An Unexpected Encounter ....... - Page 3

Originally posted by: sami01

skepy i have read the story right now i am crying my dear , its just beautifull ,👏 i will comment soon in detail....thanks for making all characters humans..indeed bad descisions in life.......r what shape ones destiny...in cruel way sometime and indeed u have to live with those memories. Lamhon ne khata ki sadiyoon ne saza paai....😭

Originally posted by: sasha722

skepy @ why dont u pen down
amazing mature Conversation bet Kranti & Rajbir
As both r Strong headed.
show their consideration, Emotion, Strong talk
where both feel they r right in their own way
& lastly they both cant stay without each other
4 second also
like true couple which we really missed in MRD
I hope u like my idea
I would wait---------------

First of all.. the best thing was the feel of the weather.. Cold and mist!! Wow

An unexpected encounter!! Raj has no hesitation and recognises her.. true character of true beings!! and his understanding of that relation as friendship and smething more.. was nice as he did rememeber all moments spend with her...

I just liked the way u portrayed raj..

Thanks a lot.. nice encounter for me too!!

Originally posted by: namita25

skep you really deserve a standing ovation for this short story ....
I loved every word of it........... I am happy you did
you really handled the entire raj -manpreet convo beautifully.........
raj really acted in a mature manner.......he frankly tells her that he does not regret at all his decision of getting married to her........... yes he did
he actually knew that it is important to move forward in life..............
I really loathed that manpreet in the serial....so did I, thats why I changed her character here ........and here she accepts the fact that she cannot get Raj back in her life..........
BTW thanks for this this treat you are welcome

Originally posted by: aati1429

First of all.. the best thing was the feel of the weather.. Cold and mist!! Wow

An unexpected encounter!! Raj has no hesitation and recognises her.. true character of true beings!! and his understanding of that relation as friendship and smething more.. was nice as he did rememeber all moments spend with her... of course, he was fond of her --- fond enough to have wanted to marry her at one time. He was also disappointed at that time. But meeting Kranti made him forget his first love. See how powerful I have made my kudi.......😉

I just liked the way u portrayed raj..

Thanks a lot.. nice encounter for me too!!

Skep,

I do remember the hot chocolate part.

Manpreet as a character was misused in MRD, there was no rhyme or reason. Showed her as just another dumb character falling for BBR's ploys, with no basic understanding. The character could have been used brilliantly to bring out Kranti's hidden feelings about Raj and their relationship and ultimately, their future.

If M was a normal person, she would have realised the intensity of Raj'[s feeling towards Kranti at the terrace, and backed off immediately. Rather she deemed it fit to go and challenge Kranti.

It was a welcome departure over here and I must thank you for that.

I have a basic plot but I will let you know thru' PM tomorrow. I hope thats fine.

And a special 🤗 to Sam for the idea.

Originally posted by: poetic

Skep,

I do remember the hot chocolate part.

Manpreet as a character was misused in MRD, there was no rhyme or reason. Showed her as just another dumb character falling for BBR's ploys, with no basic understanding. The character could have been used brilliantly to bring out Kranti's hidden feelings about Raj and their relationship and ultimately, their future.

If M was a normal person, she would have realised the intensity of Raj'[s feeling towards Kranti at the terrace, and backed off immediately. Rather she deemed it fit to go and challenge Kranti.

It was a welcome departure over here and I must thank you for that.

I have a basic plot but I will let you know thru' PM tomorrow. I hope thats fine.

And a special 🤗 to Sam for the idea.

Skep

Kranti has always been strong. 😊 See even if we assume that as per the serial, Raj did indeed meet Manpreet in London, yet he never remembered her for a second (based on what we have been shown) after he met Kranti.

Coming back to your story (I am discovering hidden meanings every time I read it), loved the way Raj reminded Manpreet that he was waiting for her at Trafalgar Square for 2 hrs, when she remarked that she was not important to him.

Let me find out the other hidden aspects.

Poet

skep its great to see u back🤗

as far as the short story is concerned......yeah we are dreamers😳...and cant help falling for it every time we think of raj-kranti..............and your FF has made it worse..so its your fault😡😆

the thesaurus.........actually the word i really like is "fantabulous" and i wont find an equivalent for that in the thesaurus now would i?😆 but still, i'll bring one for your next update/short story😆

Originally posted by: skeptical

You know when I write I can't do anything else, till I finish the story. If I have to write non-stop (which I dont mind at all 😉), when will I take a look at all the beautiful VMs you experts are making? I'll write and download yr VM side by side. So both things will be done at the same time. 😆