Love Is Always Complicated-MJHT SS|Surprise P63&64 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: saduf

hey just amazing concept and CS loved the first part...its a different ff


I am glad that you liked it!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: lakshmi_SG

Nivriti, good starting and looking forward to it.


Hey!😳I am glad that you liked it!😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nivi to tell u honestly i simply enjoyed it infact i remembered the old days of MJHT & gang loved it to the core plss cont soon n add me to ur
Pm list n thnx for the PM ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

Nivi to tell u honestly i simply enjoyed it infact i remembered the old days of MJHT & gang loved it to the core plss cont soon n add me to ur

Pm list n thnx for the PM ...

Hey Sonia!😃 I am glad I could bring back the essence of MJHT! I am planning to update this one soon!😊 And you are welcome for the PM!😉 Love, Nivriti
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
lovely very nice ss continue soon and keep pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Grt cs :-) grt start :-) love mayur :-) samrat is so rude to dia :-( why? Updt soon :-) plz add me in ur pm list :-)
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Originally posted by: mjiJ

lovely very nice ss continue soon and keep pm me

Thanks!😊 I am glad you liked it! Next part is in the process!😉 What is your name?😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Grt cs :-) grt start :-) love mayur :-) samrat is so rude to dia :-( why? Updt soon :-) plz add me in ur pm list :-)

Hey! I am glad you liked it! Samrat is not actually being rude to Dia, it is just his grudge and anger towards Ranvijay! He is not aware of their break-up so he unintentionally hurts her! I am not exactly a MayUr fan so please skip any mistakes. I have and keep on trying to keep the essence of each couple alive! So, if you loved MayUr scenes, that is a good improvement on my account! Will surely add you to my PM list, just tell me your real name!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Hey Guys!
Thanks a lot for your love and support for this new SS!😊
@All: Thanks for your support!
And I am sorry, I had promised to update before but I had 'Time Management" problems along with bundles of homework!!😒 So I could not run my brain horses and think of an update!
Anyways...
Not any more of my bakwass...
~^Scroll down^~ for the 2nd update of *Love Is Always Complicated!*
Happy Reading..
P.S: Please be true with your comments.. If you don't like it, tell me! I'll change the track.. I can't afford to disappoint you guys!😳
Do tell me if you want to be PMed and those who are not on my buddy list, send me a request please!
Hope I don't disappoint you guys,,
Love,
Nivriti❤️
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Recap: Mayank and Gunjan are fighting over whether Benji should tell about his feelings to Dia or not... Uday tries to take Gunjan with him to the prom. Samrat unknowingly hurts Dia! Benji tries to console Dia and Uday and Benji tell an oblivious Gunjan about the happenings in the canteen!

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"It's okay Dia! Chill, you know it very well that we all are here to support you. Isn't it?" Gunjan said in a consoling manner. She gently patted her back when suddenly Dia turned towards her and hugged her.

"Why did he do this to me? Why? Why me?" Dia said in between her sobs. Benji, Uday and Gunjan look at each other, wondering what to answer.

"Oh sweetie, we all need to go through ups and downs in our life, we need to be brave and face it!" said Gunjan finally gathering back some words.

"Really?" Dia looked up. Her eyes were blood red and her whole face was covered with tear stains. "Now see, he must be out there enjoying and you are here crying for that moron. Do you think that is a mature behavior?" said Gunjan, and suddenly Dia burst out into more tears and hugged her again. Gunjan patted her back gently. "It's okay dear! It happens with everyone! It is a fact of our life. Move on sweety! I am there with you" Benji said. Dia looked up for the second time "Really Benji?" "Yes Dia! I am there with you" Benji replied. Both shared a cute and a sweet eye lock. Gunjan decided to interrupt, "Yes Dia, we all are there with you! Come on lets go to the canteen, I am damn hungry!" rubbing her stomach. Dia laughed at her reaction and replied "Okay!"

