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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sowmya_jairam



Yeah, VV went wrong very far from his creation very fast. And because of that, Devki went wrong too. It just became too unreal at the end; this was the show that had the audacity to show a character like IMV in a show like MB. Everything else would be fine, except VV's and consequently Devki's characters ending up the way they did; and even more importantly, IMV's character sticking it until the very end when finally it succumbed as well. I would have made peace with the show if IMV got his deserved end, I really didn't care about the other characters by that time. It wasn't meant to be 😭

Roark and Gail are the 2 characters I have sworn to love as well. None of even Ayn Rand's other characters have come close to Roark or Gail. I disliked Atlas Shrugged, but love Fountainhead unabashedly. Roark and Gail are fundamentally the same, but come across very differently. It's easy to love Roark, there can't be any other way. Very like Devki when she was first introduced, not so much the one who was shown at the end. It's ironic because Ayn Rand's Roark doesn't need or care for other's love as long as they respect his work and he has Dominique and Gail by his side. He's an open book with a beautiful end, it's a different matter that some people find it difficult to read or don't want to read him. Gail is more difficult to love. It's easy to fear him and even respect him, but difficult to see underneath all those layers for the man he is. He sold his soul to get what he assumed was power, and it was trampled. But he was still virginal, he had honor in dishonor. He crushed everything in his way because he didn't believe anyone was worthy of his love; when he found someone who did, he lost his all in trying to protect that love. My heart went out to him in the end, the man who had closed all doors to himself, but who could not be blissful in ignorance and had to suffer knowing all. Do you see the connection between Gail and IMV? I think I was going off tangent there writing about my favorite characters, sorry about that 😳 I'm looking forward to what you do with MB and especially IMV. Thanks for working on the SS for all of us😊


Sowmya.. the last time u had brought the analogy of IMV and Gail out in the fore.. I ran home with it.. I love Gail as well.. for exactly the same reasons.. in fact I was telling munira.. when she had asked me if I read Atlas Shrugged.. that I somehow couldn't feel the book.. after fountainhead bak in the days.. and had left it.. I feel like some of us.. kindred literature lovers found each other through IMV

Gail and Roark are imp part of my love for fiction.. and I have maintained the only other persona tht has affected me like tht is in non-fiction.. Chris Gardener.. the only other SS I did write for a friend's blog.. was a love story.. amongst 2 architects.. who met again after a long time.. reliving the old days.. and their fervor.. in fact the hero was called Roark by his friends for some of the facets he had.. maverick to be one.. whereas the girl was poles apart more intrigued by Gail.. and there were loads of exchanges btw them where they quoted fountainhead..😃

coming to IMV/Gail I had replied to u the last time u had said it.. copy pasting excerpts

ohhh... now tht u say it.. yes IMV does have shades of Gail Wynand.. and I LOVED Gail in fountainhead.. esp some of his lines.. to Dominique-
Those who speak of love most promiscuously are the ones who've never felt it.

(Speaking of which now..you said it.. About Gail loving someone with all he had)

and to Roark-
Build it as a monument to that spirit which is yours - and could have been mine

And to this.. above line.. I totally do see Devki in a maverick Roark.. only roark had more understanding of the gravity.. and awareness of duality.. of his actions.. Devki is grossly inexperienced for it.. but VV as dominique🤣.. VV has some Roark traits too.. if you will in this line.. by Roark.. ONE OF MY FAVE...

A building has integrity, just as a man and just as seldom!

IMVs parallelism with Heatcliff is a tad bit more apparent.. but I can see Gail too..

