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Posted: 16 years ago
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I walked on the soft grassy carpet that was laid out for me
I skipped and ran for I was feeling so free and happy
I raced on carried forth by the winds so carefree
Where the leaves shivered and flowers bobbed on the tree.
I came to a small waterpool and took in the scene with a gasp
So breathtaking, so serene, my mind the wonder did grasp
Silently the dragonflies zigzagged across the water still
I stood there mesmerised by the stone wall taking my fill.
The bushes bore every shade of green and covered every rock
Weeds dipped their toes in the pool as they stood in a flock
The pink, the violet and the yellow flowers seemed to mock
As I watched the scene half hynotised and half in shock.
Who was the painter of this marvellous picture that I saw?
Who was he ... this unknown and how had he managed to draw?
So easily and so casually with a few strokes of his hand
Was this indeed Heaven which we call the promised land?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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One day when I was very young I looked out of the window

"Look," I called out to Mother, fascinated by the rainbow

"Why does it come only when it showers on a grey day?"

Questions I asked repeatedly and Mother would then say,

"When clouds fly across the sky to clash and to thunder

Naughtily they play about their very own game of rounders

They are torn apart by Lightning as she throws her arms about

Not caring what the clouds may feel or whether they would shout.

And as this stampede continues, our ears we have to close

The clouds angrily shoot out infinte arrows from its bows

The rain pours down hurriedly to touch the mountain tops

To hurtle down as waterfalls which nobody can stop.

The rivers swell and gladly flow towards their destiny

To join the everwaiting waters of the huge inviting sea.

When the sky falls silent and the rain is put on hold

A rainbow peeps out prettily all colourful and bold.

There is a hush on earth as the rainbow stretches in the sky

Flowers open, leaves whisper and the raindrops tiredly sigh

This half-circle of radiance spreads joy through every ray

It stands sparkling and vibrant to show us Heaven's way."

"Where does it start and where does it end?" I asked a little bold

"It starts from His palm at one end and ends in a pot of gold."

I set out with my lantern and a basket to collect the coins

Alongside walked my fate and I hoped good fortune would join.

We all need to embark on this mission to conquer odds

To meet challenges thrown to us casually by our beloved Gods

To chase a dream and persevere is what life's all about

Even if you don't achieve, you've understood life no doubt.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
wow skepy i just breifly read the poems will reread and edit my reply
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

We all need to embark on this mission to conquer odds

To meet challenges thrown to us casually by our beloved Gods

To chase a dream and persevere is what life's all about

Even if you don't achieve, you've understood life no doubt.



what a brilliant & beautiful way to share such a thought about life. all three poems are mind blowing. may be i cant express my feelings completely but one thing i must say thanks to both skep & sam, this is something very precious. sorry for being late.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I walked on the soft grassy carpet that was laid out for me
I skipped and ran for I was feeling so free and happy
I raced on carried forth by the winds so carefree
Where the leaves shivered and flowers bobbed on the tree.
These lines are simply beautiful you have described the free spirit so beautifully.
Skep All the poems are simply beautiful. I dont have words to praise them you are very talented really and to write such amazing stuff the person has to be really beautiful at heart.
Simply awesome.
Edited by ranjnanarang - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏 ⭐️ 😎 👍🏼 ........... 🤗
Skep ...... Sami ...... What an awesome ...... pair you are !!!!!!!!
Sami keeps pulling put fantabulous pictures from her magical hat ...
And Skep keeps pace with beautiful poetry .....
Together they transport us reader to another world .....
Where with the characters we Laugh & Play, Love & Sigh, Learn & Lament, Absorb & Meditate ......
The whole gamut of emotions ........
I must say ........ this is easily the most creative of all the forums available .....
Keep it up my dear friends .....
We are all agog ........ what will you come up with next ?????
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bonai



what a brilliant & beautiful way to share such a thought about life. all three poems are mind blowing. may be i cant express my feelings completely but one thing i must say thanks to both skep & sam, this is something very precious. sorry for being late.😊

Thanks for the words of grace. Its like giving the quill (me) some beautiful ink (encouragement) to carry on scribbling.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ranjnanarang

This poem is awesome it describes Krant's feelings so beautifully I could almost picture everything.

I loved the way the peom moved from sadness and despair to extreme happiness.
The rain and dark cloud which described sadness and longing in the begning turned into a sign of romance and love and happiness at the end. The metaphorical usage of rain and clouds in both the scenerios was simpley outstanding.
Waiting for the next one.

@ pink
Its my favourite followed by the forests, the flowers and the sea.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranjnanarang

I walked on the soft grassy carpet that was laid out for me
I skipped and ran for I was feeling so free and happy
I raced on carried forth by the winds so carefree
Where the leaves shivered and flowers bobbed on the tree.
These lines are simply beautiful you have described the free spirit so beautifully.
Skep All the poems are simply beautiful. I dont have words to praise them you are very talented really and to write such amazing stuff the person has to be really beautiful at heart.
Simply awesome.

@ pink
These are the sweetest words anyone could have said to me...................
I read your words and my cheeks slowly turned red
I felt so touched so I picked up my pen instead
And if you think this of me, I think the same of you
If I have a beautiful heart, I'm sure yours is too.
❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

👏 ⭐️ 😎 👍🏼 ........... 🤗
Skep ...... Sami ...... What an awesome ...... pair you are !!!!!!!!
Sami keeps pulling put fantabulous pictures from her magical hat ...
And Skep keeps pace with beautiful poetry .....
Together they transport us reader to another world .....
Where with the characters we Laugh & Play, Love & Sigh, Learn & Lament, Absorb & Meditate ......
The whole gamut of emotions ........
I must say ........ this is easily the most creative of all the forums available .....
Keep it up my dear friends .....
We are all agog ........ what will you come up with next ?????

Its quite a drill actually while you gather your thoughts
Placing ideas and grouping words and Goodness knows what
But the thrill and joy it gives, no words can ever express
Images in solitude, the heart goes on to impress
The forests I visit with the storms and the rain
Get wet in my imagination and soak in the showers
As I sit under the trees with their incredible flowers
I hope you like the journey that I drag you through
Believe me, I'll never find better readers than you.
😊 ⭐️ 😆 👏 ⭐️ 😊 😆
Edited by skeptical - 16 years ago

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