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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Arwen...

Skep, u r too good...the best is that u have looked beyond kranti's hatred to the the confusion and the yearning beneath the surface. hai... Mar Jawan...

Arwen,
First thanks for reading my lamba lamba bhashan. I hope the buffoons don't make us feel 🤢 with a long drawn stupid "Kranti hates Raj more than ever and Raj is the picture of a broken heart" track.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: pennu

Oh skep..

there is no words to praise you dear👏.... the way you wrote each and every scene was just so beautiful and so pure as a white snow.... I will always love to read your version along with jyoti's... jyoti's updates gives as a feeling of watching a beautiful movie... while yours gives a feeling of reading a beautiful and touching story....
good job👏

Thanks Pen,
Oh How could you put Joey and me in the same bracket...........😡
She is my sworn enemy................
Didn't you know that??? 😉 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Bugger

tht was a pretty gud work........👏..yaar main tumhari taarif karte karte thak gayi hun ..😆😆...but i think i hav no option left when u rite so beautifully!! 😊

u hav described the situation so nicely .....it amde the episode more beautiful and meaningful!!
i wish creatives wud hav shown such details along with the minor thought process going within them........it wud have given a diff angle and dimension to tht episode

Hi Bugs,
It took me three hours to formulate and write this story. Toh agar aap thodi si taarif karoge to bahuuuuuuut achcha lagega 😍 😍😍
But thanks all the same
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Brilliant as always ............. Skep dear ..........

You have brought our their thots beautifully ...........
Agree with Bugs here .......... the creatives would do well to bring out the thot process also when the situation demands it ........
The whole scene was sensitively brought out ........... with just the right amount of romance and passion .............
Thank you so much .........My pleasure, D_I

It was for you my delicate sprite. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

@ Bhawna

@ Addy
Thanks !!!!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Trust me Skepti I was not so much emotionally moved after watching the episode than I m now😭..The reason why I m replying so late is because I wanted to read it at least 5 times before I can reply😳..Why did you take 5 times?/ Was the story that obscure? I think this story is one of the best u hv written so far👏...I m amazed how aesthetically u dscribed those intimate moments between RK👏 Thanks

Also the part which was missing in the actual episode has been brought into notice in this brilliant story of yours👏...I m talking about the emotional quotient and the voice coming out from Raj and Kranti's heart😳.. I am trying to salvage the storyline which the buffoons are dishing out for myself in my own way.
Just loved the way Raj was trying to convey his own feelings for Kranti to his own self...the fact that he believes he is in love with Kranti not because of last night but because of previous interactions..is so well explained by u in the story👏..the creatives need to do this today only before we all get confused about Raj's feelings and what does he think about the night😊
Also I loved the way Kranti was asking those questions to herself in the car.👏..She was just not thinking about hatred here..she was actually trying to analyze her own faults and weaknesses too...woww superbly explained here👏👏👏...I hope that Kranti too tries to ask these questions to herself this week so that her character does not become only one-dimentional in her hatred towards Raj😊 I hope they dont force us to suffer any more stupidity........
Overall Skepti if I was a critic and I was asked to give a rating for this FF,I would hv given it *****(5) Star rating for this flawless description of the grt RK-Night and the morning later😳😳.. My next would be called ...."The Aftermath" Hahahahaha.
If only u were the creative of MRD They wouldn't have given me a job, I can assure you😭..Anyways I m just sending this FF-Stoy of your to the Production team so that at least they don't do any more blunders now with RK's character😃

@ pink
What's the use? they are all buffoons, remember? 😲
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: namita25

brilliant work skepti.👏👏.👏..as usual.....by the way have you ever thought of penning down a book.... trust me everyone is going to love it..............

Thanks Namita. I have written down several short stories, but have never published any.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
Skep you said aomething about "The Aftermath" in your reply to Jo .....
I have another idea ......
Would you write from the POV .....
That Kranthi is accepting that she too just gave in to the moment and enjoyed herself ..............
And that she does not hold Raj solely responsible .........
I mean, lets not have that Kranti crying and blaming Raj .... trying to wash off the traces of his touch ...... etc... etc ....
Can she, like the independent / practical / bold girl that she is, accept the fact that something that shouldn't have happened - happened .....
So what? Lets move on ........ can you show her taking this view ? .... and Raj's reaction to that .........
I think this would be a good scenario ...... no melodrama / no rantings / no blaming ......... just a resolute acceptance to move on with her goal in life ..........
Edited by Dawn Idol - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: skeptical

Thanks Pen,
Oh How could you put Joey and me in the same bracket...........😡
She is my sworn enemy................
Didn't you know that??? 😉 😆

Oh really i didnt know that... any way i love both of yours versions.... hey by the way skep.. i came to know that you used to write short stories also... arey send those to us na... we will read and enjoy.... and sure we will not forget to praise you dear........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: skeptical

@ pink
What's the use? they are all buffoons, remember? 😲

Skepti I read it 5 times just to experience the beauty and soul with which u hv penned down this Masterpiece👏😳..
And of course these creatives can never identify real talent..so they might not give any of us any job😭..they only believe in ^$%^%$ quality😡😆
Skepti if they can fulfill my tabela fantasy even though its not the way most of them wanted but still...😆..then I m sure they can also look after these suggestions and stories na😳..
At least after our feedbacks the story is taking some turn😆.
Edited by jyoti06 - 16 years ago

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