Sigh.. the show had so much going for it.. only if the corporates hadnt decided to look for mass appeal too..😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sowmya.. the last time u had brought the analogy of IMV and Gail out in the fore.. I ran home with it.. I love Gail as well.. for exactly the same reasons.. in fact I was telling munira.. when she had asked me if I read Atlas Shrugged.. that I somehow couldn't feel the book.. after fountainhead bak in the days.. and had left it.. I feel like some of us.. kindred literature lovers found each other through IMV

Gail and Roark are imp part of my love for fiction.. and I have maintained the only other persona tht has affected me like tht is in non-fiction.. Chris Gardener.. the only other SS I did write for a friend's blog.. was a love story.. amongst 2 architects.. who met again after a long time.. reliving the old days.. and their fervor.. in fact the hero was called Roark by his friends for some of the facets he had.. maverick to be one.. whereas the girl was poles apart more intrigued by Gail.. and there were loads of exchanges btw them where they quoted fountainhead..😃

coming to IMV/Gail I had replied to u the last time u had said it.. copy pasting excerpts

ohhh... now tht u say it.. yes IMV does have shades of Gail Wynand.. and I LOVED Gail in fountainhead.. esp some of his lines.. to Dominique-
Those who speak of love most promiscuously are the ones who've never felt it.

(Speaking of which now..you said it.. About Gail loving someone with all he had)

and to Roark-
Build it as a monument to that spirit which is yours - and could have been mine

And to this.. above line.. I totally do see Devki in a maverick Roark.. only roark had more understanding of the gravity.. and awareness of duality.. of his actions.. Devki is grossly inexperienced for it.. but VV as dominique🤣.. VV has some Roark traits too.. if you will in this line.. by Roark.. ONE OF MY FAVE...

A building has integrity, just as a man and just as seldom!

IMVs parallelism with Heatcliff is a tad bit more apparent.. but I can see Gail too..

Sigh.. the show had so much going for it.. only if the corporates hadnt decided to look for mass appeal too..😕



LOL! We share the same sensibilities. Do send me your earlier SS. I would love to read it. Yeah, I left Atlas Shrugged halfway, and I can read Fountainhead several times without getting bored. Beautifully written and stayed true to the very end. I remember all these dialogues, I just finished reading Fountainhead again a few days back. That's why the similarities came back in such force. Devki had a little bit of Roark until she became self-sacrificing. And VV had too. At the end, he was more like Gus Webb or the other random characters of Toohey, not even a Peter Keating. The makers held the threads of their characters, or atleast IMV, to the very end. Why they suddenly decided to do such a turnaround and try and please the public I fail to understand.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"Nirali.. don't you think you are being way too judgmental about it.. Maybe he will turn out to be just human." I cracked up to see her roll eyes.. I sobered and continued, in a serious vein "Nirali, I didn't meet Vaibhavji either before our marriage was arranged. I trusted Bha's reading and of course your family, I had met almost everyone- baa, bapuji, mummijy, Sidharth bhai.. You-my best friend.. and of course.. Pappaji" I fondly chimed...@sonali ''..Very well said 'I m happy for ur thoughts.( mpov)'devki & nirali are though two different character of mb, u represented both very well as friends. U showed D superbly with her thoughts of "existence of post marriage love",👏 yes " love can happen after marriage too". I got some relief by the way V-D relation is progressing now. D's dream & her feeling '''😃"supreb"'' I m waiting next'.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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"Nirali.. don't you think you are being way too judgmental about it.. Maybe he will turn out to be just human." I cracked up to see her roll eyes.. I sobered and continued, in a serious vein "Nirali, I didn't meet Vaibhavji either before our marriage was arranged. I trusted Bha's reading and of course your family, I had met almost everyone- baa, bapuji, mummijy, Sidharth bhai.. You-my best friend.. and of course.. Pappaji" I fondly chimed...@sonali ''..Very well said 'I m happy for ur thoughts.( mpov)'devki & nirali are though two different character of mb, u represented both very well as friends. U showed D superbly with her thoughts of "existence of post marriage love",👏 yes " love can happen after marriage too". I got some relief by the way V-D relation is progressing now. D's dream & her feeling '''😃"supreb"'' I m waiting next'.


thanks buddy.. I just have been pre-occupied with eclectic stuff myself.. LOL.. will start writing the next part soon.. today itself.. and yup sorta know where its heading.. but dont have it planned out so need to get the detailing right.. may take a little time..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Finally found some time and intent.. 😆 to pen down this part.. its a relatively shorter.. filler part.. just reflecting the progression.. before jumping into the interesting things ahead.. I finally feel like I do have a direction.. towards where I am going.. and How I am going to treat it.. but the jitters are still there.. as I approach the league.. having to do some research😆.. will try to get to the next one soon and post in a couple days.. hopefully.. till then enjoy.. and as usual CONCERNS and CRITIQUING would be very appreciated..

