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daniella05 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
lovely update
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Awesome.. Thanks for the PM! Continue Soon..
crazymayurian thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
osom
kash serial main b esa hota
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
beautiful update.😃
wow!! just loved it !!! 👏
totally loved mayur convo.😍
hayyy😍 my adorable mayur!😍
my mayur...they r sooo adorable😍
hayyy😍
loved d way mayank handle nupur.😃
he knw her better than her.😳
love him.❤️
love mayur entire scene...specially pavement scene...it was so adorable...so clam...so soothing...so heavenly.😍
like uday...phir se kabab me haddi🤣
"mera warm bed and sweet dreams mere samne khadi hain"
it was adorable yet hilarious dialogue.
i hope babuji could undrstand mayank soon😔
continue soon
thnaks for the pm..😍😍


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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
np18 when will you update?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
hi sorry for not updating for so long . just got a little busy and couldnt sit down to type out stuff plus my head was all mixed up.

anyway, here it is

short recap as its been so long--- nupur gets to know that bauji s treating maynak bad and gets wild but mayank calms her down reminding her that adhiraj s in jail. gunjan is supposed to go to police to give statement in favour of adhiraj

but i should warn- no nice stuff for some more time to come , the story seems to progress by itself sometimes!!

( btw, im so glad that mjht is being replayed but...cant watch them -my timings just doesnt match...😭)
mayuloveu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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plz try to update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
oh. ok..! but try to update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 10

Bhushan House- Gunjans room

Gunjan felt tears running down her cheeks. She waited till dia went out and then sobbed. She didn't know why she was crying . shayad isliye ki maine samrat ko kitna ignore kiya ya. Her mind travelled back and forth the fateful valentine day, when she expected samrats proposal and instead she got to realise thta much as samrat loved her, shaadi was something he didn't believe in. Aur mila bhi tho yeh- and looked at her legs . her eyes filled up again . she had avoided breaking down in front of everyone else..except in front of nupur the first time she realised her state. She continued to cry into her pillow for sometime . She tried to sleep. She closed her eyes tight . her mind refused to rest. After a while she got up and sat on the bed, her eyes puffy .

Mujhe sona hai.abhi main samrat ya mere bare mein nahin soch sakthi. Abhi bas adhiraj ko bahar nikaalne ke baare mein sochna hain.

She tried to bend to drink some water from the jug kept next to the bed but couldn't reach it easily. She pulled herself with difficulty and poured out the water into the glass. As she gulped the water down, she found her eyes again brimming with tears. Agar di hoti tho woh yeh jug mere paas hi rakthi. Ya khudh leke de deti. Thoughts of her sister brought fresh tears. Par main aaj usko yahaan rehne ke liye bhi nahin kehsaki. Bauji ke baat sunke tho usko bohot gussa aaya hoga. Bauji ne aise baat kahin kyun? Jiju kitne ache hain. Aur itna khayal rakhthe hain sirf di ka nahin, hum sab ka. . abhi tak unko jiju ke upar us ek din ka gussa hain. Shayad mujhe lekar zyaada pareshaan hain isiliye ... she tried to convince herself that bauji s behaviour could be explained as he was upset about her , but this time she couldn't defend bauji even to herself.after a while, she tried to sleep again but couldn't. Remembering that the past two days she had been able to sleep better, she thought speaking to nupur may help her sleep. Picking up her phone , she dialled mayanks number.

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And as soon as Mayank said that nupur was coming back, she felt her spirits rise and with a huge smile settled down to wait for her di. The door opened softly and Uday walked in in his night dress . seeing her still wide awake , he asked," tum abhi tak soyi kyun nahin?"

"neend nahin aarahin thi. Aap?"

"main TV dekh raha tha aur phir socha ki sone se pehle tumhe ek baar check karloon. Dids ne mujhe tumhaare watchman ka kaam diya hain."

Gunjan s eyes filled up again and she looked at him affectionately.

"ab kya hua?"

"uday bhaiyya, aap world ke best bhaiyya ho. " she said ," aap mera ek kaam karogi?"

"haan bolo . tumhe sandwich chahiye?"

