A distraught Nirmal and a determined Kranti

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Seebz
yes skepti both r praying to god but for diff reason......
-k wants freedom

-N wants her husband's satbudhi....he never took a responsiblity......so he doesn't know antyhing about it..... You r right

....and Raj was may b a bit angry in precap.........he doesn't want his wife to fight for her country....lets see whose prayers is going to b heard first N or K....

he doesn't want his wife to fight for her country....

Well she really doesn't give a damn right now. 😉

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: skeptical

ladki hai kya phataka.....???

Roz hi kare dhamaka ....

Miya ne dala daka

Barbad kiya maayka

Raj hain bada baanka

To Kudi kare dhamaka..... 😆 😉

Haii Raam Skepti your hindi poem is as good as your English one👏👏😳..u r really very gifted😳

And my Answer will b...

Kudi ne Dikhaya Josh

Toh Kaake ke udd gaye Hosh

Kudi ne kaha hum hai Sarfarosh

Toh Kaake ne bhi dikhaya apne kateele badan ka Josh😉😆😳(I mean stripping)

Jise Dekhar Kudi ho gayee behosh😆

Aur aa gayee apne Kaake ke Aghosh😳😳

Yeh Dekhkar sab bole Kudi ho gayee bilkul Ehsaan Faramosh🤣🤣🤣

Anti-Raj party please don't pounce on me...just kidding😆😳

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Great poems, friends ................wish I could joing in the fun .........

Nirmal and Kranti praying for what is closest to their hearts .........

Nirmal ........wants Sanjay to become practical and realise his reposibilities.......

Kranti ........... wants the freedom struggle to continue in full force .......

N is thinking about her own world ...........ie. made up of S & N ...........

Kranti is thinking about her country ........she puts country before anything else .......... she doesn't really feel any ownership to R's family now ...........

Both are sincere in their prayers ............. which surely will be heard and granted ..........

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Haii Raam Skepti your hindi poem is as good as your English one👏👏😳..u r really very gifted😳

And my Answer will b...

Kudi ne Dikhaya Josh

Toh Kaake ke udd gaye Hosh

Kudi ne kaha hum hai Sarfarosh

Toh Kaake ne bhi dikhaya apne kateele badan ka Josh😉😆😳(I mean stripping)

Jise Dekhar Kudi ho gayee behosh😆

Aur aa gayee apne Kaake ke Aghosh😳😳

Yeh Dekhkar sab bole Kudi ho gayee bilkul Ehsaan Faramosh🤣🤣🤣

Anti-Raj party please don't pounce on me...just kidding😆😳

Don't try and pull

Over our eyes the wool

My kudi likes no frills

Will put the Rat thro the drill

You may flip

As he strips

A danda she will take

When so much is at stake

Pardon that fake?

Oh Joey, gimme a break.................

Not pouncing honey, just clarifying. 😉 😆

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: skeptical

Don't try and pull

Over our eyes the wool

My kudi likes no frills

Will put the Rat thro the drill

You may flip

As he strips

A danda she will take

When so much is at stake

Pardon that fake?

Oh Joey, gimme a break.................

Not pouncing honey, just clarifying. 😉 😆

Ok now I m thinking of organsing one Poetry contest in the forum😉...U all write such beautiful poetries👏..want to know all your opinions before I start it😳..

Haan now my answer😆..

No Break...as a lot is at Stake😲😆

I mean who will take the final cake😉

At present Raju might look fake😭

But in the end he will give the reality check😛

By throwing the Takla and his son in Varanasi's Lake😆

Then your Kudi will come running into his Arms

Sinse Raju will mesmerise her with his never ending charms😳

And in the end both Anti-Raj & Pro-Raj Parties will join hands and sing in Ice-Candy farms😳

Edited by jyoti06 - 16 years ago

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skeptical

@skeptical

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Ok now I m thinking of organsing one Poetry contest in the forum😉...U all write such beautiful poetries👏..want to know all your opinions before I start it😳..

Haan now my answer😆..

No Break...as a lot is at Stake😲😆

I mean who will take the final cake😉

At present Raju might look fake😭

But in the end he will give the reality check😛

By throwing the Takla and his son in Varanasi's Lake😆

Then your Kudi will come running into his Arms

Sinse Raju will mesmerise her with his never ending charms😳

And in the end both Anti-Raj & Pro-Raj Parties will join hands and sing in Ice-Candy farms😳

My beautiful dreamer !!!!! 😆

Shall I continue with the jugalbandi?? Or enough of it?