Raj's Fall Now Kranti's turn-Uptd Part XVI Pg 30 - Page 2

Originally posted by: an12345678

Another budding writer in this forum, is there anyone, other than me of course, who is not one?

Good one Ranjana... 😊

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Ranjana where were u hiding your talent till now😲😲..oh my god I take a deep bow👏 ...looking at the talent of this forum,..I m really feeling proud to b part of such a wonderful parivaar now🤗

What an amazing piece of writing dear👏...Raj's dream was just soooo Passionate...I wish the kiss happened in the dream ...but anyways mayb it will happen in real only😉😆😳...And I really hope the creatives read this FF of yours and quickly show us in the serial😳...What a superb romantic scenario👏

I used to write such scenarios in Kaajjal forum...now a days don't get much time😭..but now looking at this masterpiece I feel like writing some here too😳

Will try to write some romantic scenarios this weekend😳

Ranjna please continue it na...and make it a permanent RK-FF😳...Would love to see the continuation😳

Originally posted by: pari29

oh it is soooooooo awsome i wish it could happen

Originally posted by: sami01

amazing amazing fan fic do continue it reminds me of kajjal famous situations created by kashish mala and jyoti madam..do continue i really loved this

Originally posted by: pari29

oh it is soooooooo awsome i wish it could happen

So here comes the next part.

Raj wakes up pretty late the sun was already up. He realizing this jumper out of the bed quickly got ready and came out to the garden where Kranti was sitting with the family and having tea.

R: Good morning everyone. (Purposely avoiding looking at K)

S: Good morning Raj seems you didn't sleep well at night your eyes are swollen come join us for some tea.

You are a lucky man you have love of your life as your wife and she is such an amazing cook she make awesome paranthas for all of us.

R Suddenly lifted his gaze and set it on K. Who was now sitting and having sweet chat with both the kids. And trying to play some game with them.

K was dressed in red suit and was looking very pretty with R kept looking at her and suddenly his dream and later the sight of her snuggled in the blanket rushed though his mind. He couldn't keep himself form smiling.

S: what happened R, everything ok. You seem to be lost in some thought.

R: yes, everything is alright.

S: Preeti why don't you tell K to fix pranthas for R as well I am sure he must be hungry.

P: Sure. And goes away to call K.

R has his breakfast silently admiring the pranthas and the cook. They set course again after bidding good bye to he family. R is feeling sleepy and looks a little uncomfortable.

K: Are you alright?

R: Yes, why?

K: you don't look too good to me.

R: How can I be, Since I am carrying my enemy along with me. Anyway why are you so concerned (wanting to listen a concerned reply)

K: I don't want to die cos of your bad driving, and don't want you to die even, things will be too easy for you then.

R just looked at her with a visible hurt in his eyes.

R to himself.

"R what's happening to you I could have answered her back. Her words should not affect me so much but no they are I am feeling bad what is this. No I can't be falling in love with her. She is my enemy she is out to destroy my father's dream. I have a duty to ensure that he becomes a rai bahadur and this woman is the biggest hurdle in that."

K: Suddenly shouting R what are you doing and she forcibly tugs at the steering to avoid collision with a truck coming form the other side. Her head bangs against R's chest and R is in an utter state of shock. Moment she recovers form initial shock. K pulls herself away form him but her hair gets entangled in his shirt button (Folks I am being very predictable here but then it is practical too). R makes no effort to free her hair he is too shocked to react and is totally silent. K frees her hair and gives a killer look to R.

K: (literally shouting) what are you up to you nearly killed both of us. K carries on saying something to R.

R is not listening to anything he is thinking.

"R what is this, this has never happened to you. You don't believe in love and that too with you enemy. I was so lost in my own thoughts that I dint even see the vehicle coming from the other side."

He is very confused on his own situation. He suddenly jerks himself out of these thoughts.

R: Are you ok?

K: Yes I am but you had made up your mind to kill me today, already scared of me Mr. Rajveer Lal.

R could not reply every harsh word of K was hurting him like a spear and he was feeling helpless. K too noticed the change in his behavior. She too is a little confused but chose to ignore it. They continue with the rest of their journey without much of an event.

