*RK..FF-Jaane Kya Chahe Maan*UPDATED-Part2 ,Page2 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: skeptical

Don't wait for ppl to send u their reactions. You just write as yr heart tells dictates or you will get a writer's block.

Thx skepti...4 dis wonderful advice..i'll continue soon...😳
till den...
keep rockin'
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neha😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Neha first of all sorry for the late reply..was really very depressed with the Mumbai riots still going on😭😭..

Just read your first part..it was a very touching one👏👏👏...I hope Raj's father is alright😭..and I m sure now Raj will b anti-KKs ..chalo here he will at least hv one valid reason😉😆...now I m eagerly waiting for Kranti's introduction too😳

Neha your next part should b bigger than this as my curiosity level is increasing slowly😛..
But outstanding narration👏👏👏
P.S:Skepti I m waiting for your FF contination too...😳
Edited by jyoti06 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Neha first of all sorry for the late reply..was really very depressed with the Mumbai riots still going on😭😭..

Just read your first part..it was a very touching one👏👏👏...I hope Raj's father is alright😭..and I m sure now Raj will b anti-KKs ..chalo here he will at least hv one valid reason😉😆...now I m eagerly waiting for Kranti's introduction too😳

Neha your next part should b bigger than this as my curiosity level is increasing slowly😛..
But outstanding narration👏👏👏
P.S:Skepti I m waiting for your FF contination too...😳

thx sweetheart...i can understand..mumbaii blast..newzz... indeed very sad...😭😭i wuz missin' ur commentzzzzzzzz...😛...well i shud have read ur comment b4..its lil' late now...cuz i hv alreadyy UPDATED ma PARTII...sorry for ny disappointment..it may hv caused...😳Kranti...will b introduced very soon as well...
*hugs*
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neha😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: *mesweet neha*

thx sweetheart...i can understand..mumbaii blast..newzz... indeed very sad...😭😭i wuz missin' ur commentzzzzzzzz...😛...well i shud have read ur comment b4..its lil' late now...cuz i hv alreadyy UPDATED ma PARTII...sorry for ny disappointment..it may hv caused...😳Kranti...will b introduced very soon as well...
*hugs*
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neha😳

Ok finally I read your second part too😳... I m happy that Raj has not changed his mind even after seeing his father's condition👏...Also the letter by his father really made me emotional😭...that was very well written Neha👏👏...I m now just waiting for Raj's interaction with his father once his father regains consciousness😳..hopefully both father-son will now fight this battle against the britishers😃
Woww Neha this is getting really interesting now👏..waiting eagerly for your next part😳
Achha one suggestion from my part Neha...when u write a new part...just mention the page no. too in your title where u hv continued with your next part..because when the post will cross say 50 or more pages it becomes difficult to search for the latest part😳...
And I hv added your FF in the archieves now😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kul B dies ? And the Rat ... eh sorry your hero is now fatherless !!!!! I hope he is able to find it in himself to forgive him, unless his crimes were too many or too gr8.
Edited by skeptical - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Ok finally I read your second part too😳... I m happy that Raj has not changed his mind even after seeing his father's condition👏...Also the letter by his father really made me emotional😭...that was very well written Neha👏👏...I m now just waiting for Raj's interaction with his father once his father regains consciousness😳..hopefully both father-son will now fight this battle against the britishers😃
Woww Neha this is getting really interesting now👏..waiting eagerly for your next part😳
Achha one suggestion from my part Neha...when u write a new part...just mention the page no. too in your title where u hv continued with your next part..because when the post will cross say 50 or more pages it becomes difficult to search for the latest part😳...
And I hv added your FF in the archieves now😃

thx a lot jo!!*hugs*😳....
ummmmmmmmmm...m not sure m gettin' wa yew r sayin'....raj's father is dead..as per ma story...not unconscious.......dear...😃..😕...buh..dont worry...our raj...has sum1...special who will help him...in wa he wants 2 doe...😃
Sure dear..thx 4 lettin' me noe...😳...yea its betta' dat waii..i'll make sure i mark d page number as well...😃
thx again...sweetheart...😳
luv
neha😳
Edited by *mesweet neha* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: skeptical

Kul B dies ? And the Rat ... eh sorry your hero is now fatherless !!!!! I hope he is able to find it in himself to forgive him, unless his crimes were too many or too gr8.

yes skepti....our rat is now fatherless...buh...plz take it in d positive sense...as dis will encourage him...2 serve his country even more....😳
n' don' worry dear...he has olreadii' forgiven...his father...after readin' dat letter...wen he wish...he cud goe back in tym...n' change things....dis proves dat ol'...😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Neha ............. this part was really touching ..........
I liked the way you showed Raj ...........strong principles even in the face of tragedy ..........
I am eager for Kranti's intro now ..........
Please update as and when you get time ...........
Cheers .............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Neha ............. this part was really touching ..........

I liked the way you showed Raj ...........strong principles even in the face of tragedy ..........
I am eager for Kranti's intro now ..........
Please update as and when you get time ...........
Cheers .............

thx a lot dawn...😃😃.......yes....in ma story...i tried 2 potrait...raj as a very strong character....for whom...his principles n' morals....comes first...😳...glad yew liked it... 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: *mesweet neha*

thx a lot jo!!*hugs*😳....
ummmmmmmmmm...m not sure m gettin' wa yew r sayin'....raj's father is dead..as per ma story...not unconscious.......dear...😃..😕...buh..dont worry...our raj...has sum1...special who will help him...in wa he wants 2 doe...😃
Sure dear..thx 4 lettin' me noe...😳...yea its betta' dat waii..i'll make sure i mark d page number as well...😃
thx again...sweetheart...😳
luv
neha😳

Oh yes my mistake..I read it in a hurry so thought he is just unconscious😕...so Raj's father is already dead now😭😭...I hope someone else becomes a father figure for our Raju😭😭..this is really sad...what will happen to Raj now..at such an early age he is left without his father😭

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