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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Dear Friend,

If you have been able to read the story, it means page 1 is opening for you. I have manged to open page 2 but not page 1. Could you please copy paste those 7 replies on that page, so that I can interact with those readers. You'll do me a big favour. Thanks.

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morningdew

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Here you go-

Swapna- 🤗..........woooooooooooooooooooooooooow
frankly speaking.............wen i was reading i wished the post never end

👏

Sami-

quote@ For Sammy the words of 'Jaane kya tune kahi' somehow perfectly fit the following piece. (Yr pieces always play at the back of my mind when I write)

its a big honour dearest skepy am really moved by this..i feel this camp or that camp all of us who love the basic story of MRD feel same way.....😳 the way u captured soul of kranti...this confusion and emotions inside her....its truly moving experince as swapna said i wish it never ended😍

She shivered. Images floated in front of her eyes. She felt as if his hands were playing with her hair. She remembered that drenched night, the rain and that far away shack. Her cheeks reddened and her breathing quickened. Why did she always get disturbed in this manner?👏 am really touched by way u weave story skepy its really powerfull play of words am so amazed i want creatives to go for small subtle expressive situations like this in serial too

Sweat broke out on her brow. She closed her eyes and lifted her face to the wind. She felt enveloped. She felt his arms around her and his breath on her face. She opened her eyes in shock. She seemed to see him everywhere. It was not him but the wind gently fanning her cheeks. The curtains billowed round her head. She was very confused. Her heart seemed to betray her. i want and wish makers read this.....and have such powerfull kranti alone scene...her confusion and her emotional stae u have captured it beautifully

She would sit one day on the garden seat near that beautiful fountain. She would sit there with him holding his hand. She would sit there with him in contentment.

the eternal hope u have given its beautifull👏 am very happy skepy that finally i was able to open ur post and read it i have read it few times its jsut moving experience...purity of thoughts and emotions present give us glimpse oh hope happiness and we sincerely look forward that makers can capture skepy s peice into a sweet scene in coming episodes👏

as usual skepy brilliant👏👏👏

Poetic-

A brilliant piece of writing 👏 Skep. Like Swapna, I also wished that the piece would never finish and we would be able to read more about the play of emotions of these two souls, yearning to be with each other but finding the path difficult.

Pennu-

Woow skep.. as usual, your are simply outstanding dear....

you did a great job in bringing the lovely thoughts, confusions and emotions of Kranti and Raj towards each other in a very pure way....

When ever I am reading your such post I will slip myself into some wonderland (or else.. our Raj's la-la land) and I will always loves to be there....

Dilip-

That is great, as usual.

When I read ur post and think about the actual show fill more frustreted towrds the illogical things they show

Bhawna-

hey skippy its so beautiful yaar.
it really touched my heart.
you know what-i hope creatives read this so that they can show this kind of important as well as useful stuff in the show..
but know they will not.
yaar this self realizing is really lacking in the show.
it is teasing me a lot.

Bakwas- ( now whose Id is this? 😉)

Brilliant! Really wonderful.............

OK Skep, am not going on editing the fonts much, the focus is on efficiency..

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archita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Skep..

I am here,have been little busy and bit lazy ,so have been quite.

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Taiyo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Skepti,

I haven't read any of your recent works. Sorry about that, have been occupied with things and will be for some time. I prefer reading when I am at peace. Promise to read your stories soon.

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purvi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Wow skep. what a beautiful post. I m not able to understand Kranti or Raj's behaviour now a days. Ur story helped me. Reading ur stories makes me feel that Im listenting a smooth n souful music. the way u described kranti's feeling is just awesome. Ur a magician

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: jyoti06
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Skepti I m lost now..please someone pinch on my username so that I can come back from this Lalaland😆😳...The way u described Kranti going through this entire realization process was superb😲👏..this is what is missing in the serial actually...we still r questioning about Kranti's changed behaviour in the last episode because the way u hv handled your Kudi's character in this short story,is not done in the actual storyline... Yes I have always wanted to see a firebrand Kudi not a shrew. The Kranti that I have written about is of my imagination.

Loved the part where Kranti closes her eyes and imagines Raj everywhere around her when its just the passing winds kissing her body😳..oh my god I m getting goosebumps while saying this Arre baba wkae up.......😳..Wasn't it difficult for u to write all this Skepti😕😉..I mean slowly Kranti is going through this transformation phase..she is wanting her hubby near her..she is fighting with her heart's call😳...While describing it I m sure Skepti too was fighting with her heart because to make your Kudi fall for your favourite Rat must hv been a difficult process for u na😉😆😛 I think the basic outcome of this friction fiction was the romance which both camps wanted. But I am still waiting for the show of remorse on the Rat's face when he finally faces my kudi.

Jokes apart,Skepti I think u r just too good when it comes to describe your Kudi's thinking👏...Outrstanding Narration once again👏..was waiting for it actually because I knew Dawn had requested for it..finally the genious comes out with this amazing narration👏😳..yes Skepti your doll is fully satisfied today..Hurrahhh this is how I wanted to see Kranti always after the tabela night😳..let me send it to the creatives right now😡😆

The buffoons are not that intelligent with subtleties. Have ever seen it before?? Joey, why are the pages on the forum not working? I am not able to post anything in the KOTW or the other new post that you've started. Oohhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!! 😭 😭

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010
Amazing simply awesome.

Skep you have described her emotions and his turmoil so well, I could literally picture their faces with the emotions playing hide and seek on them.

Keep writing such stuff for our atam shanti. Arre baap re you are simply amazing girl.

😉 Thanks Ranju

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: morningdew
I m so moved.. and I was disappointed when it ended.. I wish this would go on and on.. this exactly depicts how I want Kranti to react to Raj, and how I want Raj to feel abt her. Me too and hence i was compelled to write.

Loved the part where she imagined the wind to be him.

I loved Kranti in this one.. it sent me back to the old MRD days.. Skep has made her here , what she used to be then. Even better than that Kranti. Like I told Joey, I have always thought of Kranti as tough case not a nut case.

I wish they could have the kind of love and longing in the show which you have given them here. Wish she could sit at the fountain holding his hand.. no words reqd between them.

How do you deal with emotions so delicately Skep? I m speechless..anything I say doesnt put to words the way I m feeling after having read this.

LOVED it.. 👏

Firstly let me thank you for all the help through the PMs. My arm is better today and hence I have the energy to type. I am surprised to know a lot of things are common amongst us. But that I shall write about in the end. 😉

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: morningdew
Also, loved her new resolve to change her man (Machiavelli was cool😉) and hold on to him for life.. way to go Kranti.. 👏👍🏼

Jo, please send this post as the new road map for the show.. they cannot get better than this, even if they spend their whole life on the show.. 😊

(Machiavelli was cool😉) That's exactly what he's like, isn't he?

Uhmmmmm, sending anything to the PH is a waste of time. They don't think like us. Sorry, they dont think at all.

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: morningdew
OK, I know that I m probably sounding an idiot now.. going on and on abt things I loved here, but I loved the part where she is thinking of him defending her in front of BBR and smiling. She loves his superciliousness, and she doesnt even know it herself..

What she loathes abt him attracted her to him in the first place.. that is so very true.. I can imagine, had loved the very same things abt him.

Which also means that Skep you noticed all this too.. and you dont hate him for all his boorishness either. 😊

Oh what wonderful words in pink.......and such gibberish too. As a writer you have to give nuances to the character to make him bearable. That's what I have done. Otherwise he's just a mole. Getting the drift,....I hope? 😆

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