Once they are back in Lahore R stops K form entering the house.

R: Please don't tell anything about the accident to anyone in the family they will get worried.

K: Don't worry R I don't believe in hurting the family members like some people and Chaliji is like my mother.

R: Thanks

And walks in leaving K behind. K is confused on this new R as he is the person ready to spit venom on her all he time. Nevertheless she again chooses to ignore it as one of his mood swings.

In the evening K is doing some work in the room and R is working on his desk Suddenly Chaiji walks in.

C: R we have to go for this wedding of one of our friend's son.

R: chaiji you guys carry on I will not be able to join.

C: No R both of you will have to come they are very close friends and this way everyone will meet K as well.

R's heart skipped a beat for a reason unknown to him

He suddenly got up and walked out. He went to his study and poured himself a drink while slowly sipping he kept thinking. Different images of K kept crossing his mind when he saw her for the first time, when she tried to stab him, K standing beside the window with her hair open and then in that red suit.

He shrugged his head with irritation.

R: (muttering to himself) Why don't you leave me alone K.

K: Why we are married and how can I leave you alone my dear husband;

R: (Suddenly turning around) when did you come here.

K: when you were wishing that I should just go away some where.

R: (Looking very hurt) Did you have some work?

K: Yes chaiji has asked us to be ready for the marriage in the evening and she sent me here to tell you that you need to be back in time.

R: I will.

K leaves and R is still hurt with her acid talk and tone

R again sits down thinking one faint voice in him telling him that he does not want K to go anywhere now. He goes off to sleep in the study while struggling with his own thoughts.

He wakes up in the morning and gets ready to leave for work. K comes along with him asks him to drop her at Nirmal's place as she wanted to spend some time with her sister.

They leave R drops her at Nirmal's place.

In the evening R is driving his car and suddenly stops the car and look outside. He is surprised to find himself outside Nirmal's house. Without realizing he drove to Nirmal's house to pick up K.

Again the same feeling of dread, love and longing crosses his mind at the same time.

He walks in to find the door locked. Khala comes there and tells him that Nirmal and K have left for the temple and K said she would go home on her own form there.

R take khala's leave and drives towards the temple. Moment he stops the car he spots K talking to a guy. He is a tall and a very handsome man dressed in a pathani suit.

R suddenly gets a pang of jealousy seeing K talking to this man in a very friendly manner.

R then starts climbing the stairs and by the time he reached K is left alone and that man has already left.

R quite rudely asks her to come along. So much so that Nirmal who has joined them by now is also confused. K takes her leave and they carry on.

Will continue'''

Thanks a lot for reading it.

Originally posted by: ranjna_m2010

Part II The delimma continues....

For all my friends here

Thanks once again for appreciating my writing and encouraging me to carry on.

So here comes the next part.

Raj wakes up pretty late the sun was already up. He realizing this jumper out of the bed quickly got ready and came out to the garden where Kranti was sitting with the family and having tea.

R: Good morning everyone. (Purposely avoiding looking at K)

S: Good morning Raj seems you didn't sleep well at night your eyes are swollen come join us for some tea.

You are a lucky man you have love of your life as your wife and she is such an amazing cook she make awesome paranthas for all of us.

R Suddenly lifted his gaze and set it on K. Who was now sitting and having sweet chat with both the kids. And trying to play some game with them.

K was dressed in red suit and was looking very pretty with R kept looking at her and suddenly his dream and later the sight of her snuggled in the blanket rushed though his mind. He couldn't keep himself form smiling.

S: what happened R, everything ok. You seem to be lost in some thought.

R: yes, everything is alright.

S: Preeti why don't you tell K to fix pranthas for R as well I am sure he must be hungry.

P: Sure. And goes away to call K.

R has his breakfast silently admiring the pranthas and the cook. They set course again after bidding good bye to he family. R is feeling sleepy and looks a little uncomfortable.

K: Are you alright?

R: Yes, why?

K: you don't look too good to me.

R: How can I be, Since I am carrying my enemy along with me. Anyway why are you so concerned (wanting to listen a concerned reply)

K: I don't want to die cos of your bad driving, and don't want you to die even, things will be too easy for you then.

