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Posted: 16 years ago
oh Skep as usual gr8..👏
this update was enchanting,I must say....so deep their love is,Kranti is thinking of Raj...😍
n those scenes when they are shown in jungle .....😍

She had wanted to feel complete and only he could make her feel so...
oh!!...like evryone me too fida on this line....
while reading one can visualise ....these scenes,we never got to see these beautiful scenes in MRD..😭..serial!........
oh Skep you portray those emptions so beautifully that one can feel it...👍🏼
n when I reached the end...I was like"ha khatam kya!"..
so please update soon...😳....

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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh...................My........................Gawd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints*

i m speechless Skep...........its mind blowing👏

'course u'll say beautiful dreamers.......but cant be helped..........i m a dreamer😳😳😳
and u have spoiled me😃


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: namita25

OMG....skep ....what an update.................👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

.....I loved these lines...:

Kranti loved holding hands with Raj. It was not mere touching.

........pammi is a great source of support for Kranti...........
..the way she strokes k's head and holds her hand
through the journey is worth noticing..........she knows how much Raj and Kranti love each other.........
and the last part............
😍😍😍

She had wanted to feel complete and only he could make her feel so
.....me...going to faint................
bahut badiya..........dil khush ho gaya.....
thanks a lot

My Emoticon lady........................... yr reply is more interesting than the update.........believe me. 😉 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic

Thnaks Skep for posting.

I was waiting for so long last night and then finally fell asleep on the keyboard. Sorry
And then called it quits. Sorry again
But I am so happy to read the update and I didn't want it to end. At work right now, so will comment from home definitely.
Must say it touched my heart.
One thing - they were both hiding from the British in the jungle, so I guess a lot of stuff happened in between in MRD ... our way. Am just so excited.

Rmember to reply on a new page.............................. 😲
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pennu

Haaaiii... What an update skep....

I am still in my Dream land😍😍😍.... Lalal land😍😍😍.. swarglog😍😍😍.... What ever you want to say, you can..... She had wanted to feel complete and only he could make her feel so
Oh ho!!!! Let me relax a bit... then later I will comment.....

You know...............you girls are really something!!!!!!!!!!!
You want me to write reams and reams of pages. "Why so short?" is the common complaint. But just look at your comments................. why doesn't the same rule to you ? 😭 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dilipc302

Great and....romentic,

this and the 3rd parts are!!
You describe the scenes so effecetively, one can visualise them happening

Thank you Dilip..................😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tetuty66

oh Skep as usual gr8..👏
this update was enchanting,I must say....so deep their love is,Kranti is thinking of Raj...😍
n those scenes when they are shown in jungle .....😍

She had wanted to feel complete and only he could make her feel so...
oh!!...like evryone me too fida on this line....
while reading one can visualise ....these scenes,we never got to see these beautiful scenes in MRD..😭..serial!........
oh Skep you portray those emptions so beautifully that one can feel it...👍🏼
n when I reached the end...I was like"ha khatam kya!"..
so please update soon...😳....

Shall try tmrw.....................
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: skeptical

You know...............you girls are really something!!!!!!!!!!!
You want me to write reams and reams of pages. "Why so short?" is the common complaint. But just look at your comments................. why doesn't the same rule to you ? 😭 😭

Arey Baba.. dil chotta mat kar yaaar🤗... I have told you na.. I was in dream.. lala.. so called land... From there I can write only this much yaaar... I was sooo excited.... who knows what what things will happen in a Jungle... Now back to darthilog....
So here are my comments...
Kranti lay on the backseat with her head on Pammi's lap and Seher was in the front with Sagarji. ...How sweet she is very lucky to have such a wonderful MIL😊....
Pammmi was stroking Kranti head with one hand and her other hand was held in Kranti hands. Kranti was looking out. Pammi smiled. Kranti loved holding hands with Raj. It was not mere touching. She had often seen Kranti take her son's hand in both hers and keep it on her lap. ...Wow it really showed the affection they both share each other😳... loved the way you tried to picturise it....
At first Pammi thought it was just a display of love and the family members would tease them over it. It didn't make an iota of difference to Raj. But, this did not stop Kranti. Great Kranti knows very well what she is doing and what she should not do before everyone👏...
She would smile but never let go of Raj's hand. Hmmm.. thats like a good wife... And of course, Raj never pulled his hand away. Ha ha ha why should he... he will also enjoying it only na....😉
It was a very natural gesture and everyone had got used to it..... Yes Now, we all used to it...😃
There was no other show of love from Kranti's side, though her son was another matter. He loved to embarrass her and was an inveterate tease. He would take her hand to his lips and Kranti would try to stop him. Or he would put his head on her shoulder and break into a love song. Kranti would fidget and push Raj and try to throw his hand away. ...Hmmm Naughty Raj he na...😳 He won't lose any chance which he get in his hands....😉
But then he would hold on to her hand, make soulful eyes and beg her not to break his heart. Haaa haa upper se nauttangi bhi....
Lalaji loved to witness such scenes and she herself had seen her husband urge their son to goad Kranti. Hmmm afterall baap kiska he....😆 In the privacy of their room, Pammi had admonished him, but if he didn't then Kewal would. Pammi asked told Kewal to do the same with Madhu. But when he did, Madhu used to smile and giggle happily and there would be no friction at all. The whole exercise of banter would flop. I know it will end in a flop only....😆
At the moment, Kranti was holding her MIL's hand. These were the only two people who shared the honour of being more than special to her in some way. She held their hands. It was Raj first and in his absence it was Pammi. But what she felt for Raj was certainly not what she felt for his mother. However, the real test was when Sanjay and Nirmal came on a holiday from Delhi. That time it was only Nirmal.Kranti was always by her side. They were inseparable sisters. Thanks skep.. you didn't forget to mention Nirmal here.... I was even going to ask you to flash some light over Nirmal's side also... in MRD your way.... And I know you will....
In the forest, when Raj and she were escaping from the Britishers……. Well I hope this sportion will be cleared in MRD right...???
He had bent his head and rubbed that ghastly beard on her face. ...................... She clung onto his neck as he picked her up and took her to the shack... Should I need to comment on this part toooo.... No way... again I am going to my dream land.....😍😍😍
All in all it was Superb Skep.....👏👏👏
waiting for the next part.... ha ha ha actually dreaming...😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
Skepi
Those --------------------------- lines 😡
brought me back to Mumbai my home on my Seat opp my PC😡
I was so happy
enjoying the every moment of
Raj & Kranti
Modern Pyar Cutie Pie Pyar in Shimla
in their disguise form running to rescue themselves
But the best Part was I loved holding Rajs ' hand than Mil ;s hand
it is but Obvious
Even I wished our Kranti of MRD was so soft but at the same time
Strong in her Opinion

Chupa hua Camera mera sath tha
Capturing Visualizing each & every part of ur
description
I was having so much of fun thinking Raj would start singing
But those dotted lines
Na Brought me back to Earth

Impatiently waiting for next part
I am like T2 66 Emotion scrolling my Eyes left 2 right
& Tapping my Fingers


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Posted: 16 years ago
You know...............you girls are really something!!!!!!!!!!!
You want me to write reams and reams of pages. "Why so short?" is the common complaint. But just look at your comments................. why doesn't the same rule to you ? 😭 😭

oh!!...oops......sorry Skep.....next time I promise there will be a long reply....
i think quoting the whole update might be irritating na....so I limit myself to few words...
so plz tell me If from next time can I quote much of your update n give comments on it??....
Oh dear though your net troubles you then too you give us updates....thank you for this...😃....am really gr8ful to u as I eagerly wait for your updates!!

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