"nahin. Aap front door open karenge , di aanewaali hain."

"nupur? Wapas phir se aayegi? waise i don't think so but agar tum kehti ho okay. Main jaake door open kartha hoon. Good night. Tum so jao." And walked out.

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The door opened softly again and bauji walked in. Gunjan who had been expecting nupur was surprised but smiled at her dad.

"tum abhi tak soye nahi?"

"nahin neend nahin aarahi thi. "

Bauji came and stroked her head. looking at her puffy eyes,"tum ro kyun rahi thi gunjan?" he aske d softly. Gunjan shook her head.

"tumhe kuch nahin hoga. Chinta mat karo. Hum kisi aur specialist doctor se bhi ek baar baat karenge.."

" mein teek hoon bauji.aap meri chinta mat keejiye. Mujhe abhi baaki logon ki chinta hain. adhiraj ki, aur college ki. Jab tak woh sab baatein clear nahin hojaate, tab tak main apne pairon ke bare mein nahin soch sakthi"

Bauji smiled at her look-- innocent and determined at the same time.

"tho tum ro kyun rahi thi?" she did not reply. He looked around, gunjan realised he was looking for nupur.

"di bahar hain .jiju ke saath, abhi aajaayegi." She answered the question he did not want to ask.

He ignored her and asked ," gunjan shayd yeh waqt nahin hain yeh baat karne ki par phir bhi main tumse poochna chahtha hoon..." he stopped and looked at her directly, she stared back at him wondering what he wanted to ask her," kya tum ? samrat sirf ek dost hain tumhaareliye ya aur ..."

"nahin." She broke in before he completed his sentence," matlab. Samrat mera dost hain. hum sab ka dost hain. bas aur kuch nahin." Bauji knew she was not telling him the truth .

"aur kya samrat bhi tumhe sirf dost hi mantha hain?"

"haan." She replied with a conviction in her voice.

"teek hain beta. Agar aisi kuch baat hain tho yeh yaad rakhna ki main hamesha tumhaari khushi hi chaahtha hoon . main tumhare saath hoon." She looked down and avoided him.bauji decided he would speak to her later again , he knew there was something she was hiding. "ab so jao." He started walking to the door.

"bauji.." gunjan called in a small voice. he turned ." tho aap di ke saath kyun nahin ho?" she asked , her voice low and a little scared

"matlab?"

" matlab. Aap jiju ko.." bauji s face changed and became stern. But she continued.

"matlab. Aap jiju ko...di ko bohot bura lagtha hain bauji... aap ne hi unki shaadi ke liye poocha tha...main jaanthi hoon ki us time haalat hi kuch aise the ki... par bauji...jiju sach mein bohot ache hain...woh di ka bohot kahyal rakhthe hain aur hum sab ka bhi. Itne saalo mein kya aapne kabhi bhi di ko library mein dekha hain? lekin ab woh library bhi jaathi hain jiju ki wajah se..." she desperately tried to convey that he was misjudging mayank but she also did not want to say that he was wrong.

" kisliye?" he asked," kisliye library jaathi hain? us ladke ke liye, padne ke liye nahin . Gunjan agar woh library nahin jaathi tho bhi teek hi hota. Main jaantha hoon ki tum sab ko main hi galat lagtha hoon . main us ladke pe bharosa nahin karsaktha jiski wajah se meri beti ghar se apne bauji se bhaagne ki soch rahi thi." She sighed.

" teek hain bauji. par aap mere liye kuch kar sakthe ho?" he looked at her questioningly

"kya aap jiju ko accept karne ki koshish nahin karsakthe? Sab unko maanthe hain tho unme kuch tho achha hoga na. Chahe woh samrat ho ya dia ya uday bhaiyya ya adhiraj bhi. Please bauji... jab bhi aap kuch kehthe ho unke khilaaf, tab di ko hi chot pahunchthi hain." she stopped, not knowing what else to say.

Bauji smiled grimly ,turned and saying good night went out, not realising that nupur was standing right behind the door and had heard the conversation.

