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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Meanwhile, in London.
Samrat parked his car and went inside his house or i say mansion! It was a huge mansion, with sophisticatedly decorated interiors, designed furniture...richness is highly evident in it.
In side the house.
A lady was sitting in the sofa and she is checking some documents and seems she is waiting for someone as she is glancing at the door for every 5 seconds. Just then samrat came inside, she smiled seeing him.
Samrat to that lady.
S: Hi mom, ap abhi tak kyu jaag rahe ho!
Sm: kuch nahi, bas woh kuch files dekhrahi thi.(said smilingly).
Samrat comes and sits beside her and took glass of water from the tray, which was brought by servant who went after giving the glass.
S: kon se files, mom?(asked after drinking water).
SM: Wahi jo hamare textile industries ki yarn supplier's hai na, wahi jo quality less yarns bheje the humme, unhe ki contract dekh rahi hu. Woh is month ending mein expire ho jayegi.(said smilingly).
S: Yeh toh achi baat hai. Ab hume contract tod ke use compensate bhi nahi karna padega.
SM: Iske wajah se 15 days se production bhi ruk gaye. Yeh, acha hai ki season nahi hai isliye hume jyada loss nahi aya. Aur tum jald hi Mr. Sharma se deal final kardena. I'm very impressed by them. Unki yarns ki quality bahut achi hai. Aur unke way of work bhi. Bahut hi systematic aur punctual hai.
S: Ha mom, mayank is a very impressive guy. Jab mein ne use pehli baar bangkok ke business trip pe mila, tab hi mein ne usme winning spark notice kiya. Aur itni kum time span mein usne apna industry ko India ki No.1. Spinning industry banadiya. Kal mere ek meeting hai uske saath web cam mein. Woh bas cost aur contract ki time span aur kuch terms discuss karni thi. Aur mera mumbai jaate hi unse deal final kar dunga.
SM: Aur tumhara aaj modeling agencies ke saath meeting thi na, tumhare fashion house ke liye. Kaise thi?
S: It's good. Par aaj ka interview bilkul bhi achi nahi rahi. London mein aisa koi impressive designers nahi hai jise indian cultures, traditions aur uski fashion ke bare mein pata ho. Lagta hai mujhe apne staff ko mumbai mein hi dundna padega. Isiliye mein is weekend mein hi india jaane ki soch raha hu.
SM: Tumne toh mera koi help lene se mana kardiya na. Kya zaroorath thi mere hote hue bank se loan lene ki! Yeh sab kuch toh tumhara hi hain na.(said complainingly).
S: Mom, please not again! Ab hum iski bare mein kuch discuss nahi karenge. I want to be independent. Mujhe kisi ki help nahi chahiye. Please, mom ab finance ki koi baath nahi karenge.
Sm: Ok, as u wish. Mein ne kabhi tumhari baat tali hai kya?! Ok, tumhare office ka kam kab tak ayi?Mr. Khurana(adhi's dad) ka koi phone?
S: ha mom, woh subah mujhe call kiya, interiors final karnekeliye jo unhone mail mein bheja. Mein ne unki assistant ko samjha diya hai. Aur woh kam do din mein puri hojayegi. Aur currency bhi transfer ho ke SBI ke account mein shift ho gayi. Ab bas yaha ka kam hai. Yaha, mein jitne projects handle karra hu, woh kal aur parso ki meetings mein almost complete ho jayenge.
SM: Ok beta, ab jake khana khake sojao. Bahut der ho gayi hai.(said with concern).
S: Ah! No mom. Abhi khane ka mood nahi hai. I'm full.
SM: Arey, aise kaise mood nahi?! Oh! Samaj gayi. Janab ke pet drinks se itni bhar gayi ki khane ke liya jagah hi nahi hai! Right!(said with anger).Sam, kab sudarogi tum!
S: kya sudaru, mom? Mein kya adhi ki tarah roj peta hu, jo ap mujhse shikayat kar rahe ho.(asked confusingly).
SM: Nahi, par jab bhi pete ho, aise hi khana nahi kate. Aise toh tumhare health ka kya ho ga? Aur ab tum mumbai shift ho rahe ho, waha toh mein nahi rahungi na tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye(said with sadness).
ha, ab toh apko tang karne wala bhi koi nahi honge yaha(laughed). Aur, ab toh apki gajar ki halwa ka shikayat karne wala bhi nahi honge. Aur mein apki halwe se bach jaonga(said to change her mood).
SM: haww!!! How mean sam! Kya mein itni buri halwa banati hu(said in disbelief).
Sam hugged her from side and said no, par kabhi kabhi mere hisaab se nahi banta na! I'll miss u mom. I miss u too said sm by keeping her hand on his cheek, cupping him with one hand lovingly. Chalo, ab jaake so jao, she said breaking the hug. They wished, good night to each other and went to their respective rooms.
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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

