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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: laadoo

@ Khushi,

Thanks a lot dear😊
Likhane ka mood aaya aaj😉 toh likh diyaa...
First try hain na... isiliye socha ki chalo ek short OS likh deti hoon.. Agar theek nahin hua toh next part nahin likhoongi... But now i'll write... Yaar, Long one next time for sure😊

will wait for it dear...write ti soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
Sooo poetic and beautiful...keep going...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ big007,
Thanks a lot dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oye!! I've read an OS after a very long time..n loved it!!!
Couldn't u write an FF? n next when u write, make a point to PM me, coz I won't like to miss when u write 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww.. its just tooo cuteee...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ dkmistery,
Thanks a lot dear😊
Sure i'll try to write a FF too... and will Inform u frm next time.

@ PrincessGokshe,

Thanks a lot dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ nanhi_angel :
hehe lolz😆, bechara mohan..jab dekho koi na koi uski khichai karta rehta hai, show mein guru aur yaha humlog😆, nice OS bdw, specially the way you have rhymed the lines..liked it .👏
waise, what should i call you ?? what was your previous id ??😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Polly03,

Thanks a lot dear😊
Actually all credit goes to Hima😊 Pehle mujhe pataa bhi nahin thaa ki SS, OS, FF ka matalab kyaa hain... She explained me everything 😊
I owe her for this😊

My name is Reshma. My previous id was laadoo


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Posted: 13 years ago
#19

Guys, I couldn't continue these different kind of dialogues becoz I thought such dialogues for Mohan-Megha and others sounds dramatic . It suits only for Mohan -Guru convo. Hoping tht u guys understand. 😊And pehle post mein precap nahin likha thaa mein. I added precap this time.😃

Part 2:

[Prabhat leher office. (i am writing this thinking that New promo is a dream of Mohan. Otherwise i can't imagine Megha working in Prabhat leher after that. ) Megha is writing some article. Dimpy is watching it. Megha finishes writing after a while and turns to see Mohan is not there in his chair.]

Megha : [Wondering why Mohan didn't come yet looks at watch and thinks herself]

Office ka time ho gaya. Yeh kyon nahin dikhaayi de rahaa hain?

Hamesha vaqt se pehle hi aata'

Dimpy: Oh! Aaj toh Mr.AYM nahin aaye. Varna unse pooch lete ki article kaisa hain.

Megha: Haan Dimpy.

[after 2 sec] Dimpy, Karan ko pataa hoga'

Dimpy : Haan.

Karan, Aaj Mohan sir nahin aayenge kyaa?

Karan : Aana chaahiye tha. Mohan bhai ne mujhe inform bhi nahin kiya.

[Pratik comes in]

Pratik: (looking at Karan) Mohan kahaan hain?

Karan :Sir, aaya nahin ab tak.

Pratik: Aaya nahin? (looks at watch) aate hi mere cabin mein bejh do.

Karan: Ok sir.

[Pratik goes out]

[Its afternoon. Megha is having lunch. She looks at Mohan's chair. She smiles remembering their lunch in lift. After lunch, she waters cactus]

[Its evening. Guru is buying fruits near house. Megha sees him nd thinks whether to ask him about Mohan or not. She stops there seeing Nanhi. Nanhi is buying pencil. Nanhi sees Megha and comes there.]

Nanhi : [With a cute smile] Mummy, aap aa gaye. Meine pura homework kar liya. Mein spiderman ke ghar jaaoon?

[Megha nods. Guru comes there hearing Nanhi's voice]

Guru: [He looks at both Megha and Nanhi with sad face] Megha didi, Mohan bhaiyya ka accident hua.

Megha : Kyaa?

Nanhi : Kyaa?

[Both asked in shock]

Megha : Ab kaisa hain?

Nanhi :Guru, spiderman ko jyaada chot toh nahin hua na'

[Both asked in concern]

Guru : Jyaada chot nahin' Lekin dard ho raha hain unhe.

juice ke liye fruits lene aayaa tha.

[Nanhi was really worrying about her spiderman. Megha also decides to visit Mohan as he is not well.]

Megha : Chalo Nanhi, mein bhi aati hoon.

[Guru, Nanhi and Megha walked towards Mohan's door]

[Mohan's house. Mohan was singing 'Pyaar maanga hain tumhi se'' song which is coming in Radio. Mohan is sitting on bed, completely absorbed in song. Guru opens the door and comes in. Megha and Nanhi follows him. Megha and Nanhi smiles hearing Mohan singing. Guru coughs to get Mohan's attention. Mohan turns and sees Megha, Nanhi standing there with Guru. He feels embarrassed. Then Mohan staring Megha. Nanhi goes near him. Mohan takes his eyes off Megha.]

Nanhi : Spiderman tumhara accident ho gayaa' [Asks with concern and worry]

Mohan : Are chavanni, Kuch nahin hua. Chota sa hain' [Mohan smiles at Nanhi showing the wound ]

Megha: Accident kaise hua? Bike chalaate vaqt tumhaara dhyaan kahaan rehta hain? Agar tumhe kuch ho jaataa toh'

Mohan: [In very low voice] Are teri mummy pooch rahi hain yaa daant rahi hain? [Nanhi hears him and winks with a cute smile]

Megha : Tumne kuch kahaa?

Mohan : Nahin' Voh mein kuch soch rahaa tha'

[He didn't want Megha to know what he was thinking while riding bike.]

Megha : Tumne office mein inform kyon nahin kiya? Pratik sir pooch rahe the.

[He gets flashback of his accident hearing Pratik's name. Mohan was riding bike. He gets a call from one of his informers. He says something and Mohan says 'Kyaa?' in shock. Then he cuts the call nd starts bike. Mohan is thinking 'Pratik sir ne Deenanath se haath milaayaa? Voh nahin chaahte ki Amar Vyas ki begunayi saamne aaye? Voh revenge lena chaahte hain? Mujhe zaroor kuch karna hoga. ' He remembers him saying Nanhi and Megha that he will prove Amar's innocence. He doesn't notice auto coming and auto hits the bike. Mohan fells down.]

Nanhi : Tumne kuch khaaya kyaa?

Mohan :Nahin yaar' Yeh Guru itna kharaab khaana banata hain ki khaane ka man hi nahin karta.

[Mohan smiles at Guru. Nanhi also smiles. Guru pretends to be angry.]

Guru : [complaining] Bhaiyya ne davayi nahin liya.

Nanhi: Tum bikul bachchon jaise ho. [Mohan is like 'What?']

[Nanhi takes medicines from Guru and gives it to Mohan.]

Lo.. Abhi khaa lo.

[Mohan takes it becoz its his Chavanni's order]

[Megha and Guru are smiling seeing them.]

Precap : Megha : [saying to Guru] Uski maa ko bula lo'

Guru : Mummy ji ghar mein nahin hain.. Voh bhaiyyaji ki maasi ke ghar gayi hain' Aur phone bhi nahin lag rahaa hain unka.

Megha : Aur papa?

[Guru doesn't say nything and looks at Mohan. Mohan is disturbed and looks away.]



Welcome for ur suggestion guys😊

Edited by Nanhi_Angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow yaar so cute i like this line Arey Teri Mummy pooch rahi hein ya daat rahi hein😆

wonderful keep it up👍🏼

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