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@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

part>22

awesome update.

mayank is sadu...but he forget to being sadu when he is with nupur.

he couldnt hide his love long.

love him...he's so cute.

like their little romance.

it was typical mayankish.

i love his sadu love.

OMG!!! babuji was there with Adhiraj's dad!!!

ye to kamal ho gya!!!

lets see what happen next.

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np18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
part>22

awesome update.
mayank is sadu...but he forget to being sadu when he is with nupur.
he couldnt hide his love long.
love him...he's so cute.
like their little romance.
it was typical mayankish.
i love his sadu love.
OMG!!! babuji was there with Adhiraj's dad!!!
ye to kamal ho gya!!!
lets see what happen next.

honestly i was waiting for your replies!! now it feels completed
thanks!

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

part>23

very nice.

bt i dnt knw why alwz girls blamed fro everything.

nw here is too.

bt like babuji a lot.

finally babuji accept mayank in front of everyone.

it was very nice to see them together.

lovely update.

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

part>24

OMG!!!!

hilarious update.

poor adhiraj...poor suhani.

lolz...i can imagine their faces...n cant stop my laughter.

lolz

hilarious update.

poor nupur...she forget to ask tea...lolz

There was a moment of silence in which everyone stared at one another, adhiraj at suhaani and his dad, suhaani at adhirajs dad, adhirajs dad at suhaani and adhiraj, benji at uday and uday at dia, dia at nupur and nupur at gunjan, gunjan at nupur and nupur at mayank, mayank at samrat and samrat at suhaani, adhiraj , adhirajs dad, mayank, nupur, dia, uday, and gunjan, bauji at gunjan and samrat!!!!!

nupur broke the staring spell by asking,"aap kuch chai lenge?"

"itni jaldi poochliya? "

this was my fav lines.

OMG!!!

it was so confusing situation...i dnt knw how...bt i can imagine this thing...n rofling

n mayank's saduness added falvor into it.

"haii kitna achha idea hain. Mayank kya tum bhi mujhe utaake bhaag sakthe ho?"

"NAHIN. Mera dimaakh abhi bhi teek hain."

lolz

i cant stop...hilarious.

uff...hats off to ur writing skill.

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

part>25

very nice ending.

grt work.

lovely update...it was truly MJHTish.

loved it.

i dnt knw why CVs dint show this kind of things in show,

this update was awesome.

love mayur convo a lot.

it was very sweet yet hilarious.

"NUPUR," he replied a little irritatedly," dekho please jao. Itne din se maine apne books ko chooa tak nahin aur kal phir holi hain , tho phir time waste hojaayega"

"achha , itne din se mujhe bhi tho chooa nahin. Choona chodo meri taraf dekha tak nahin. Mujhe tho miss nahin karthe!" she said in one breath and stopped .

lolz...lolz...aise baaten to sif nupur hi kar sakti hai...lolz

like their romance.

wow...finally Adhiraj's dad maan gye...its grt news...for celebrate.

n mayur going to celebrate it theri own way...lolz

awesome ending.

hats off to ur writing skill.

u r an awesome writer.

if u dnt mind, can u plz continue it...i mean, can u plz start another revisited after dhruv;s exit!!!

i like mayur morning scene after dhruv's exit...bt still i felt something missing...nupur;s horror her insecurity...everything ...they dint show it.

i like mayur romance...bt i dint understand how quickly nupur over come of dhruv ...it was really puzzled me.

anyways...now abt ur q...i love each n every scene of this FF,

everthing is my fav.

bt i like mayank-babuji patch up scne most...it was too sensible n mature.

loved those scene.

n abt dialogue...n love wht mayank said after nupur returned form hospital...his each n every words completely shows his emotion which he tried to hide form world.

loved.

love u.

plz come back soon with another awesome one.

take care.

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago

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np18

@np18

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

part>25

very nice ending.
grt work.
lovely update...it was truly MJHTish.
loved it.
i dnt knw why CVs dint show this kind of things in show,
this update was awesome.
love mayur convo a lot.
it was very sweet yet hilarious.

"NUPUR," he replied a little irritatedly," dekho please jao. Itne din se maine apne books ko chooa tak nahin aur kal phir holi hain , tho phir time waste hojaayega"
"achha , itne din se mujhe bhi tho chooa nahin. Choona chodo meri taraf dekha tak nahin. Mujhe tho miss nahin karthe!" she said in one breath and stopped .

lolz...lolz...aise baaten to sif nupur hi kar sakti hai...lolz
like their romance.
wow...finally Adhiraj's dad maan gye...its grt news...for celebrate.
n mayur going to celebrate it theri own way...lolz
awesome ending.
hats off to ur writing skill.
u r an awesome writer.
if u dnt mind, can u plz continue it...i mean, can u plz start another revisited after dhruv;s exit!!!
i like mayur morning scene after dhruv's exit...bt still i felt something missing...nupur;s horror her insecurity...everything ...they dint show it.
i like mayur romance...bt i dint understand how quickly nupur over come of dhruv ...it was really puzzled me.
anyways...now abt ur q...i love each n every scene of this FF,
everthing is my fav.
bt i like mayank-babuji patch up scne most...it was too sensible n mature.
loved those scene.
n abt dialogue...n love wht mayank said after nupur returned form hospital...his each n every words completely shows his emotion which he tried to hide form world.
loved.

love u.
plz come back soon with another awesome one.
take care.

thanks so much. glad you liked m-bauji patch up scene-that was the essence of this FF

and yes, now it looks like ive got into this addiction of writing so i will as soon as ive time though what i dont know!!!

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