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@sami01

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Posted: 16 years ago

friends as suggested by skepy ..I am posting some enchanting pictures and skepy will provide with beautiful poems ...
every one else r welcome to join .

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Bonai

@Bonai

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

nice fairytale pics sami, wating for skep to tag char chand on the pics.

Masha allah wah wah jodi hai tum dono ki kamal

Ek tasbeer o se duja kalam se kar deta hai dhamal

Achha aur kabil e tariff hai tum dono ka yeah kheyal

Khawish yeahi hai ki yu hi hote rahe hum malamal

Aisa kuch hamare RK ke pics ke saath bhi agar ho to? like ek hi picture dekh ke jisko jo kheyal aaye ga jaise ke gaana, scene, funny dialogs, comments etc....... woh reply karega, par abhi to bahat kam frnds hai yeha to sayad bahat achha response na mile. Anyways yeah post bhi bahat achha hai jaisa ke maine already bataya. make more.......😊

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priya

@-.Priya.-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

wow sami sooo beautiful

waiting for di's poems

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pennu

@pennu

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

Wow Samee the pics are looking enchanted...

But I liked this pics more.. it reminded me a story...

"An Unbrella Man" which I studied in my school days...

just like in this pics..

there was a lady and girl in that story too...

(is anybody else know about that story...)

Skep waiting for your beautiful poems too...

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

Friends, since Sammy has posted this period photo and the car looks an antique, lets go back in time. You remember I wrote a short story when Kranti is in Shimla after Seher is born and Raj is coming to meet her? Let's take that as the background. The person driving the car the in the picture is Raj as he winds his way through the streets ...... finding his way home to meet his wife.

The dark clouds melted and sent forth the rain

The silver mists lifted to wet the terrain

The night advanced and a soft silence fell

The whispering leaves had something to tell

She thought of him and she closed her eyes

Looking down at the valley to see what lies

When would he come to set her heart at peace?

Only he could make her anguish decrease......

She waited and waited for thirty days or more

Tears through her tireless eyes seemed to pour

How much longer would she have to wait?

When would this despair ever dissipate?

"O Rain" she lamented "Has my love forgotten me?"

The skies grumbled and answered thunderously

The sleet, the hail, the snowflakes seemed to say

After the long night has passed, there will be day.

In the distance she heard bells in the steeple

As the streets were quite bare with only a few people

A car seemed to climb uphill with a determined pace

As she saw it through the fog, her heart began to race.

From every window the lights seemed to shine

She raced down the stairway two steps at a time

She stood braving the wind down at the doorway,

Waiting to see the car through the gateway.

O come ye Rain with all your might

For my Love has returned home tonight

Just as you clamour to meet the earth

Your droplets laugh and mingle with mirth.

The rain fell and set out to appease

The scorched land wanting release

The comfort and solace that came along

Brought a smile to her lips that stayed for long.

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@sami01

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Posted: 16 years ago

"O Rain" she lamented "Has my love forgotten me?"

The skies grumbled and answered thunderously

The sleet, the hail, the snowflakes seemed to say

After the long night has passed, there will be day.

what lovely thoughts skepy dear.....
jab gam ka andhera badh jaye samjho ke sawera door nahi....samjo ke savera door nahi..
har raat ka hai paigam yehi taare bhi yehi dohraate hain...

lovely poem waiting for others .....😳

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

"O Rain" she lamented "Has my love forgotten me?"

The skies grumbled and answered thunderously

The sleet, the hail, the snowflakes seemed to say

After the long night has passed, there will be day.

what lovely thoughts skepy dear.....
jab gam ka andhera badh jaye samjho ke sawera door nahi....samjo ke savera door nahi..
har raat ka hai paigam yehi taare bhi yehi dohraate hain...

lovely poem waiting for others .....😳

@ pink

Ji huzoor,

bilkul sahi farmaya aapne.............................

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pennu

@pennu

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

Wow.. skep... what a beautiful poem dear.... I wonder how come these thoughts and lines come to your mind... simply loved it....

The comfort and solace that came along

Brought a smile to her lips that stayed for long.

in my lips tooo.....😳

and Samee... aap ka bhi jawaab nahee...

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pennu

Wow Samee the pics are looking enchanted...

But I liked this pics more.. it reminded me a story...

"An Unbrella Man" which I studied in my school days...

just like in this pics..

there was a lady and girl in that story too...

(is anybody else know about that story...)

Skep waiting for your beautiful poems too...

Hey jaya...the same story clicked my mind when I saw this pic.I remember I was in 10th standard when I read this story...The umbrella man turns out to be an impostor in the end who duped people by selling them the stolen umbrellas.

Thanks samee for these mesmerizing pics.

skep aapke to kya kehne.

aap to kamal ho.

I just loved your poem.

When would he come to set her heart at peace?

Only he could make her anguish decrease
n this line touched me the most.

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

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This poem is awesome it describes Krant's feelings so beautifully I could almost picture everything.

I loved the way the peom moved from sadness and despair to extreme happiness.

The rain and dark cloud which described sadness and longing in the begning turned into a sign of romance and love and happiness at the end. The metaphorical usage of rain and clouds in both the scenerios was simpley outstanding.

Waiting for the next one.

Edited by ranjnanarang - 16 years ago

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