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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
What a Interlink bet ur previous story & this one
U r just superb skepi
I just love the way u Show The EMOTION LOVE, Togetherness
the quality of love dat speaks,
Bonding bet tLove bet the fly member
& cute Family OF Raj, Kranti & Sher
Love is so strong that Hatreds is not shown
wow the best i forgot to mention
The wedding scene putting the garland
over each other
I remembered------------------
My dear Keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
hi skepti ,sorry for being late here , i ws so busy these days yaar, but must say , i've just read ur all parts of t is Ff, ur too good dear,i cant express it in words, love it, , mindblowing yaar, its all in front of mewating for next part, plz update soon yaar.
Love
Pari😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93

my dear me missing something in your stories is just impossible...
i know it by heart...not only the dialogues even the expressions..... i just love it.....
😆ha ha but you wont declare me crazyyy...wd you?

actually here i thought that raj was making up....
like you said he has given her shelter...

n next
Kranti felt she could have died of shame. His father thundered at him. Raj remained silent but firm. Kranti remembered how upset she had been. She detested this man. Husband? Hah! Over her dead body!

Kranti was upset about it..... i thought it she was upset about his lie....

a.ways i wd have loved this angle of live in relationship...though it wd have been forced by circumstances....i know Kranti wd not have given in willingly.....
it wd have been so much fun....

but you dashed my hopes.....
😭




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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: netu19


my dear me missing something in your stories is just impossible...
i know it by heart...not only the dialogues even the expressions..... i just love it.....
😆ha ha but you wont declare me crazyyy...wd you?

actually here i thought that raj was making up....
like you said he has given her shelter...

n next
Kranti felt she could have died of shame. His father thundered at him. Raj remained silent but firm. Kranti remembered how upset she had been. She detested this man. Husband? Hah! Over her dead body!

Kranti was upset about it..... i thought it she was upset about his lie....

a.ways i wd have loved this angle of live in relationship...though it wd have been forced by circumstances....i know Kranti wd not have given in willingly.....
it wd have been so much fun....

but you dashed my hopes.....
😭

None of your hopes are going to be dashed. All these cryptic statements will be explained in MRD.....my way. And it will have all the ingredients you want...😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: skeptical

None of your hopes are going to be dashed. All these cryptic statements will be explained in MRD.....my way. And it will have all the ingredients you want...😉

Ok me too waiting ... my heart just missed a beat. 😳
Edited by poetic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96

Sorry girls,

My internet is really a headache. I promised Poet I'd update ystdy but couldn't do so.
Somehow I have managed to do so after 12 hours..........Happy Reading
Edited by skeptical - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
OMG....skep ....what an update.................👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

.....I loved these lines...:

Kranti loved holding hands with Raj. It was not mere touching.

........pammi is a great source of support for Kranti...........
..the way she strokes k's head and holds her hand
through the journey is worth noticing..........she knows how much Raj and Kranti love each other.........
and the last part............
😍😍😍

She had wanted to feel complete and only he could make her feel so
.....me...going to faint................
bahut badiya..........dil khush ho gaya.....
thanks a lot







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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
Thnaks Skep for posting.
I was waiting for so long last night and then finally fell asleep on the keyboard.
And then called it quits.
But I am so happy to read the update and I didn't want it to end. At work right now, so will comment from home definitely.
Must say it touched my heart.
One thing - they were both hiding from the British in the jungle, so I guess a lot of stuff happened in between in MRD ... our way. Am just so excited.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
Haaaiii... What an update skep....
I am still in my Dream land😍😍😍.... Lalal land😍😍😍.. swarglog😍😍😍.... What ever you want to say, you can..... She had wanted to feel complete and only he could make her feel so
Oh ho!!!! Let me relax a bit... then later I will comment.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great and....romentic,
this and the 3rd parts are!!
You describe the scenes so effecetively, one can visualise them happening

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