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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: mars14
<font size="2">the update was just fablous...gunjan s entry was realy very awesome n well written..loved it realy...loved sam n his mom s scene...n gunjan was realyyy very sweeet n adorable...realy loved her character...cant wait for next...loved it truly..its awesome..</font>
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<font size="2">marie</font>

thanks a lot for commenting. I'm glad u liked the update and haven't disappointed with gunjan's entry. Yes, gunjan is indeed sweet and adorable. Will post the next part really soon.

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Anjali_12
Very nice update..Can't wait to see SaJan meeting..Plzz continue soon...😃

thanks a lot for commenting di. For sajan meeting, u have to wait for sometime. Will post next part soon.

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: roknstarz_mjht
wow!!!<div></div>

thanks for commenting.

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: sajanlove3
update was superb
gunjan intro was good

Thanks a lot for commenting.

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Neha

@Shreya30456

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Fabulous update. Luved gunjan intro she is so sweet now i m waiting for sajan meet

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Shreya30456
Fabulous update. Luved gunjan intro she is so sweet now i m waiting for sajan meet

thanks a lot for commenting. For sajan meet u have to wait for sometime

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: tanisha997
amazing update
👏

thanks a lot for commenting.

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Hi friends, thanks a lot for commenting and pressing like tab. Now, i'm posting the next part. It is little short compared to previous ones. So, i hope u won't bored. Here is the next part...
Part 4
Bhushan mansion.
It is a huge mansion. It is simple but elegant and perfect. Subtle wall colours, simple chandeliers, nothing is over did or looking like show off. And it has a wonderful garden with lots of floral plants.
In a room,
we see a guy wearing black shirt n pants standing at the study table, which has gunjan's photo at its side. And an old medium sized box was placed on table. He was talking to gunjan's photo. Chalo gunjan, aaj mein tumhe apna khazana dikhata hu (saying this he opens the box). The box has so many old things. He picked small payal and said to gunjan's photo. Isse pehchana? Yeh tumhaara hi payal hai, jab tum 4 saal ki thi, tab pehna karti thi. Aur jab tum thodi badi hogayi, aur naye payal li, tumne inhe phenk diya tha. Par mein inhe tumhare sweet memories ke liye apne paas rakha. He picks a pair of small shoes and said, yeh dekho, yeh tumhare pehli joothe hai. Aur yeh choclate wrapers, us choclates ki hai, jisne tumhe bachpan mere saath share ki. Tum toh kisi ke saath apne choclates share nahi karthi thi, siwaye mere saath. Aur nupur is baath keliye kitna chidthi thi.(said smilingly). Yeh, tumhare pehli earrings hai.(said showing a cute and little earrings). Aur yeh hair band! Meine tumhe chidane ke liye chupaya tha! Aur aaj tak tumhe nahi di. Aur doonga bhi nahi..(said teasingly). Yeh trophy, humare school ki quiz competition ki hai. Jisme, hum donon team the. Hum ne toh dusri teams ko ek bhi answer dene ka chance nahi diya tha. Sab teachers keh rahe the ki hum donon kitni perfect team hai!(said smilingly). Yeh card! ''i miss you'' card. Tumne mujhe tab diya, jab mein america ja raha tha apne college ki padai puri karne. Yeh friendship bands, jo tumne mujhe friendship day ke din bandhe the. Mein, ne har ek band ko sambhal kar rakha hai! Ek bhi nahi koya!(said smiling proudly). Yeh, tumhare violen ke strings hai, jisse tum ne music sikha, jab tum 7 saal ki thi. Tumhare lie toh yeh karaab hogaye hai, lekin mera liye yeh price less hai, isme tumhara music ka ehsaas bhara hua hai. Aur mere liye har woh cheez price less hai. Jisme tumhare ehsaas ho. Aur yeh ''all the best'' card, tumne mujhe tab diya, jab tumne mujhe mere dad ki business sambhalne ke liye manayi thi, yeh kehke mein apna passion chode bina hi papa ko business mein madat kar sakta hu. Warna, mein toh bilkul bhi nahi manne wala tha. Arey, mein kyu manu? Mein apne sapne us insan ke liye kyun chodu, jisne kabhi mujhe pita ka pyar nahi de. Aur mujhe yaha chod diya, taki unko business sambhal ne mein koi disturbence na ho. Mein jab 7 saal ka tha, tabhi ma is duniya se ja chuki thi. Aur papa mujhe aur business donon ko nahi sambhal sakte the. Isiliye unhon ne mujhe yaha chod diya. Par uncle mujhe bahut pyaar di. Aur tum... Tum toh bus 3 saal ki thi jab mein yaha aya tha. Mujhe pheli baar dekh kar dar gayi aur apne chote chote pairon se bhaag ka nupur ke peeche chup gayi thi, jo 6 saal ki thi. Par dheere, dheere hum donon ache dost bangaye. Aur hamare dosti ke badhte hi mere zindagi ka akela pan bhi dur hota gaya.(said dreamingly). Aur tumhari support ke wajahse hi aaj mein apne sapne aur apne duty donon nibha para hu. Sach gunjan! Tumhare suppor ke bina, yeh neil kuch bhi nahi hai.
Now we sees his face, he is neil.
Arey, ha! Yeh card. Yeh ''congrachulations'' card ko mein kaise bhul sakta hu. Yeh, tum ne mujhe meri pehli film ki release ki ek din pehle di thi. Main concuse ho kar tumse pucha, ki tum abhi congrachulate kyu kar rahi ho. Picture toh abhi release hi nahi hui, aur sab nervous hai ki film ka result kya hogi! Par tumne kaha ki tumhe mujh par bharosa hai ki film zarur hit hogi. Tumhe mere talent pe itna barosa hai, yeh mujhe tabhi pata chala. Aur mein tab, itna khush hua, jitna mein ne apne pehli film ki hit hone par bhi nahi hua. He takes a ghunghru from his pocket. Yeh, tumhare payal ki hai, kal raat dinner table ke paas gir gaya tha.(saying these, he puts that in that old box carefully and closed it). And seeing her photo, he said.
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Edited by gnaneswari - 13 years ago

