A Night to Remember - Page 2

Originally posted by: poetic

A great piece of writing Skep. 👏 You have captured the feelings of both R and K separately and quite well. The fateful night as well as teh morning after are important moments of their lives, which are goign to change them of course.

Thanks a lot.

Here's something to Hope by Emily Dickinson

Hope is a thing with feathers
That perches in the soul
And sings a tune without words
And never stops at all.

And sweetest, in the gale, is heard
And sore must be the storm
That could abash the little bird
That keeps so many warm.

I?ve heard it in the chilliest land
And on the strangest sea
Yet, never, in extremity
It ask a crumb of me.

Originally posted by: sami01

finsihed reading it skepy i am moved u have captured the essence of story beautifully ....that deliema confusion and soul searching .....this i sroad for RK ahead i feel and i hope creatives build story on emotions now.......thanks for wonderfull treat it was worth the wait.....

Originally posted by: akashruti12

its cho chweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet thanx a lot

Originally posted by: coolpurvi

Skep its brilliant. Ur version has made Tabela more beautiful

Thanks. Although I have not liked even the idea of having the tabela so soon. I have just tried to make the whole thing more acceptable to the likes of me. Intimacy without feelings on both sides is 🤢. I would have liked some show of feelings betw R-K hence this effort.
Regarding Tabela idea ur right that idea was stupid. If I were at Nirmal or Sanjay's place I wud have never planned any Tabela to clear misunderstandings rather I wud have tried to understand the problem n tried my level best to clear it.

I loved the last two paras. we can see a changed Raj n Kranti there

Two biggest questions r whether Tabela was must for Raj's trasformation n whether kranti's anger is justified. I got their answers in ur stories n posts of Jo, chand, bhawna, namita

I have tried to answer this elsewhere, but here it is for u again---------

However, throughout the story she is the one who has lost and lost at his hands. He has lost nothing, instead he has made a few gains. If he has been kind enough to allow her to stay in the house, it was to save his family name. She has returned that in essence when she takes care of his parents. The equation is complete there.

What has been mortifying for her has been the fact that she has started getting attracted to this man. This man who has ruined ..... had ruined her life. For him its different. She hasn't ruined his life. His life just changes froom one phase to another. For her, the transition is far more complex and difficult. Hence my sympathy lies with her.

Personally dont know what happens after consuming alcohol. got some in from enzine article.com abt short term effect of alcohol consumption

1. Reduced Inhibitions - consuming alcohol changes behavior. At a blood alcohol level of 0.05, the drinker's behavior begins to change and be noticable. Physical effects of alcohol and reduced inhibitions can mean the drinker becomes more likely to engage in activities they would otherwise not participate in like sexual activity, continued drinking, drinking and driving or illegal drug use.

I think she'd fall in this group. Since each person holds alcohol differently, I'd like to believe, she would not have felt the need to be close to her partner had she not known it to be Raj her husband.

Her anger is justified to some extent but at the same time Raj was also not wrong ... after all there was no moral restriction before him she was his wife

Justifed or unjustifed I dont know but the result of this anger n hatered will be something positive. We would not have seen this new Raj had she not behaved like this