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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: khoya chand
just awesome..very very beautiful...👏u are really creative minded ...👏hats off to u...👍🏼

Hi Chaan ka tukda,

Would you believe it if I told you, that that picture that you have next to yr Id is one which I have described in the story? Thanks for that. 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: an12345678
Skepti,

I haven't read any of your recent works. Sorry about that, have been occupied with things and will be for some time. I prefer reading when I am at peace. Promise to read your stories ???????? soon.

What??????????/ Stories ?????? You haven't read any????????? 😡 This is too bad, yaar. What will happen to my reputation?????

😉 Take yr time, the story isn't moving anyway. 🤢

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: akashruti12
realllllllly very nice!!!!!!!!!

Thank you. I hope you enjoyed reading it. 😉

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: coolpurvi
Wow skep. what a beautiful post. I m not able to understand Kranti or Raj's behaviour now a days. Ur story helped me. Reading ur stories makes me feel that Im listenting a smooth n souful music. the way u described kranti's feeling is just awesome. Ur a magician

Smooth and soulful music? Wow ! Thats really a cute compliment, mere hawa ka jhoka !!!! 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010
You are welcome anyday skep. Now I know I am risking my head with this. But seriously after reading your short stories and then this post I think that you dont hate Raj so much after all (or is it now ) so now is the leader of anti raj camp planning to change sides. LOL

Spare the danda shall I give you a broom?????please I was just joking infact I was so smitten by this piece by you that I read it again and decided to comment again. As I thought that what ever I wrote was not enough and I am again confused. you are not fair girl. you always leave me toungue tied and imagine it is happened second time for the same writing.

Arre Ranju, thank God you stopped at the second reading. Last time my doll read the last story 5 times !!!!! Uska to kya kehna???? 😲

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Bugger

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

OMG!!OMG!! i cant blive this skepti .......u actually made the whole scene alive ..............amazing choice of words and imagination!!

lovely .............

again i hav no words ......so understand wat i want to say in ur tarrif!!😆😆😆

i m actually on this thread since half an hour thinking wat to type .....so i think tum khud hi samajh jao 😆

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Gagori Chatterjee

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: skeptical

The buffoons are not that intelligent with subtleties. Have ever seen it before?? Joey, why are the pages on the forum not working? I am not able to post anything in the KOTW or the other new post that you've started. Oohhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!! 😭 😭

Skepti these creatives hv reduced your Kudi into a nurse now😡🤢...I m missing the freedom fighter within Kranti now😭...u know if all this leads to Kranti and Raj being thrown out of the house thanks to some evil tricks being played by BBR,I will b happy..because then at least we can hope to see Kranti getting back to her roots of being a freedom fighter again and not a ninny😡🤢..I hope creatives come to the forum and sees all these posts and short FFs of yours😳

Skepti is the problem solved now..r u able to open your posts now..please let me know😳..and did Vijay reply to u..

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Dawn

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

The buffoons are not that intelligent with subtleties. Have ever seen it before??

@ Skep

I was talking about subtilities .......... too .....the Chachi-Chacha scene you know ....... my POV in another post .....

It should have been done with looks only .....

You know ...... aankhon -aankhon me ....... SUBTLENESS ..... that would have been superb ....

Kranti ....as soon as she said the words ... realises the implication and goes red .... giving Raj a swift look to see if he heard ...... and then blushing .............

And Raj ..... going from suprised to delighted then teasing .... finally giving her a rougish grin !!!!!!!!

That would have made my day !!!!!

But the creatives dont have our dear's Skep's flair for romance !!!!!!

So .... maybe, we should be happy with this only !!!!!!!!!!

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morningdew

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

The buffoons are not that intelligent with subtleties. Have ever seen it before??

@ Skep

I was talking about subtilities .......... too .....the Chachi-Chacha scene you know ....... my POV in another post .....

It should have been done with looks only .....

You know ...... aankhon -aankhon me ....... SUBTLENESS ..... that would have been superb ....

Kranti ....as soon as she said the words ... realises the implication and goes red .... giving Raj a swift look to see if he heard ...... and then blushing .............

And Raj ..... going from suprised to delighted then teasing .... finally giving her a rougish grin !!!!!!!!

That would have made my day !!!!!

But the creatives dont have our dear's Skep's flair for romance !!!!!!

So .... maybe, we should be happy with this only !!!!!!!!!!

Totally agree.. that was so ridiculous.. Raj was like, "Hai la.. tu chachi, main chacha !!!"

Why was it necessay for him to even voice that thought.. only the surprise on his face and her going red with embarassment was enough.

Subtleties.. subtleties..these ppl will never learn.

But I loved Sanjay yday.. he was superb.. his range of emotions was awesome.. even the mami.. she is actually loathesome.. as always, I strongly maintain that she is a wonderful actress.

Edited by morningdew - 16 years ago

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#50

Namita, Bugs, Pennu, Bhawna, dilip,swapna,

Sorry for not acknowledging earlier, but the pages are not opening. Thank you.

Sammy,

I am happy to note that the very things that had some special reference were important to you too. Obviously you read with your heart and as D_I said - heard the music that my words made as they flowed out of my pen.

Dewy & D_I

What we seem to have in common is the need for this pair to find happiness through the quest of their hearts. I dont know if either of you and Sammy had ever looked at that fountain in earnest before. But every time a scene changed, I could see this fountain in the foreground. I thought I needed to mention it because it faithfully sprayed water beautifully.

Most of you also liked the idea of R_K sitting hand in hand silently near this symbolic fountain. Like D_I said there was no need for words......... just a feeling of peace and togetherness.

The wind playing with her hair was also significant. My kudi has beautiful hair that has a rich fall to it. At least I think so. Hence it looks particularly lovely when left loose. Her eyes soften when she smiles and her face takes on a different look. Its a kind of a dreamy look.

And to all those who have accused me of paying more attention to the Rat in posts or repartees, this should state how much I have observed her, whenever the buffoons have allowed the camera to rest on her face when it is happy. If they give her good lines to say and shape her character well, she will bloom.

I am writing all this in one single post because this website is not working well for me and is tripping again and again.