She longed for the truth ......... - Page 4

Originally posted by: skeptical

Firstly let me thank you for all the help through the PMs. My arm is better today and hence I have the energy to type. I am surprised to know a lot of things are common amongst us. But that I shall write about in the end. 😉

Originally posted by: skeptical

(Machiavelli was cool😉) That's exactly what he's like, isn't he?

Uhmmmmm, sending anything to the PH is a waste of time. They don't think like us. Sorry, they dont think at all.

Originally posted by: skeptical

Oh what wonderful words in pink.......and such gibberish too. As a writer you have to give nuances to the character to make him bearable. That's what I have done. Otherwise he's just a mole. Getting the drift,....I hope? 😆

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

*DEEP BOW* .................

😍 .................the list goes on ......

Dearest Skep ..... you must have realised by now .....

I have absolutely no words to describe what I feel here ..........

Now you know, why I was pestering you to write this .....

I knew you'd come up with a master piece ........... Thank you

Just what I wanted to see in the serial ............ Me too, but alas..........

This, I think is exactly how a girl like Kranti, would react ........

(Btw, I wanted you to show the old bold Kranti, not really new, our old Kranti was like this right ??? The creatives managed to warp her character with one stupid scene ........the morning after !) right

Imagining the wind caressing her cheek to be Raj ......... Sighhhhhh ... What could be more romantic ?????

All her thots leading her back to the same point..... her husband ...

Her realisation of her changing perception of him .....

Her longing to be with him ............

The "Sitting by the fountain.... holding his hand" ...... hands down winner !!!!!!

I can visualise it and it makes my heart skip a beat !!!

*Bow again*

Thanks Skep .............

For this lovely piece ..........

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

@ pink ..... exactly what I as doing Dew ..... in fact I deleted quite a few lines from my post .......

Rambling .... that was what i was doing ......😳😳😳

@ red ......... Point to be noted, your Honour !!!!!!! 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Skep ...... I am lost for words at your genius !!!!1

So I'll do the next best thing and paste here some great quotes, which I think describe your fantastic effort ........

Here goes ..........

"When you are describing, A shape, or sound, or tint; Don't state the matter plainly, But put it in a hint; And learn to look at all things, With a sort of mental squint." ~ Charles Lutwidge Dodgson, (Lewis Carroll)

"Poetry is plucking at the heartstrings, and making music with them." ~ Dennis Gabor

"When something can be read without effort, great effort has gone into its writing." ~ Enrique Jardiel Poncela

"Poets are like magicians, searching for magical phrases to pull rabbits out of people's souls." ~ Glade Byron Addams

"Poetry is the revelation of a feeling that the poet believes to be interior and personal which the reader recognizes as his own." ~ Salvatore Quasimodo

And here I think we can safely talk about both your poetry and prose skills ,...................

Originally posted by: sasha722

I hve no words to write
4 the beautiful piece work
Why it ended I am just thinking
I feel like giving a pink slip to Creatives of MRD & feeling like
hiring u , sami, jyoti, ranjana & all the + ve members of MRD
Who just lust lovve this serial
👏