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Meanwhile in hall.
Gunjan enters inside while mumbling to herself.
G: Isse pehle ki ghar mein kisi ko pata chale ki main barish mein bheeg kar ayi hu, mujhe kapde badal lena chahiye, khaas kar ke di ko, warna aaj meri kher nahi!(saying these she is going towards stairs, but a male voice stopped her).
V: Arey, gunjan tum itni wet kyun ho? Tum baarish mein bheeg kar ayi ho na!(said with little anger).
Gunjan turns and sees a guy in his night dress having confused expression on his face.
G: Uday bhaiyya! Woh...mein...(confused what to say).
U: Gunjan, tumhe barish mein beeg ne se cold n fever hojati hai na, phir bhi tum aaj bheeg kar ayi ho, kyun?(said with concern).
Just the gunjan sneezes.
U: Dekha, hogayi na cold! Ruko mein abhi doctor ko bulata hu.(said worriedly and walked towards phone).
Gunjan went to him and stopped him by helding his wrist and said
G: No, uday bhaiyya please. Please aap doctor ko mat bhulayiye aur ghar mein bhi kisi ko mat batana. Bina baat ki sab pareshaan hojayenge.(said hurriedly).
U: Tumhari tabiyat karab honese hum pareshan ho, yeh tumhe bina baat ki pareshani lagti hai!
G: Uday bhaiyya, meri tabiyat bilkul teekh hai, bus thoda sa cold hai, garam coffee peungi toh teekh hojayegi. Aur, aapko bhukh lagi hogi na, meine aap keliye sandwiches banake fridge mein rakhi hai. Chaliye mein apko use oven mein heat kar ke de deti hu.(said trying to change the topic).
U: Ha...mujhe bahut bhu... (Just then gunjan sneezes and uday realised her trick).
U: Gunjan, don't try to change the topic. Tum pehle jaake change kar lo, warna tumhe fever bhi ho jayegi. Main, apne sandwiches ke liye, thoda wait toh kar sakta hu. Tab tak mein jaake juice peleta hu. And u, go and change.(saying this, he pushed her lightly towards, stairs).
Gunjan smiles at his concern and went to her room. Uday went to kitchen to drink the juice.
Meanwhile, in neil's room.
He picked gunjan's photo and said.
N: Jaanti ho gunjan, jab mein U.S. mein tha, tab inhe sab cheejon ke sahare se hi waha rehpaya. Warna, mujhe toh tumhari itni yaad arahi thi ki, mein usi din wapas ajata. Aur i wish ki yeh yaadein aisi hi increase ho. Mein jitna ho sake, utna tumhari yaadein collect karna chahta hu. Kyun ki mein jaanta hu, ki tum hamesha mere paas nahi rehsakti. Aaj nahi toh kal tum kisi aur ki ho jaoge. Us din ke liye mein ne apne apko mentally prepare karliya, kyun ki mere liye tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekhna utna asan nahi hai. Aur jab tum kisi aur ke saath chali jaoge,tab yahi yaadein mere jeene ka sahara banenge. And mein tumse pyar karta hu, par iska matlab yeh nahi hai, ki mein tumhe zindagi bhar apne nazron ke samne ya mere saath rakhna chahta hu. Balki mein chahta hu ki tum zindagi bhar khush raho, chahe kisi aur ke saath hi kyun na ho. Mere liye pyar ka matlab yehi hai ki ''agar hum kisi se pyar karte hai toh unhe khush rakhne ke liye hamare pyaar ko sacrifice kare toh bhi galat nahi hai.'' Aur agar hum sach mein kisi se pyar karte hai toh unke khushi dekh kar hi khush ho jate, nahi apne khushi ke liye use zabardasti apne saath rehne keliye majboor kare. Lekin yeh dekhna bahut zaruri hai ki woh jiske saath apne zindagi bitana chahti hai, woh sahi ladka hai ya nahi, use khush rakhega ya nahi. Aur mein jaanta hu gunjan, tum jise chunogi woh karodon me ek hoga. Aur nahi toh kya, tumhara pyar pane ke liye kuch toh special hona hi padega na. Tum jisse bhi pyaar karoge na woh is diniya mein bahut lucky hoga. Aur tumhare liye koi prince, koi samrat ayega aur tumhe hum sab se chura ke lejayega. Aur woh, tumhare khushiyon ka hum sab se jyaada khayal rakhega. Aur woh tumhe bahut pyaar dega, itna ki woh tumhare liye apna jaan bhi de sake.
Thanks a lot for reading. Sorry, if u felt bored. Please give frank comments. And please feel free to criticize. Will update today night, if u all comment or else will update, when u guys comment.

Edited by gnaneswari - 13 years ago