Tumne aisa kyon kiya?

Mohan : Paapa' Mujhe bhi pehle yakin nahin hua tha ki Virendra uncle isme shaamil hain' Lekin uske ek naukar ne bataaya, Saboot ke saath toh mujhe yakin karna hi padha'

Mr.Bhatnagar :Tumne Virendra ke bare mein likhne se pehle mujhse ek baar poochna zaroori nahin samajha?

Indu : Jee, Voh aapke tabiyat ke bare mein sochkar nahin bataaya hoga' Hain na Monu?

Mr.Bhatnagar : [looked at Indu wid anger] Meine tumhe kahaan thaa na Indu. Tum chup raho' Mein Mohan se pooch rahaa hoon..

Mohan : Paapa' Meine socha ki aapko kyon pareshaan karna'

Mr.Bhatnagar: Achcha '

Mohan. Haan papa' Mein

[Mr.Bhatnagar cut Mohan's words and said]

Mr.Bhatnagar : Tum aaj se mujhe papa mat kehna' Tujhe pataa hain mein aaj apne dost ke saamne kitna sharminda hoon tere vajah se'

Mohan : Aapko apna bte par bharosa nahin hain kyaa?

Mr.Bhatnagar : thaa' lekin ab nahin raha' kyonki mein use jaanta hoon'

Lekin tumne kisi ek aadmi ki baat sunakar uspe bina saboot ke aarop lagaaya'

Mohan : Lekin meine koi galati nahin kiyaa' Unhone sab sabooton ko kharid liyaa thaa' isliye court mein sachchayi saamne nahin aaya' lekin mein sachchayi saabeet karke hi rahoonga'.

Mr.Bhatnagar : Galti nahin kiyaa? Galati ko maanne ki bajaye tum reasons dekar justify karna chaahate ho? Mein tumse ye hummed nahin kiya thaa' Tumne ek achche aadami pe ungli uthaaya' Mein use tumse jyaada jaanta hoon' mere saamne mat rehna tum'

Indu [pleading wid teary eyes] : Aisa mat kahiye' Kahaan jaayega Monu? Usse anjaane mein galti ho gayaa hoga. Maaf kijiye.

Mr.Bhatnagar : Maafi??? Theek hain' isse kaho ki yehn Virendra ke saamne jaakar maafi maange. Agar voh maaf karega toh mein karoonga'

Indu : Theek hain' Voh maafi maangega' Monu'. [She looked at Mohan]

Mohan : Nahin maa' Mein usse maafi nahin maangoonga' Mein galat nahin hoon' Mujhe apne upar bharosa hain'

[Mr.Bhatnagar looked at Mohan wid more anger and Mohan continued looking at Mr.Bhatnagar]

Aapne hi sikhaaya thaa na' Agar hum galat nahin hain toh kisise nahin darna chaahiye' Apna sir uthaakar jeena chaahiye' Mein bhi galat nahin hoon' Mein chala jaaoonga yahaan se lekin use maafi nahin maangoonga'

Mr.Bhatnagar : Dekha Indu' Over confident hain yeh' galti manne se yeh chota ban jaayega' tum uska tarafdaari karna band karo'

[Indu was crying. Mr.Bhatnagar was angry. Mohan went to room and packed his things' come back wid a bag' ]

Mohan : Maa... chalta hoon' [he took her blessings and bowed to take Mr.Bhatnagar's blessings too. But he didn't bless. Mohan left home]

Flashback ***************************************************************

[Guys' Flashback filmy ho gayaa kya?😉]

Mohan : Mein galat nahin thaa papa' lekin achcha hua' thnx to u' Varna mein humesha yahin dokhe mein rehta ki Rashmi mujhse sachcha pyaar karti hain [he told himself ]

[ Tears dropped frm his eyes. He wiped and Guru noticed it]

Guru : Bhaiyyaa' Purani baton ko kyon yaad karte ho?

[Mohan didn't tell nything but looked at Guru wid pain. He knew he can't hide nything from Guru.]

[Its night. Mohan is watching Mr.Bhatnagar's photo in his mobile. Door was open. Nanhi came in wid a box. Mohan didn't notice her. She came near him and saw the photo]

Nanhi : Yeh kaun hain?

[Mohan kept mobile beside.]

Mohan : Are chavanni, tu kab aayi?

Nanhi : Jab tum photo dekh rahe the tab ' Kiska hain?

Mohan : Mere baap' Mr.Bhatnagar. Voh chod' Yeh kyaa hain?

[Mohan changed the topic when he saw a box in Nanhi's hand]

Nanhi : Khaana' Mummy ne bheja hain' [She smiled]

Mohan : Teri mummy? [he asked wid surprise and Guru came from inside ]

Nanhi : Haan' Meri mummy' Mein subah aakar box leke jaaoongi' Bye' [she reached door]

Mohan: Sunnaa Chavanni, ruk' idhar aaa'

[Nanhi came near him. Mohan hugged her and said]

Mohan : Tu mera angel hain'

Nanhi :[ said wid smile] Pataa hain spiderman? ' Mere papa bhi aisa hi kahte the'

[Mohan kissed on Nanhi's forehead. Nanhi winked and then left wishing Mohan and Guru gudnite]

[ I love Mohan-Nanhi scenes a lot' Am also a daddy's gal😊]

Guru : [Closed the door weaving hand to Nanhi] Bhaiyyaa, ek baat kahoon?