*Swap*

Samrat was still confused with Dia's sudden behavior.

~~~!~~~!~~SAM's POV~~!~~~!~~~

I thought Dia and his lowness are dating each other. What happened to her suddenly? My chain of thoughts was broken by Sheena, "Samrat, hum canteen coffee peene aaye the right? So, shall I order?" I sighed, I was not in a mood of drinking coffee but for the sake of it I said "yeah sure babes, order it!"

Sheena passed a smile to me and went to the canteen counter. I turned towards Mayank and Nupur, they seemed a little tensed about something, and I kept on wondering what it was. Even after asking millions of times, I just got a reply "Do you even care Sam?" oh come on dude! Candy is my childhood friend. Why would I not care, and secondly why is she hiding something from me. This was so not Dia; she always shared her feelings with me! But I think we have lost that spark in our friendship and I don't know why? Is she angry with me? I am bloody confused. "What happened Sam-rat?" Sheena said, breaking my thoughts again. "Nothing babes! Why are you asking?" I replied even though I knew the reason. "I was asking because you are not responding to either of my questions and you have been holding your coffee past one hour and just stirring it! What is the matter?" "Nothing Babes" I said changing the topic, I did not want to share this with her. "Hey, let's go on a date, long time since we have gone on one!" I said. Sheena smile grew bigger, it looked like she was waiting for me to say this, and the reply from her confirmed it. "Oh My Gosh Sam! Our thoughts are similar; I was just going to ask you out for a date! Anyways, were do we go? I know, we can go to JW Marriot!" She said enthusiastically. Oh god! JW Marriot is the most expensive hotel in Mumbai. Crap! Anyways, why do I care! "Sure babes, I will pick you up at 8?" "Sure, I will need to fix my appointment with'." Sheena kept on blabbering but my mind came back to Dia's thoughts. What has happened to her? Just then I saw Chashmish smiling and coming towards the canteen. She was with Benji and he had his hand around her shoulder. I don't know why but it was hurting me! I felt like going and punching Benji's face and taking his hand off her shoulder. But hold on dude! Why?

Benji and Gunjan entered the canteen laughing at some kind of a joke, I again felt anguish go through my spines. What the hell is happening? And the second thing I knew, both of them just walked past me as if I am invisible. Have I missed on something? Why are my best buddies ignoring me? I am damn confused. Put pushing these thoughts aside, I said "Hey Guys!" hoping that they just missed me out and were not ignoring. I secretly crossed my fingers beneath the table. "Hey Sam! How are you?" said Chashmish, in the world's sweetest voice. Her voice is sweeter than honey! If I listen to it all day, I can get diabetic!

*At night!*

~~~!~~~!~~NUPUR'S POV~~!~~~!~~~

I hope Dia's mood gets better now! We all have planned to go to JW Marriot, all thanks to Gunjan and her ideas! She will make a great sister-in-law! Oh Gosh, I am blushing! But that is not the point right now! I can't decide what to wear! Look at the mess I have created. What shall I do?

I know, I will call Gunjan and she will tell me!

I quickly dialed her number.

*Swap*~ MaNjan's house!

The phone was ringing. Gunjan rushed and picked the reciever.
"Hello!" said Gunjan'.

"Gunjan!!! It's me Nupur!" screamed Nupur from the other side of the receiver. Gunjan put the receiver at a distance and put it back to the ear just to say!
"Nupur, I am not deaf! So no need to shout, I can hear without that too. And, I will call Mayank Bhai, wait a sec."
"No, no!" Nupur screamed again revoltingly. "My savior, I want to talk to you! I am in a big problem!"

"What happened Nupur?"

" Please tell me what to wear?"

Gunjan hit her head with her palm. "You want me to help in dressing up? Firstly, it is not a big problem and secondly, you are asking the wrong person!"

"No ways! I know you rock! And you know Mayank's taste very well" she added the last part with a blush.

"oh!! Someone wants to impress my brother? Hmm, okay! As far as I know; he likes you in a simple attire and his favourite color! I know, you wear your white anarkali suit which he gifted you on your birthday! he will surely be happy!"

"White Anarkali suit! Gunjan, you seriously are my savior, you are an angel! Th"

"Don't even think about saying thanks! You know I hate it!"

"By god Gunjan! Tu to bilkul MPK ki Salman ki tarah hai!"

"Oh god no! Again Salman? Bye!"

"Acha ok bye!"

*Swap*~ JW Marriot

"Samrat Shergill" said Samrat to the reservation guy!

"I'll escort you sir!"

Soon Samrat and sheena reached their table. They settled themselves. "What do you want to order Sheena"

"Italian! I just love it!"

They both ordered. That was the last time Samrat spoke. Rest of the date Sheena was blabbering and Samrat was lost in the thoughts of his gang's behavior lately'

*Swap*~ Bhushan's House

"Nupur; jaldi karo! Mayank, Gunjan aur Benji aate hi honge!" screamed Dia on the top of her lungs!

"aayi Dia!" said Nupur ascending the stairs, she wore:

And Dia was wearing:

*Peep-Peep*

"By god, yeh Mayank bhi na! hamesha punctual! Kabhi kabar to late ho jata!"

*Ting-Tong*

Dia opened the door and saw Gunjan standing in front of her. She was wearing this:

"Hi Gunji!" saying so Dia hugged her. Gunjan hugged her back and said "hey Dia! How are you feeling now sweety?"

"Awesome, tha" "Don't t even try!"

Pre-Cap~ Gang's confrontation which Samrat and Sheena at the restaurant

Hope I make up to your expectations, please omit the mistakes! I will try and rectify in the next update!
And if you guys were confused then, First, fourth and fifth part was the writer's POV and the second one was Sam's whereas third was Nupur's!😊
Love, Nivriti
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Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago

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