In India.
As children went to get fresh for prayer, champa also went with them to help him. Gunjan smiled to children and started to dry her hair, then madhuri said.
Ma: Bache tumhare saath khushi se rehte hai. Sach, tum itne ghul mil gayi ho unse. Tumhare hi wajah se yeh bache aaj is chat ke neeche hai, warna yeh sab log sadak mein bikariyon ke tarah hote(said sadly). Aur tumhare sath rehte wakth yeh bache kabhi mehsoos nahi karte ki woh anaad hai. Isiliye toh yeh log tumhara intezaar karte rehte hai ki tum kab aaoge aur unke saath time spend karoge. Tum toh hum sab ki angel ho.
Gunjan smiles and said, arey, aise koi baath nahi hai. Main sirf ek insaan hone ke farz nibha rahi hu aur kuch nahi.(saying these she took out a check from her purse).
She gave that to madhuri, saying yeh lijiye is mahine ke fund. Madhuri took that smilingly.
Ma: apke ''home'' mein sab kaise hai?(asked casually).
G: Ji, sab teek hai. Is baar ki phasal achi ayi hai toh sab celebrate karre hai.
L: oh! Yeh toh bahut achi baat hai.
They entered inside the prayer room. And children also came there, after getting fresh. All were standed in a line, infront of the idol of goddess saraswati. All started to pray while gunjan is singing the poem.
Yakundendu, tusharahara, davala...ya subhra vastrandita...ya...veena varadanda manditakara, ya...shweta padmasana...ya...braharchuta shankara prabhrudive, devay sada... pujeta samanpatu saraswathi, bhagawati nissesha jadhyapaha.
After pryar, gunjan bid to children and came out. She was suprised, coz she haven't came by car as the driver wasn't there. The was car n driver waiting for her. As she came to car, the driver said ''sorry mam, woh subah barish ki wajah se ane me thodi der hogayi.''
G: koi baat nahi(said smilingly). Aap abhi kyun aye, mein taxi mein ajati na.(said while sitting into the car).
D: woh, mujhe sir ne bheja hai, yeh soch ke ki barish horahi hai, kahi apko aneme koi takleef na ho!(said while starting the car).
G: Sir! Kon, jeeju?
D: Nahi mam, mayank sir nahi, neil sir.
G: Niel! Ye neil bhi na! Aaj kal mere liye kuch zyada hi concerned ho raha hai!(smiles).
Precap-introduction of other charectors.

Thanks a lot for reading. I hope u haven't disappointed with gunjan's intro. Sorry, if u have bored with this update. Please feel free to criticize. And give frank comments.

Edited by gnaneswari - 14 years ago

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan
superb yaar!!!!!! simply fabulous...

thanks a lot for commenting.

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monaya_sajan

@monaya_sajan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: gnaneswari

thanks a lot for commenting.

sorry yaar!!!!!!!!!!!! update k beech mein interrupt kar diya!!!!!!!!!!!! but let bygones be bygones...excellent update...keep rocking👏

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

i just love your part 3

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445892

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

the update was just fablous...gunjan s entry was realy very awesome n well written..loved it realy...loved sam n his mom s scene...n gunjan was realyyy very sweeet n adorable...realy loved her character...cant wait for next...loved it truly..its awesome..

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marie

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368758

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Very nice update..Can't wait to see SaJan meeting..Plzz continue soon...😃

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athira

@shruti-love

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

update was superb

gunjan intro was good

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lakshmi

@gnaneswari

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

sorry yaar!!!!!!!!!!!! update k beech mein interrupt kar diya!!!!!!!!!!!!but let bygones be bygones...excellent update...keep rocking👏

Thanks a lot for commenting. And don't be sorry, u don't know that i'm updating. I'm glad u liked the update and haven't felt bored.