Love Is Always Complicated-MJHT SS|Surprise P63&64 - Page 9

G8 update.Pl seperate samrat and chaddy aunty.Cont. soon.

Hey dear awsm nd superb updt yar.
m so so happy dat u finally updt.
u rock swty.
luvly updt.
plz plz cnt wid nxt part asap,eagerly w8ing for d nxt updt.
luv u
vritika

Originally posted by: Joseph_A

Awesome Update Nivi👏...Fabulous Update...I loved it...Loved to story move n eagerly waiting for "Date Part" 😳...all gang in same place...😳 really Interesting. Totally rocking Content.

But,as a friend I want to ask 1 question...What is the meaning of "Introduction Part "?? 😕 and if,you don't mind...Please,Improve your Presentation Style...I am disappoint...because,your previous work is more better...1st toh POV clear nahin ho raha...I mean,3rd Part kaun think kar raha hai ?...clear nahin ho raha... 2nd part (I think, SAM POV)...is looking like Essay...Please, don't mind...Its only my view as a reader and Friend.Sorry,If you feel hurt...

Please,Update soon...😊 and Thanks for PM...Again Sorry for my Point-to-point Opinion.

Hey Joseph Bhai!

Thanks for your lovely comment...

And it's okay! I did not feel bad as I wanted to know everyone's perspective on my update!
And I am really glad you told me the truth!

I will not repeat the mistake again!

And I have rectified the POV thing an specified whose POV it is, but if I rectify SAM's POV, it will disturb the whole part!

The INTRODUCTION PART means, it is just a much clearer picture of the SS as some people were confused!

The next one would be the first part and I will make sure I don't write the POV as a ESSAY!

SORRY Again for the inconvienence!And frankly, I am happy you lodged in your views!😊

It let's me know my mistakes and confusions of my readers!😉

I will try and continue ASAP!

Love, Nivriti

P.S:: I am not hurt!😆

Originally posted by: saduf

awesome update

I'm glad you liked it!😊 I will try and continue ASAP!

Originally posted by: preety88

Marvelous update...cont soon

Originally posted by: karantakiar

Hey dear awsm nd superb updt yar.
m so so happy dat u finally updt.
u rock swty.
luvly updt.
plz plz cnt wid nxt part asap,eagerly w8ing for d nxt updt.
luv u
vritika

I'm glad you liked it!😊 I will try and continue ASAP!

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

Lovely update, hon.😊 Waiting for the next part when the gang will confront Sam and Sheena. 😛Thanks for the PM.

Hey Swati! (hope I did not mix up with the name!😳)

Originally posted by: ArShSaJan

nice update!!