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Part 4: A step in the right direction

'I felt complete. It was strange, what a little sense of belonging can do to you. Ever since I got engaged to Vaibhavji, I had felt a part of this house with respect to all my relationships... whether it was with mummijy, Rajvi bhabhi, or for that matter even Pappaji.. I was in fact at peace with being Vaibhavji's friend, I reckoned. But it was different now.. I felt like I had rediscovered my wings, I could dare to dream... I felt like wishing for more.. asking for more.. because he was willing to give it to me.. He completed me, by sharing himself.. by bestowing that place in his life..' I smiled and placed the quilt on the tea pot and kept it in the cart alongside its set …

As I turned to push it.. Mummijy entered the kitchen, to make arrangements for pappaji's morning tea and give instructions for breakfast thereafter. I bent down and touched her feet… She blessed me and as I looked up, she kissed my forehead.. enveloping me in her warm embrace.. Breaking apart, she confessed "I have waited to see this glint in your eyes, beta.. I can't begin to express how happy I am.. I feel satiated.. complete"

I couldn't help but feel that connection.. the karmic connection that I felt with her from day one.. as I held her hand.. and she beamed "I would pray for this joy of fulfillment to embrace you and my son always". I blushed.

*********

It was our usual morning ritual, as I sat on the couch reading the paper and she poured tea for both of us. Extending the tea-cup, she whispered "Vaibhavji" as I looked up… it was the same; yet different.. Whatever it was, felt good.. like this was for keeps- the little moments we shared in our day together were going to stay the same.. I was beginning to cherish this stability, this peace that had eluded me for a while. I took the first sip, breaking the silence

"I forgot to tell you last night" I began in my usual matter of fact tone, but she turned crimson red… I was amused till it dawned on me, she was on some other page.. I fought the urge to mess with her and continued in my corporate tone "Pappa wants me to talk on Vaibhav Infra's vision for economic growth in the near future, highlighting on Mumbai floats in the business convention in England next week". Her expression changed in a second. I didn't really see any hint of disappointment, the businesswoman took precedence in no time.. I smiled.

"Oh wow! I can definitely help you make the presentation.. Can we discuss it tonight, if you don't mind.. I am busy with the final meetings regarding the film distribution. When is the convention?"

"In 4 days"

"Oh ok! In that case as early as this evening I can chalk out a draft on the things you can talk about".

I interrupted, "WE". She shot me a look.

"We are going to jointly present it. I need you up there with me fielding the questions, given you are more in command of the logistic details.. Pappa thinks so too" I added as a perk. "I hope you can make the time, can you"

She smiled, chiding in her typical mode "But of course Vaibhavji, most definitely I will.. "

How could I have been blind to nature of her affection before, I wondered yet again.

"Great" I finished the tea and rose up.. picked up my coat and before heading to the door, I walked to her as she stood up as well.. Coming close to her, I continued "I was also hoping as its London, you could show me around.. give me a peek into your past life". As she met my gaze, her face lit up. I dropped a peck on her cheek; she blushed, her fingers teasing my shirt button. I whispered "I asked Manjusha to book the return tickets leaving us 2 days after the convention. Work on the itinerary details with her?" She nodded as I gazed at her fiddling fingers. She stopped pronto.

I held them, caressing "Should I drop you on the way, after breakfast?"

Interlocking her fingers with mine, she whispered "maybe".

