Love... A januable feeling!! Sajan mjht ff - Page 6

Just Transfer/Dld. all 3 sub-parts of Part-2. will reply soon...till then RESERVE !!

*Edited*

AWESOME update LAKSHMi👏 👏 👏. Must say, very promising Start.👏 I loved it. First I want to say...U portray 2 different shade of Love ,very well. SUHANi and SAMRAT POV about 'LOVE' is totally different from each other... But,they both R right on their own place. Beautiful presentation of 2 different view.👏 Sorry ! But, RiA's character is not very impressive...May B, further parts mein woh Character thoda clear ho..till then,I'll be wait. Dio. part is Fabulous. 👏 👏 Story is really looking interesting...😊 and I loved long parts so,Don't worry about it. Its little bit mature thought so,don't bother about Replies or 'Formal' Replies. Its your ground...so,write for your own satisfaction... and present your thoughts through your characters...

Yaa,JOS knows about this FF... I told him about this. Now,He is admitted in Hospital again for his next surgery But,he will be join I-F very soon. I think after 8-10 days.

Eagerly waiting for GUNJAN's entry...so,Please update soon. And,Yaa...I M very bad Critics... Kuchh achha nahin laga toh kaafi strict replies bhi doonga.. I hope,Aisi situation nahin aayegi.😳 Do continue soon...Thanx 4 the PM.

Awesome update waiting for gunjan entry continue soon n thanks for the pm

All the parts were awesome..Just loved it..samrat was so matured & so cute..Ria is very nice..Plzz continue soon..Can't wait for Gunjan's intro..😃

Originally posted by: Shreya30456

Awesome update waiting for gunjan entry continue soon n thanks for the pm

thanks a lot for commenting. Will update really soon.

Originally posted by: Anjali_12

All the parts were awesome..Just loved it..samrat was so matured & so cute..Ria is very nice..Plzz continue soon..Can't wait for Gunjan's intro..😃

Thanks a lot for commenting. I'm glad u liked it. Yes, sam is metured and practical guy. I know, all r desperate for gunjan's entry. Will cont very soon.

tht was soo awesome i just love your continued last 2 part was cool i cant wait for gunjan intro and sajan first meet

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was soo awesome i just love your continued last 2 part was cool i cant wait for gunjan intro and sajan first meet

thanks for commenting. I'm glad that u liked it. Will post the next part in the morning.

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER

<font color="#6666ff"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Just Transfer/Dld. all 3 sub-parts of Part-2. will reply soon...till then RESERVE !!</font></font>

*Edited*

<font color="#6600ff"><font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">AWESOME update LAKSHMi👏 👏 👏. Must say, very promising Start.👏 I loved it. First I want to say...U portray 2 different shade of Love ,very well. SUHANi and SAMRAT POV about 'LOVE' is totally different from each other... But,they both R right on their own place. Beautiful presentation of 2 different view.👏 Sorry ! But, RiA's character is not very impressive...May B, further parts mein woh Character thoda clear ho..till then,I'll be wait. Dio. part is Fabulous. 👏👏 Story is really looking interesting...😊 and I loved long parts so,Don't worry about it. Its little bit mature thought so,don't bother about Replies or 'Formal' Replies. Its your ground...so,write for your own satisfaction... and present your thoughts through your characters...

Yaa,JOS knows about this FF... I told him about this. Now,He is admitted in Hospital again for his next surgery But,he will be join I-F very soon. I think after 8-10 days.

Eagerly waiting for GUNJAN's entry...so,Please update soon. And,Yaa...I M very bad Critics... Kuchh achha nahin laga toh kaafi strict replies bhi doonga.. I hope,Aisi situation nahin aayegi.😳 Do continue soon...Thanx 4 the PM.
</font></font>

thanks a lot for commenting. I'm happy that u r not disappointed by this update. And yes, sam n suhaani's pov about love is totally different. I'm just trying to potray that everyone have their own and different views about love through this stroy. And no one is right or wrong. Every one are correct in their places. And its little bit difficult for me to justify all the charectors and to show their pov, as this is my first attempt. And about ria...i'll open her views in forthcoming updates by sam-ria flash back scenes, which will give the clear image of her charector. And joseph is having another surgery! I thought that the surgery was over. I hope it is the last surgery. I'll pray god for his wellness. And i'm happy that u r playing the role of critics for my ff. I hope u won't disappoint or upset with gunjan's entry. Will post the next part in few hours.

