Love disclosed Concluded 12/4 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Ocean_deep

Skeptical that was too good!!
You concluded very nicely.......
Liked update.......
Keep it up!👍🏼

~Ocean

Originally posted by: sim_ran

brilliant yaar seriously consider a carrer in writing stuffs your brilliant at it ............bravo 👏 and sry for late reply little busy but i do wait for your updates..

Originally posted by: tetuty66

😲........😃............😳
ohhh!! Skep........so beautiful.....⭐️
"See there is your mother. Don't get worried, she is right here. Who would dare to displease you?"
yes,so true noone will dare to displease the little angel,the way seher was searching for Kranti....and Pammi too just knows everything about Kranti n Seher without them telling her....shows how close she is to them!!!
Kranti's concern about Jaya....oh!! shows how beautiful Kranti is!!..
Description of scenery there was too good!👍🏼That was exactly how it was when I visited Shimla some years ago, so it was easy to write it.

His parents got the seat made for Kranti''..just like the swing they got fixed on her balcony.
oh!!...glad our Kranti got so much loving family...they made that seat as soon as they could..n that swing too...so nice of them!shows how dearly she is loved by everyone..😳That's how families should be ..... not like what they show in the serials 🤢
"It hurts me when I see all of you working while I just sit around. It has started playing on my conscience and I don't know what to do about it."
oh!...thats our Kranti there,in show too she would always do one thing or outher and never let buaji,chaijee n BBR(though she was so evil there🤢) do any work.....oh!how much she cared for everyone...wah!!kya kudi hai..👏
It was strange she didn't come to meet him on the staircase and even now she seemed to be far away and distant.
ummm.......that shows she was really perturbed!! yes
"I can't bear to see you in pain ''' it tortures me even more when I can't do anything to help ease it."
ohh....ofcourse Raj too wanted a child,but he knew that could be at expense of Kranti...so he is rejecting idea!....ohh how much they love each outher..amazing!😍????????? hahahaha
Since he had to make a choice he chose his wife. Was that wrong?
nothing I would say....perfect!!choice,as perfect as you are.😆
Madhu returned and told Kranti she had made her favourite kheer.
glad that BBR here is a human....and so sweet of her to do that..😳
"Jaya is yours, Kranti''.see she calls you ma, choti ma," cajoled Madhu. "Take her I don't mind."
ohh!!...firstly she doesnt mind her child calling Kranti choti ma(ofcourse she should not)..I mean no insecurity type...n she says take her..ohh! how sweet of BBR...Everyone in family loves everyone else so dearly...couldnt those creatives show something like this?😡love BBR here...
He tried to retrace all the events since his return from England.
ohh.....how much he cared for her..leaves no stone unturned to make her feel happy...now searching for Doc!
Dr Sameera Kaur..Dr Sana... I wonder who that is??? 😉

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ohh!!.....I was surprised when I read...thank you so much skep...🤗...
you made me part of this beautiful story..😳.. yes and you helped yr favourite RK make their dreams come true
yes yes how could I get my eyes off him?...ye bhi poochne ki baat!!😆😉
The child that would be born would be special.
yes ofcourse it will be...the wit of her father and strength of her mother....she will have...a perfect one!
She thought she looked ugly and ungainly but Raj teased her and told her that she could seduce him anytime.
🤣.....ohhh!!....what a remark!
The three sat in contentment enjoying the movement of the swaying.
aww!!...a perfect family...couldnt they show a scene like this in serial..
ohhh!!....Skep thank you for such a wonderful treat...
Its pleasure to read your MRD n stories.......wao!they are.....
Love Disclosed was very beautiful...thank you pen n poet!for concept too..

Dear Skep,

How can I thank you enough for writing this wonderful mini-series. It was a small flicker of light from our end which I feel was converted into fireworks by you. So I guess we should tell THANK YOU to you Dear.

As it is said by Edward Gibbon,

There is more pleasure to building castles in the air than on the ground.

And I believe in it. Nothing compares to building these castles which give us so much happiness, freedom and dreams.

Now coming to the update, what can I say about it? It's just too perfect with its somber yet delightful romantic moments. Best part is Seher's introspection about her Mother and how wonderfully tuned she is to her Mom. Shows the utmost love and care that Kranti showers on the baby. Seher also shares such a wonderful relation with her Grandmother; she is a happy baby in a lovable family.