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Nupur was touched , she had heard the talk between her dad and sister. Though it hurt her to know that her father did not think good about mayank, she was touched that gunjan was trying to speak on her behalf . Jab khudh uski haalat itni kharab hain tab bhi woh mere liye soch rahi hain. jo ladki hamesha se meri peeche chupthe aayi hain, jo hamesha se bauji ke saamne aankh utake baat nahin karthi thi, woh mere liye unse ... chal nupur. Jitna bhi iskeliye karo , woh kam hi hain. abhi chalo ander. She steadied herself and went in.

Nupur entered gunjans room and found gunjan sitting up on the bed ,her face thoughtful but her posture showing that she was ready for a long chat.

"tum abhi soyi kyun nahin? Aur yeh kya aisi baithi ho? " she tried to keep her voice light.

"sab mujhe sone ke bare mein kyun poochrahe hain?" gunjan asked in slight irritation, and putting out her hand to her sister, " thanks di tum agayi. " and smiled . nupur smiled back at her and taking in her puffy eyes asked," tum ro kyun rahi thi?"

Gunjan shook her head and shrugged.

" kuch nahin hoga gunjan. Tu bilkul teek hojaayegi. Doctor ne..."

"di, main teek hoon. Bas kabhi kabhi...itna kuch horaha hain tho ... chodo di. Tum bolo, tumhaara gussa kam hua?"

Nupur removed her hand which was on gunjans arm and sat on her bed," woh gussa kam honewaali baat thi kya? "

"bauji shayad pareshaan hain di. Tum unke baat seriously mat lo."

"hum sab kya kam pareshaan hain gunjan. Mayank ne bhi wahi kahaan. par ek baat bolu, bauji ne teek hi kahaan -ki main library padne nahin mayank ke liye jaathi hoon." she smiled , a little naughtily. gunjan looked at her and realised that she must have heard the conversation." mayank par nazar rakhne ke liye. ab kya kare bauji akele ek insaan hain jo mayank ke baare mein achha nahin sochthe. hamaare college ke ladkiyaan tho aise nahin hain hain na?" she smiled fully now. and gunjan returned her smile suddenly feeling better. her di was the best , trust her to say something like this now.

"woh chodo.. Waise yeh batao ki tu ne bauji se yeh kyun kahaan ki samrat aur teri beech kuch nahin hain . " she questioned thinking,Shayad isliye ki tum kisi ke upar boj nahin banna chahthi.

"gunjan, jab tum hospital mein thi tho..." and stopped on seeing tears in her eyes. She went upto her and placed a hand on her shoulder. Gunjan hugged her waist and burst out crying.

In between her sobs, she told nupur about what had happened on Valentine day between her and samrat. Nupur , not knowing what to say, listened to her completely and gently stroked her head a she lay on her lap.

"di , tum sahi thi. Shayad main aur samrat dono ek doosre ke liye nahin bane hain. hum dono alag alag duniya se hain. "

"gunjan, iske bare main main galat hoti, tho main khush hoti. Par gunjan woh tumse bohot pyaar kartha hain.."

" Main jaanthi hoon. Lekin ab hum dono ke beech kuch bhi nahin ho saktha. Main kisiki ehsaan nahin lesakthi."

"dekh gunjan. Tum abhi kuch bhi decide mat karo. Apne aap ko waqt do, samrat ko bhi waqt do. " but looking at gunjans face, nupur knew her mind was made up against samrat. Inwardly sighing , she smiled outwardly at her and puling her cheeks, said " aur yeh rona sab bandh karo. abhi so jao. Subah jaldi station jaana hain."


Gunjan slept and nupur tucked her up.

It was sometime before nupur could sleep. She was subconsciously waiting for mayanks message. gunjans phone , which she had kept next to her beeped- samrats message. She opened it thinking she would pull her sisters leg later,- chashmish tum naaraz ho? ' she frowned. how would this get solved?? Another beep and it was mayank saying he reached home. She finally slept.

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Mayank reached home to find samrat sitting as if in a daze. Replay conversation where sam and mayank speak about the valentine day events.

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omg, it became so long!

Edited by np18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful. I hate that bauji. plz continue soon.

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