Hi friends, thanks a lot for commenting and encouraging me. Here is the next part...
Part 3
Mumbai,
6:15 AM.
It is raining.
On a road, we see a girl's back, who is wearing a white salwar suit. She is holding an umbrella, in one hand and puja's thali in other hand. A soft soothing sound is coming from her bangles which are moving in her hand. And her payal are making rythemic sound as she is walking. She enters into a temple. As she enters inside, she folds the umbrella and put it near the pillar, and she stretches her hand out of the roof, to play with rain drops.
Now, we sees her face which has an adorable smile, welcoming the rain and her eyes showing her innocence.
She is gunjan.
Gunjan turns back and went inside the temple. She hand overs that puja's thal to panditji. She folded her hands in namasthe, closing her eyes and started to pray god for everyones well ness with her sweet and melodious voice.
G: Bhagwanji, sab ki raksha karna. Humme himmat dena, taki hum apne zindagi mein ane wale problems ko face kar sake. Ache logon ke zyada pariksha mat dena. Sach ko zyada der tak chupne mat dena. Hum logon ke andar chupi buraiyon ko khatam karne ki satbudhi dena. Aur ha, hamare ghar ki baie rama tai ki beti, padma, bahut hi guni, susheel aur sanskari ladki hai. Par uski shadi nahi ho rahi hai, dahez problem!(said complainingly). Aap hi us ke liye ek acha ladka bhejiye, joh paison ke lalachi na ho, aur use khub pyar aur khushi de.(said smilingly). Saying this she opened her eyes.
Panditji came and gave her arti. She tooks the thal n umbrella, and came out from the temple. She walked to the street opposite to temple. She entered into the old building. We see a board near the entrance ''for the needs'' orphanage written on it.
Gunjan entered inside and saw that the children are troubling a girl. G: chala bacho ab mujhe mat satao, aur chup chap...(She hadn't completed her sentence as one little girl turned back and saw that gunjan had came and said loudly, ''gunjan didi''.) All children turned and ran towards gunjan and hugged her. They were elated to see her. Gunjan also hugged them smilingly. One little girl asked gunjan.
Lg: Gunjan didi, aap kal kyun nahi aye?
G: Woh, kal sunday tha na, isliye ''home'' gayi thi. Pichle sunday bhi toh nahi ja payi na.
She distributed prasad to all of them. And asked children.
G: hmm... Ab batao kyun champa(who was troubled by children) ko satarahe the?
Ch: Inhe toh bus mujhe satane ka bahana chahiya tha gunjan didi, par abhi toh zid kar rahe ki dudh nahi pena, aur baarish mein khelna hai.(said complainingly).
kyun bachon, kyun nahi pena dudh?(asked gunjan with fake anger). One little boy answered.
Lb: Nahi didi, humhe dudh bilkul bhi ache nahi lagte. Hum nahi peyenge. Aur yeh hume barish mein khel ne bhi nahi de rahi, keh rahi hai ki hum beemar pad jayenge.(said complainingly).
G: bachon zid mat karo. Jaldi se dudh pelo taki hum baarish khub khel sake.
All children cried cherishingly.
Ch: Arey, gunjan didi. Ap bhi inse milke! Barish mein khelenge toh beemar pad jayenge na?!(said innocently).
G: Arey, khuch nahi hoga. Hum na thodi na din bhar barish mein khelne wale hai. Bas thodi der ki toh baat hai. Kyun? Tumhe barish mein khelne ki man nahi hai!(said teasingly). Chalo, bacho ko dudh do.
After all children drank the milk, gunjan take them to garden to play in rain. Champa also followed them smilingly.
They had lots of fun in rain. After some time, they came back to the room. All have started to dry their hair. Just then a lady came to them. Seeing her gunjan said.
G: Madhuri ji, namesthe.(madhuri is care taker of the orphanage).
Ma: Namesthe, gunjan beta.(said smilingly).
Ma: Chalo bachon prayer jake fresh ho jao, prayer nahi karna.(said strictly).
Lb: Thodi der baat karein? Kyun ki gunjan didi prayer ki baad chali jati hai na.(said with a upset tone). Champa and madhuri smiled.
G: ha, par mein kal bhi aaungi na. Chalo ab udaas mat ho aur jakar tayyar ho jao. Ache, bache ho na tum log.(said smilingly).
All children obeyed gunjan and went to their rooms to get fresh up.
Please check the next page for rest of the parts