R just looked at her with a visible hurt in his eyes.

R to himself.

"R what's happening to you I could have answered her back. Her words should not affect me so much but no they are I am feeling bad what is this. No I can't be falling in love with her. She is my enemy she is out to destroy my father's dream. I have a duty to ensure that he becomes a rai bahadur and this woman is the biggest hurdle in that."

K: Suddenly shouting R what are you doing and she forcibly tugs at the steering to avoid collision with a truck coming form the other side. Her head bangs against R's chest and R is in an utter state of shock. Moment she recovers form initial shock. K pulls herself away form him but her hair gets entangled in his shirt button (Folks I am being very predictable here but then it is practical too). R makes no effort to free her hair he is too shocked to react and is totally silent. K frees her hair and gives a killer look to R.

K: (literally shouting) what are you up to you nearly killed both of us. K carries on saying something to R.

R is not listening to anything he is thinking.

"R what is this, this has never happened to you. You don't believe in love and that too with you enemy. I was so lost in my own thoughts that I dint even see the vehicle coming from the other side."

He is very confused on his own situation. He suddenly jerks himself out of these thoughts.

R: Are you ok?

K: Yes I am but you had made up your mind to kill me today, already scared of me Mr. Rajveer Lal.

R could not reply every harsh word of K was hurting him like a spear and he was feeling helpless. K too noticed the change in his behavior. She too is a little confused but chose to ignore it. They continue with the rest of their journey without much of an event.

Once they are back in Lahore R stops K form entering the house.

R: Please don't tell anything about the accident to anyone in the family they will get worried.

K: Don't worry R I don't believe in hurting the family members like some people and Chaliji is like my mother.

R: Thanks

And walks in leaving K behind. K is confused on this new R as he is the person ready to spit venom on her all he time. Nevertheless she again chooses to ignore it as one of his mood swings.

In the evening K is doing some work in the room and R is working on his desk Suddenly Chaiji walks in.

C: R we have to go for this wedding of one of our friend's son.

R: chaiji you guys carry on I will not be able to join.

C: No R both of you will have to come they are very close friends and this way everyone will meet K as well.

R's heart skipped a beat for a reason unknown to him

He suddenly got up and walked out. He went to his study and poured himself a drink while slowly sipping he kept thinking. Different images of K kept crossing his mind when he saw her for the first time, when she tried to stab him, K standing beside the window with her hair open and then in that red suit.

He shrugged his head with irritation.

R: (muttering to himself) Why don't you leave me alone K.

K: Why we are married and how can I leave you alone my dear husband;

R: (Suddenly turning around) when did you come here.

K: when you were wishing that I should just go away some where.

R: (Looking very hurt) Did you have some work?

K: Yes chaiji has asked us to be ready for the marriage in the evening and she sent me here to tell you that you need to be back in time.

R: I will.

K leaves and R is still hurt with her acid talk and tone

R again sits down thinking one faint voice in him telling him that he does not want K to go anywhere now. He goes off to sleep in the study while struggling with his own thoughts.

He wakes up in the morning and gets ready to leave for work. K comes along with him asks him to drop her at Nirmal's place as she wanted to spend some time with her sister.

They leave R drops her at Nirmal's place.

In the evening R is driving his car and suddenly stops the car and look outside. He is surprised to find himself outside Nirmal's house. Without realizing he drove to Nirmal's house to pick up K.

Again the same feeling of dread, love and longing crosses his mind at the same time.

He walks in to find the door locked. Khala comes there and tells him that Nirmal and K have left for the temple and K said she would go home on her own form there.

R take khala's leave and drives towards the temple. Moment he stops the car he spots K talking to a guy. He is a tall and a very handsome man dressed in a pathani suit.

R suddenly gets a pang of jealousy seeing K talking to this man in a very friendly manner.

R then starts climbing the stairs and by the time he reached K is left alone and that man has already left.

R quite rudely asks her to come along. So much so that Nirmal who has joined them by now is also confused. K takes her leave and they carry on.

Will continue'''

Thanks a lot for reading it.