Kranti in the kitchen !

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Friends ................ " Kranti in the kitchen", raised a lot of dust here, some for and some against ..........

This is what I imagined .............Have a read and tell me how it feels ??? 😳😳😳

K is shunned but BBR is vexed, ……

Good, but now she'll be overworked ……..

What with the festival ahead…….

Who else ? but she, would be burdened …….

She hatches a plan ……

With her two henchmen …..

Slipped and fell, she pretended ……..

And Kranti is as guilty called ……….

With Kranti, Chaiji is annoyed …..

Though Kranti prepares her medicinal oil………

And says, "I'm can manage the toil"….

Please stay away, she ordered ………

In the next couple of days ……..

Chaiji is down and out …..

BBR watching the fun ……

And Kranti desperate to help ………

One early morning ……

Chaiji is unable to rise ……..

Kranti is unhesitant ……

And takes to the kitchen ………..

Pooja done & aarti for all …

In time the table is laid …..

A hearty breakfast is served …….

The family praising BBR for the fare ……..

Jagat butts in and says ………..

Today's chef is the younger DIL ….

Everyone's face is a picture ….

A lot of hemming & hawing ……….

Finally Buaji compliments Kranti …….

And Chaiji too smiles her blessing ……

Papa bear is not too pleased …….

And hubby dear is at a loss for words ………

The meal is over and the table cleared ……

Kranti's in the kitchen……..

Seeing to the chores undone ……….

Sensing something she spins around ……….

And crashes into Raj behind her ……..

Oh ! she goes, her hands on his chest ….

Ouch ! he goes, as she steps on his toe …….

She suppresses a grin and raises an eyebrow….

He clears his throat and rubs his nose ……

He's nervous, she can see …….

Let him stew, a little voice urges ….

She crosses her hands ….

And gives him the look ………

That says, don't dither……..

Say your piece and out you go ……..

I've plenty to do …….

So out with it ……….

Thanks for helping, he says …

His face is flushed and his ears are red ……

She tosses her head …….

And snorts at him ……….

It's nothing to do with you …..

I did it for a lovable MIL …….

So keep you thanks …..

And stay out of my hair.. ….

She turns on her heel and she leaves …….

A spring in her step …..

A song on her lips ….

Having put that ogre in his place……..

Raj is left staring …….

At the vision in red ………..

As she sashays away ……

Leaving in him an inexplicable void ……..
😆😆...........And the war goes on ..........

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skeptical thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh Walter !!!!

That was so so cute.....
I wanted to say something in response in verse but that would have spoilt the beauty of your poetic lines. So I refrain from it. But I shall post it after a few replies or mayb PM it to you. The aura that you have created should remain undisturbed.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely Dawn..the whole scenario..frivolous, but brimming with sentiment.. loved Raj's hesitation and confusion too.. 😳
And Skep.. great idea,, why dont you reply in verse?? Maybe you two can build a dilaogue on verse..
If in case, you PM it to Dawn.. please mark it to me too.. dont want to miss the chance of reading it..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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*Bow*
Thanks Skep .......... Plz do respond in verse .......... i'd love that .......I may not be able to keep up with you ...........but ...... nevertheless ........we shall all enjoy ..........
Adn you can post it here .........no worries ..........afterall ......... we're all family here ....☺️🤗
Thanks Dew ..........
I sometimes love these little frivolous encounters ........ leaves you with a smile on you face.............😃
Extreme love or hate is quite tiring you see ...........
This lightens the air some ...........😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Skepti tell me r u giving some private tutions to Dawn kya😉😆..Dawn that was sooo beautiful and spectacular piece of writing👏...
The best part was Kranti turning back and colliding with Raj😳..tell me was he shirtless that time in your imagination😉😆...I m asking u because u said she was putting her hand on his chest..so some besharam thoughts r running in my mind😆😆😳...
Skepti please continue here only na after Dawn😳..its fun to hear u both in this Poetry-ka-Mahayudh😛..
Outstanding Dawn👏👏..
ranjnanarang thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dawn
amazing I could imagine the whole show running in fornt of my eyes.
skeptical thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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D_I
I am coming with my repartee in a while. 😊
Taiyo thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW... Beautiful ... 👏 ... "Cool One" Dawn... 😃

Skepti, looking forward to your answer...
Dawn Idol thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Purvi, An, Ranjna, Bhawna ..............Thanks dears ....... 🤗
Dawn Idol thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Skepti tell me r u giving some private tutions to Dawn kya😉😆..Dawn that was sooo beautiful and spectacular piece of writing👏...

The best part was Kranti turning back and colliding with Raj😳..tell me was he shirtless that time in your imagination😉😆...I m asking u because u said she was putting her hand on his chest..so some besharam thoughts r running in my mind😆😆😳...
Skepti please continue here only na after Dawn😳..its fun to hear u both in this Poetry-ka-Mahayudh😛..
Outstanding Dawn👏👏..

*Deep bow* ..............Thank you Jo ...............
😳 .....Skep is my inspiration here ............. though I have miles to go ..........
😉 ...........Raj shirtless ???? Haila Jo .............
I wrote this line and it never entered my mind .........
how come you get these visions yaar ?????
You are too much ............. a pro in romantic imaginations .........👏👏👏

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