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By dinnertime the news had spread in the entire family; of us going to London together for all of 4 days.. And that was reason enough for festivities in the Virani clan.. I sat amidst Dadaji, Rajvi bhabhi and Nirali's not-so subtle love advices for what they had conveniently assumed was our honeymoon as extremely uncomfortable as it was.. Devki was as usual better at fielding her discomfort by merely blushing… I just made faces while kaka and my siblings took pleasure in making me the butt of their jokes, relating my stint at cooking to mamma.. I could so see them write 'chronicles of our romantic rendezvous'.. God they were embarrassing! I shot Devki a look, as she meekly smiled sharing my sentiment somewhere, albeit with more tolerance. I half-smiled at her as the agile team lead, Rupal caught it to rant away further.. I held my head.. Pits! At this point, I hoped for divine intervention as Pappa walked in.. and SILENCE.. I grinned.. scanning each of their faces.. the changed expressions with ultimate sadism..

Pappa had wanted to talk to me after dinner.. I headed to the study with far more ease knowing it would be anything but uncomfortable.. and trust him! to get straight to the point..

"Vaibhav.. I am happy Devki is invested in the Mumbai floats project.. You know I have always thought Vaibhav Industries could use her skills.. "

"Yes Pappa" I elaborated, "sometimes merging with your competitor is one way to end the competition" I smiled..

He regarded me, twisting the corner of his lips.. in his usual manner of contemplating on a statement.. before he refuted it.. I awaited the inevitable

"Not by sponsoring a film distribution". I shrugged as he completed his statement with his characteristic finality "I will never approve of that".

I avoided his gaze, as he elaborated "Remember beta- man's unique reward is, while animals survived by adjusting themselves to the background, man survives by adjusting his background to himself" (credit- Ayn Rand)..

Nevertheless, as is with Pappa, unpredictability is the key. He changed the course of the conversation in a matter of seconds.. "Anyhow that's not what I wanted to talk about". I looked up.. curious..

"While you are in London, may be you could meet Kunal Rajput and get re-acquainted, given we are soon entering into an alliance"

I smiled, approving "Sure Pappa, In fact I am thinking I may run into him at the convention"

"Don't rely on chances Vaibhav.. you know better than that.. I have trained you to know that the ladder of success is best climbed by stepping on the rungs of opportunity". (again credit-Ayn Rand). He rose up and walked across, tapping my shoulder as I stood up he concluded.. "And.. We create opportunities"

I couldn't help but look at him with awe.. as he continued.. "Meet Kunal not just as his future brother in law.. but as a business partner.. discuss the new merger project I gifted you.. and make sure you involve Devki" He smirked..

Much like himself, his advices were redolent with layers.. I nodded confidently, "Sure Pappa.. I will cover all grounds.. "

And this time won his genuine response "That's my boy.. All the best.. You should get going now.. Devki must be waiting.." he ended softly with his approving smile.. to my step in the right direction..

I walked out, musing.. This trip would sure be interesting…

Little did I know.. What was in store…



Edited by sonali.19281 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Now thats nice sonali; how imv is perceived by his family At this point, I hoped for divine intervention as Pappa walked in.. and SILENCE.. I grinned.. scanning each of their faces.. the changed expressions with ultimate sadism
Thats classic irony everyone wants to ejny with his money & power to earn that he had struggled beyond imagination; but no body wants to see him in family picture.in fact, i could remember many occassions when imv will enter scene, there will be pin-drop silence. ok that is fine, may be due fear & some respect; but apart from that there used be big question mark on all faces;why have u cm here 😕😕
Remebered when all were singing songs before uttaran(when all were playing with kites) & imv came into scene, master said- are ishwar aya; khel khatam, paisa hajam. tu kyon aya
keep it sonali; from small dialogues, u r maintaining esssence of mb
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sonali I'm floored...by now I know how good u r, still I'm pleasantly suprised by ur SS...how well u r progressing d story at d same time keeping d chars as intact as dey hv been shown in MB.👏👏👏
BTW d scene between Charu nd D in d kitchen made me realise tht V Villa was beautifully constructed nd different sections of d villa had been shown, but not once was d kitchen shown. Whereas in other shows d kitchen is d central area where all conspiracies r hatched! Dat's how different our MB was.
Ur last line has really left me intrigued, so waiting 4 d next SS.
BTW wat is SS?😕😆😆
PS: I'm loving d way u r making V supposedly nonchalant towards D nd his subtle pulling of D's legs, but hope u also reverse d situation nd let V hv a taste of his own medicine!
Also loving d appropriate use of d lines of Ayn Rand thru IMV nd continuing wid IMV's gems.😊
Edited by sssshhh - 14 years ago
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Now thats nice sonali; how imv is perceived by his family At this point, I hoped for divine intervention as Pappa walked in.. and SILENCE.. I grinned.. scanning each of their faces.. the changed expressions with ultimate sadism

