Originally posted by: skeptical
You know...............you girls are really something!!!!!!!!!!!
You want me to write reams and reams of pages. "Why so short?" is the common complaint. But just look at your comments................. why doesn't the same rule to you ? 😭 😭
Arey Baba.. dil chotta mat kar yaaar🤗... I have told you na.. I was in dream.. lala.. so called land... From there I can write only this much yaaar... I was sooo excited.... who knows what what things will happen in a Jungle... Now back to darthilog....
So here are my comments...
Kranti lay on the backseat with her head on Pammi's lap and Seher was in the front with Sagarji. ...How sweet she is very lucky to have such a wonderful MIL😊....
Pammmi was stroking Kranti head with one hand and her other hand was held in Kranti hands. Kranti was looking out. Pammi smiled. Kranti loved holding hands with Raj. It was not mere touching. She had often seen Kranti take her son's hand in both hers and keep it on her lap. ...Wow it really showed the affection they both share each other😳... loved the way you tried to picturise it....
At first Pammi thought it was just a display of love and the family members would tease them over it. It didn't make an iota of difference to Raj. But, this did not stop Kranti. Great Kranti knows very well what she is doing and what she should not do before everyone👏...
She would smile but never let go of Raj's hand. Hmmm.. thats like a good wife... And of course, Raj never pulled his hand away. Ha ha ha why should he... he will also enjoying it only na....😉
It was a very natural gesture and everyone had got used to it..... Yes Now, we all used to it...😃
There was no other show of love from Kranti's side, though her son was another matter. He loved to embarrass her and was an inveterate tease. He would take her hand to his lips and Kranti would try to stop him. Or he would put his head on her shoulder and break into a love song. Kranti would fidget and push Raj and try to throw his hand away. ...Hmmm Naughty Raj he na...😳 He won't lose any chance which he get in his hands....😉
But then he would hold on to her hand, make soulful eyes and beg her not to break his heart. Haaa haa upper se nauttangi bhi....
Lalaji loved to witness such scenes and she herself had seen her husband urge their son to goad Kranti. Hmmm afterall baap kiska he....😆 In the privacy of their room, Pammi had admonished him, but if he didn't then Kewal would. Pammi asked told Kewal to do the same with Madhu. But when he did, Madhu used to smile and giggle happily and there would be no friction at all. The whole exercise of banter would flop. I know it will end in a flop only....😆
At the moment, Kranti was holding her MIL's hand. These were the only two people who shared the honour of being more than special to her in some way. She held their hands. It was Raj first and in his absence it was Pammi. But what she felt for Raj was certainly not what she felt for his mother. However, the real test was when Sanjay and Nirmal came on a holiday from Delhi. That time it was only Nirmal.Kranti was always by her side. They were inseparable sisters. Thanks skep.. you didn't forget to mention Nirmal here.... I was even going to ask you to flash some light over Nirmal's side also... in MRD your way.... And I know you will....
In the forest, when Raj and she were escaping from the Britishers……. Well I hope this sportion will be cleared in MRD right...???
He had bent his head and rubbed that ghastly beard on her face. ...................... She clung onto his neck as he picked her up and took her to the shack... Should I need to comment on this part toooo.... No way... again I am going to my dream land.....😍😍😍
All in all it was Superb Skep.....👏👏👏
waiting for the next part.... ha ha ha actually dreaming...😍