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Nanhi_Angel

@Nanhi_Angel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

Guys, this is my first try to write an OS. Hope u will tolerate it😊

Its not the same kind of OS usually u ppl read... Dialogue types r kinda different...

Welcome for ur suggestions friends...

Part 1:

[Guru preparing Parota, Mohan sitting on chair lost in Megha's thoughts. Guru wonders why bhaiyya is not in hurry to have food nd go to office today. Then smiles, understanding that Mohan is thinking about Megha]

Guru :kaam mein man nahin lagta

khaane peene pe dhyaan nahin rehta

har pal kisi soch mein doobe rehte hain

raat bhar bina soye jaagte rehte hain

kya hua hain aapko?

pyaar vyaar toh nahin?😉

[Guru teasing in his usual style]

Mohan: pyaar? pyaar toh paagal log karte hain

Mujhe karne ke liye bahut kaam hain

Bas, yuhin kuch soch rahaa tha yaar

tu bhi na, chal... muh band karke kaam kar

[trying to hide his feelings]

Guru: Bhaiyya, aapko chupaana nahin aata hain

aap na bole toh bhi hum samajh jaate hain

maan lo ki hua hain Mohabbat

Humein bhi pataa hain aapka haalaat

Mohan: Guru kam kar apna yeh bakwas

Aur chod do dekhana voh serials

Mujhe kuch nahin hua

Ab khaane ke liye kuch doge kyaa?

Mohan: [Eating slowly, thinking. All flashbacks of Meghan]

Yeh kyaa hua kaise hua kab hua

pataa hi nahin chala ki pyaar hua

[saying himself]

Guru: [smirking looking at Mohan]

Bhaiyyaji, plate khaali hua

Aur ek Parota daaloon kyaa?😉

[Embarrassed Mohan goes out (without washing hands🤣)wid his bag giving Guru an angry look, who is smiling at Mohan]

Edited by laadoo - 13 years ago

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-RadhaRani-

@-RadhaRani-

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

arey wah guru ke saath saath tune bhi mohan ko teasing karne ka theka le liya😆 wah sahi jaa rahi beta or pareshaan kar monu ko.

keep writing dear.

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Posted: 13 years ago

aww is not quite different is very different OS 😆 liked so much very cuteee oyy Plz do cont soon :)i wanna read more who is smiling at mohan ..?😲😛
cant wait Plz update soon 😳

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Khushi

@--khushi--

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

arre wah Reshu tune bhi likhna shuru kar diya 🤗 ...

gud one...enjoyed guru's dialogs but why so short???? font size nahi length increase kar😆

next time i want a long one from u 😊

Edited by --khushi-- - 13 years ago

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Nisha

@bablinisha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

too cute, typical guru mohan conversation, add ma-pitaji love story 😆

keep writing 👍🏼

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Crazy! :P

@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Wow ! Cute scene 😳 Loved it 🤗 Guru-Monu scenes are always soo adorable ❤️ But I agree with Khushi - long one next time, okay ? 😉

P.S. That makes next time compulsory ! 😈

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Mamta

@misty85

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Nice... I liked it... who says your hindi is not so good... It was really great.

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.Umsasl.

@.Umsasl.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey very different OS liked so much, i always like guru mohan convo ,on t.v also .

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Nanhi_Angel

@Nanhi_Angel

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

@ Amisha,

Thanks a lot Ami😊

@ Sofia,

Thanks a lot dear😊 sure will write soon...

Its Guru smiling at Mohan.

@ Khushi,

Thanks a lot dear😊

Likhane ka mood aaya aaj😉 toh likh diyaa...

First try hain na... isiliye socha ki chalo ek short OS likh deti hoon.. Agar theek nahin hua toh next part nahin likhoongi... But now i'll write... Yaar, Long one next time for sure😊