Thats classic irony everyone wants to ejny with his money & power to earn that he had struggled beyond imagination; but no body wants to see him in family picture.in fact, i could remember many occassions when imv will enter scene, there will be pin-drop silence. ok that is fine, may be due fear & some respect; but apart from that there used be big question mark on all faces;why have u cm here 😕😕
Remebered when all were singing songs before uttaran(when all were playing with kites) & imv came into scene, master said- are ishwar aya; khel khatam, paisa hajam. tu kyon aya
keep it sonali; from small dialogues, u r maintaining esssence of mb


yup.. I noticed tht too.. during the uttaran and even holi.. when he walks in a suit and master reprimands him.. he comes and goes fleetingly.. and every Virani just makes a face... like he is some eye sore.. 😕 Charu and VV gave him some benefit.. in his presence.. rest to khair..

thanks santok.. m glad u feel tht way.. that I am able to retain the essence😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sonali I'm floored...by now I know how good u r, still I'm pleasantly suprised by ur SS...how well u r progressing d story at d same time keeping d chars as intact as dey hv been shown in MB.👏👏👏

BTW d scene between Charu nd D in d kitchen made me realise tht V Villa was beautifully constructed nd different sections of d villa had been shown, but not once was d kitchen shown. Whereas in other shows d kitchen is d central area where all conspiracies r hatched! Dat's how different our MB was.
Ur last line has really left me intrigued, so waiting 4 d next SS.
BTW wat is SS?😕😆😆
PS: I'm loving d way u r making V supposedly nonchalant towards D nd his subtle pulling of D's legs, but hope u also reverse d situation nd let V hv a taste of his own medicine!
Also loving d appropriate use of d lines of Ayn Rand thru IMV nd continuing wid IMV's gems.😊



Munira.. first of all.. SS =short story.. welcome to the IF acronyms😆.. am honored by your reception.. floored eh😆.. i was telling binis the other day.. m an extremely lazy writer.. the story makes the rounds in my head 10 times before I actually write it down.. and then I just sit for an hr and regurgitate through a part.. don't even look back at it.. till later when I just edit and post.. so trust me.. this is actually not half as good as it is in my head..😆

abt d ktichen.. thts exactly what I thought that not once did we ever get to see the kitchen.. we saw the staff going back and forth with the cart.. coming out of this corner.. across the dining area.. but tht was always kept away from public view.. TOTAL CLASS.. whatever little cooking escapade was shown was in Baa's room.. making laddoos or w/e.. thts MB they never digressed from the actual context.. class apart really.. but the sphinx near the pool while IMV is swimming by himself at night.. tht imagery still haunts me.. sigh..

V's nonchalance is my whole reaction to Ds characteristic cuteness during the time.. I remember paaji wld get all floored by her innocent antics... lol she even unnerved our dark lord with those doe-eyed questions.. aww.. those were the days.. sigh

as for Ayn Rand.. well her objectivism statements came closest to IMV's vision.. and the thing is I was scared to have IMV without his gems.. so had to do some research there.. now the next uphill task.. when I sit down for the next part.. head desk.. motivation ... find me soon LOL..

but m glad some of you are finding the time to post comments.. these days I just have to be happy with likes.. not really knowing if ppl are liking or not.. 😆
Edited by sonali.19281 - 14 years ago
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Hitting like was exactly wat I was planning to do, but after reading ur SS (thnxs for demystifying dat!😆) I had 2 post a comment, nd I thought it'll b just a line nd den ended up saying a lot (by my standards).😆

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