Loved that part where Seher thinks about she could feel the warmth of her Mother's heart next to hers. The mother-child bonding is the biggest bond in the universe and a child easily understands his/ her Mother's stance and/ or feelings so easily.

I really admire the way you have shown Kranti as an all-encompassing person, her love for Jaya shows clearly. She really treasures her family and it shows clearly in her behaviour.

Your description of Shimla almost makes me wish to leave everything and rush there.

The best part is Kranti's yearning for Rajbir which Chaijee perfectly understands and supports. It's very rare to find such a bond. But Kranti and Chaijee's bond transcends the normal MIL-DIL bond and reaches a different level altogether.

The flashback was heart-warming. Kranti's acceptance into the Lal family was complete and from the core of the heart. This is wonderfully reflectd in how Bauji and Chaijee gets wooden seats constructed for Kranti near the fountain as well as the jhoola they got fixed in her balcony. As well as the wooden platform in the kitchen allowing Kranti to stand and cook.

Another very deep aspect of Raj and Kranti's relation is the way Kranti revolts against Raj under different circumstances, even if she knows that he wants the best for her. And Raj's legendary patience which stems for his unsullied love for Kranti.

The way Kranti broached the issue of starting their family was so palpable; almost like I could imagine the tension gnawing at her heart. Raj's answer had more to do with his wife's welfare and he did not want to betray any emotions from his side. Hence the shuttered expression. Both of them are right in their respective stances and the face-off is pretty heartbreaking. It's in moments like these that the real test of any relationship comes up. How we handle them determines the future course of our relationships.

The nuances of the conflicts in their relationship have been handled very beautifully. Like the way the family reacts when they are unhappy. The way Raj's behaviour and tiredness in the Study affects them. Kranti's yearning for the baby was too real and her outburst was too humane.

Now enter Dr. Sameera Kaur, the Messiah in Kranti and Raj's lives, who guides them through the difficult phase of their lives.

Love the way happiness spreads in Kranti's life once again when Raj informs her about Dr. Sameera and the fact that she is going to consider her case history. Like an oasis in the middle of a desert.

And yes, it's time for Dr. Sana to make an entry. Such a lovable, cute character.

Looooooooooooooved the way the five elements combined to give character to the special child. Finally the Princess takes birth. And a sense of love and contentment sweeps over the family. The last scene showed a picture frame of a complete family.

Awesome Skep. Thanks a lot once again.

Hope you keep on writing always.

Poet

Originally posted by: skeptical

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I slogged away from sun to sun

To complete what was left undone

My fingers wouldn't type anymore

Their pads became much too sore

I didn't want it to be a bore

For then you would show me the door

Sorry folks but I may not be online

I have to take care of my feline

Who's been with me for nine long years

And for whom I fret and fear.

But I shall pop in from time to time

And will stop by and drop a line

I shall not desert or run away

I shall continue MRD ....my way

ohh!!.......Skep your cat is unwell?
Take care of your cat , may it get wells soon!!
n therefore delay in update of MRD your way.....umm....I dont mind!😊
@Poet- Excellent analysis poet!
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skep I just loved this concluding part of yours................😳.😳

Kranti managed to get a close knit Family.................she is an apple of everyone's eye........................the bonding between all the members of the family is worth appreciating...............👍🏼
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Raj is so considerate towards Kranti..................................finally agrees to have a child and gets the appointment fixed with the doc...................

and seher is such a lively child..........................I just love her..................
............................no doubt is the princess for both raj and kranti

skep I hope your cat gets well soon asap.....................

thanks

Everyone described & discussed the story in fare and good manner. I am not very good at that. So thank you very much for writing such a nice story for all of us. Loved the characters behaving mature & normal, that is the only thing missing in the tv shows now a days. Enjoyed the story from beginning to end (finish it in one go). Do write as much as possible for u, shall wait for MRD my way update.

Thanx Skepti ji 4 such a wonderful concluding part, as usual u've done an excellent job👏.....loved d bonding between kranti and d women folks of Lal house..........kash aisa serial mei bhi hota😔.........

hey skep how are you doing.