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Bhawna1004

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

yaar your starting is really sad.
i watched a movie on these riots -you made my memories very clear of that film through this post.
it was really sad.
anyways -
i must say your comic and emotional sense are worth applause.
great going.
i am looking forward for the next.

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Neha

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: bhawna_dhunna
yaar your starting is really sad.
i watched a movie on these riots -you made my memories very clear of that film through this post.
it was really sad.
anyways -
i must say your comic and emotional sense are worth applause.
great going.
i am looking forward for the next.

thx a lot bhawna..i really appriciate it...😳...

i js wanted 2 doe sumthin' different...dis tym.....

I noe..dis is d very sensitive topic...n' its heart wrenchin' as well...n' its natural 2 feel sad...after readin' dis...😭😭😭....buh dats js a reality...of d history..dat 1 cud neva change...😭

i am runnin' ma talli posts with dis ff as well...so that i can make yew laugh along with dis sadness...

buh dont worry...dis post will not b js sad..it will have strong characters...romance,humour,satire n' every masala...as d story will goe futher...😃

so cheer..up...

n' thx 4 commentin'...ur d first 1...😆😆

luv

neha😳

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

1984 killings were brazenly instigated by the politicians. What a shame!

Oh Raj's father is gravely injured? What will happen next?? Arre Chica itna short part?? Kyuuuuuun? 😲

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Neha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: skeptical
1984 killings were brazenly instigated by the politicians. What a shame!

Oh Raj's father is gravely injured? What will happen next?? Arre Chica itna short part?? Kyuuuuuun? 😲

yea daz so tru...eh!!!...dis completely disgust me....sucha disgrace on dese politician's part...😕😕😕

oh..yeah...skepti...it iz a short part indeed...buh..wanted 2 wait 4 d responses...on dis part...js 2 make sure dat every1..iz happy with dis current track of ma ff....😃

lemme noe guyz...if ya wanted ny changes.....😳

luv

neha😳

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Taiyo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Neharika... am I right? 😊 Sorry, have not read your FF... will do soon. Keep the writing going.

Btw, your online lingo is kamaal ka... 😊

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Dawn

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Wow Neha ........... that was a gripping start ..........

You have a nice way with words ............

I'm glad Raj realises his father's crimes .............

Please continue ..............

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skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: *mesweet neha*

oh..yeah...skepti...it iz a short part indeed...buh..wanted 2 wait 4 d responses...on dis part...js 2 make sure dat every1..iz happy with dis current track of ma ff....😃

lemme noe guyz...if ya wanted ny changes.....😳

luv

neha😳

Don't wait for ppl to send u their reactions. You just write as yr heart tells dictates or you will get a writer's block.

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Bhawna1004

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

well its brilliantly expressed.
believe me the expressions you gave to raj is totally believable .,very true very original.
keep up the good work yaar.
and the college students conversations is really original cause we people generally talk like this.
i really like it dear.👍🏼

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Neha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol
Wow Neha ........... that was a gripping start ..........

You have a nice way with words ............

I'm glad Raj realises his father's crimes .............

Please continue ..............

thx a million "dawn"😆...(though styl waitin' 2 noe ur real name...😆😆😆)

yes...m makin' sure dat raj..in ma ff...iz smart...enuf...2 luk @ things clearly...😆😆😆

i'll continue 4 sure..dear...😳

luv ya..

neha😳

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Neha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: an12345678
Neharika... am I right? 😊 Sorry, have not read your FF... will do soon. Keep the writing going.

Btw, your online lingo is kamaal ka... 😊

yes....yew r absolutely right...dear...its neharika..😃....its k..take ur tym...buh doe.... lemme noe how didju find it...😳..i'll b waitin'..😳

hehehe..geeeeeeeeeez....thx...buh dis iz not ma creation...credit goes 2 a member..of MJHT...PPL R REALLY CREATIVE...😆😆😆

luv

neha😳