Mohan : Kyaa hain?

[Guru sat infront of Mohan on chair]

Guru : Bhaiyya, mere baaba ko shaadi se pehle ek baar typhoid hua tha' Unhe khaana bilkul achcha nahin lagta thaa' Pataa hain? Maa roz baaba ke liye khud khaana banaake unhe dene aati thi' Aur baaba maa ke haath ka khaana aise khaate the jiase yeh sirf khaana nahin amrut hain' Aisa thaa unka pyaar shaadi se pehle hi' [Guru teased him]

Mohan : Ufff' Guru'. [looked at him pretending to b angry]

Guru : [smiling mischievously ]Bhaiyya, mein plate leke aaoonga [He went into kitchen to take plates]

[Mohan remembered Megha and smiled]

[Ami, Dekh tera Monu toh gayaa😆' Mujhe kuch kehna mat' ]

[Next day Morning. Mohan is sitting near window looking at Megha's room. Guru is smirking at him. Door bell... Guru opened door. Megha stepped in wid Nanhi. Mohan looked at them wid surprise. ]

Megha : Gud morning Mohan. Ab kaisa hain?

Mohan : Aa' Haan' theek hain'😕

Guru : Dekhiye didi' Bhaiyya keh rahe hain ki unhe aaj hi office jaana hain?

Megha : Nahin' Aaj nahin.. Tum aaj rest karo' Mein Pratik sir ko bataaoongi'

Chot chota sa hoga' Lekin dard itni aasaani se nahin jaati'😆

[Guru smirked at Mohan😉]

Bye Mohan. Apna khayaal rakhana' [Mohan nodded his head staring Megha]

Nanhi : Bye Spiderman. Mein school se aane ke baad aaoongi. [Mohan smiled weaving his hand]

Guys, I am ending my OS wid this part. Hoping tht u liked Mr.Bhatnagar's story. Thank u all for ur love and support.😃

Edited by Nanhi_Angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
nice cute cute one😆 monu sach mein shona baby hein😍
Mr.bhatnagar abhi se sabhi ke dimag me aane lage rashmi kam thi jo bhi aane lage😆

but wonderful dear tu to writer ban gai wah😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Liked ur Mr. Bhatnagar story! Thoda filmy toh chalta hai.

Monu toh pehele si lut chuka hai, barbaad ho chuka hai. jo jo na hone ki tips karan ko de raha tha wo sab usi ke saath horaha hai bechara kuch nahi karpaaraha. Kuch karne ka iraadha bhi nahi hai mohan me.

Why are you ending it? Continue later after you feel like.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Amisha.Laher

nice cute cute one😆 monu sach mein shona baby hein😍
Mr.bhatnagar abhi se sabhi ke dimag me aane lage rashmi kam thi jo bhi aane lage😆

but wonderful dear tu to writer ban gai wah😆



Mohan ne kisi ko shayar, kisi ko writer ya kisi ko shayari chor bana diya!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

awww, daddy's girl, thats sweet, 😳 meri aur meri pitaji se bilkul nahi banti 😆

anyways, sweet story. loved the filmy part too. and sounds like exactly each character would say. loved mohika part and loved guru ma-pitaji love story, typhoid, nice one 🤣

but why are ending it 😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@subha
Mohan ne kisi ko shayar, kisi ko writer ya kisi ko shayari chor bana diya!

well said...🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Excellent update Reshu!

Mohan ki mummy ka naam Indu hain? I did not this.

Guru's Maa-Pitaji are back 😆 Guru has a story for every occasion with a moral attached to it.

Thanks for sharing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ reshma :
sweet story , par yaar, yeh Mr. bhatnagar wala kissa kuch jyada hi filmy ban gaya nahi ?? upar se yeh Rashmi, pata nahi iss par se suspense kab uthega ?? * indirectly asking you to write an OS on her * . apart from all this,

Mohan: Sunnaa Chavanni, ruk' idhar aaa'

[Nanhi came near him. Mohan hugged her and said]

Mohan : Tu mera angel hain'

Nanhi :[ said wid smile] Pataa hain spiderman? ' Mere papa bhi aisa hi kahte the'

[Mohan kissed on Nanhi's forehead. Nanhi winked and then left wishing Mohan and Guru gudnite]

the best part of the entire OS, according to me👏. i would love to see it happening on the show someday .. nanhi comparing mohan to her father, it would be a scene worth watching !!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
oyiii

nice ,cutee Part yar loved guru ma-pitaji love story..:P
oh shit up you not stop this cutee OS Plz con naaa...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Loved it 🤗
All the best aspects of NBT - Mohan aur 'biwi' Guru, Spiderman-Chavanni (❤️ Farishta and Angel ❤️) Mohan-Megha and last but not all all least - Guru's Maa-Pitaji story 🤣

Arre Yaaarrr ! Sunn na, itni achhi cheezon ko aise hi khatam nahi kar dete. Plijj continue *puppy face* 😆 Ho sake to..😊

By the way, Me too daddy's girl 😃 Everyone used to call me 'Daddy's Delicate Darling' 😳❤️

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