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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Also, loved her new resolve to change her man (Machiavelli was cool😉) and hold on to him for life.. way to go Kranti.. 👏👍🏼

Jo, please send this post as the new road map for the show.. they cannot get better than this, even if they spend their whole life on the show.. 😊

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

OK, I know that I m probably sounding an idiot now.. going on and on abt things I loved here, but I loved the part where she is thinking of him defending her in front of BBR and smiling. She loves his superciliousness, and she doesnt even know it herself..

What she loathes abt him attracted her to him in the first place.. that is so very true.. I can imagine, had loved the very same things abt him.

Which also means that Skep you noticed all this too.. and you dont hate him for all his boorishness either. 😊

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

*DEEP BOW* .................

😍 .................the list goes on ......

Dearest Skep ..... you must have realised by now .....

I have absolutely no words to describe what I feel here ..........

Now you know, why I was pestering you to write this .....

I knew you'd come up with a master piece ...........

Just what I wanted to see in the serial ............

This, I think is exactly how a girl like Kranti, would react ........

(Btw, I wanted you to show the old bold Kranti, not really new, our old Kranti was like this right ??? The creatives managed to warp her character with one stupid scene ........the morning after !)

Imagining the wind caressing her cheek to be Raj ......... Sighhhhhh ... What could be more romantic ?????

All her thots leading her back to the same point..... her husband ...

Her realisation of her changing perception of him .....

Her longing to be with him ............

The "Sitting by the fountain.... holding his hand" ...... hands down winner !!!!!!

I can visualise it and it makes my heart skip a beat !!!

*Bow again*

Thanks Skep .............

For this lovely piece ..........

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: morningdew
OK, I know that I m probably sounding an idiot now.. going on and on abt things I loved here, but I loved the part where she is thinking of him defending her in front of BBR and smiling. She loves his superciliousness, and she doesnt even know it herself..

What she loathes abt him attracted her to him in the first place.. that is so very true.. I can imagine, had loved the very same things abt him.

Which also means that Skep you noticed all this too.. and you dont hate him for all his boorishness either. 😊

@ pink ..... exactly what I as doing Dew ..... in fact I deleted quite a few lines from my post .......

Rambling .... that was what i was doing ......😳😳😳

@ red ......... Point to be noted, your Honour !!!!!!! 😆😆😆

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Skep ...... I am lost for words at your genius !!!!1

So I'll do the next best thing and paste here some great quotes, which I think describe your fantastic effort ........

Here goes ..........

"When you are describing, A shape, or sound, or tint; Don't state the matter plainly, But put it in a hint; And learn to look at all things, With a sort of mental squint." ~ Charles Lutwidge Dodgson, (Lewis Carroll)

"Poetry is plucking at the heartstrings, and making music with them." ~ Dennis Gabor

"When something can be read without effort, great effort has gone into its writing." ~ Enrique Jardiel Poncela

"Poets are like magicians, searching for magical phrases to pull rabbits out of people's souls." ~ Glade Byron Addams

"Poetry is the revelation of a feeling that the poet believes to be interior and personal which the reader recognizes as his own." ~ Salvatore Quasimodo

And here I think we can safely talk about both your poetry and prose skills ,...................

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: morningdew
Also, loved her new resolve to change her man (Machiavelli was cool😉) and hold on to him for life.. way to go Kranti.. 👏👍🏼

Jo, please send this post as the new road map for the show.. they cannot get better than this, even if they spend their whole life on the show.. 😊

@ pink ...... I strongly second that ........... 👏

They would need more than one life time to come up with something as sensitive / sensible / romantic / subtle as this .................

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archita

@who am i???

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Skep..

Excellent that was really so well written. Loved readn it .

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

D_I ,

Need yr help urgently. Since I have posted the story, I haven't been able to see it. The pages just dont open. How this one has opened I dont know. I dont know how everyone has reacted to the story, and from the above post i can tell that at least you and dewy have liked it. But there are 16 replies and I can't read any but this one. 😭 I dont know if this will go through either. Please ask Joey whats wrong??? I could read the Pms from 5 of you. Poor Sammy has been trying to open the first page and has failed. Like me. 😕

Other posts like KOTW are also not opening. 👎🏼 Rather fed up.

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: who am i???
Skep..
Excellent that was really so well written. Loved readn it .

Thank you Riddle. I'm seeing you after a long time. Where've you been?

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Arwen11

@Arwen11

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Skepti...........................FANTABULOUS(this is fast bcming my favorite word😆)👏

Most of what i want to say has already been said....... loved the ending........and that para about Raj's feelings...awwwwwwwww🤗 i felt like hugging him😳😆.......i also hope the creatives incorporate this entire scenario into the storyline....perhaps by using a flashback scene (Sam suggested it i think) or something to explain the sudden cange in kranti.........

u knw perhaps u should consider joining some production house or even the creative team of MRD.......u'll do a rockinj job😊

👏

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