Memories In the Making-The Sharmas(MN)Link p.149

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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

Originally posted by: ramsha.aslam
please update it soon,i'm really eager to read the next part and yes don't forget to add me to your pm list.thanks a lot.
your attempt is really commendable because everybody wanted to see a detailed picture of what will happen after the good news but unfortunately we didn't get a chance thanks to star one,they wound everything up in such a hurry...by the way now thanks to you we're reading and then imagining those moments which we've lost on-screen👍🏼

Will update in 2-3 days...just a bit busy with coursework & presentations.

Thank you. Please accept my buddy req, it makes it easier for me to Pm.

Thank you so much! I'm glad u liked it. I really wanted them to show the pregnancy track too but they didn't....I'm so happy to write on our rocking couple Mayur!!

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SAISakura16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: -PrincessAvu-
I read all the parts just now...and god they are amazing!! Specially the last part which left me speechless. Even though I'm an emotional person, I don't cry that easily...but this part brought tears in my eyes. Very well written. Pls cont. soon and add me to the PM list.

Thank you so much!! Awww...I'm so happy to know that it had that intended effect on u. thanks.

Sure, will PM u. Please accept my buddy req...it just makes it easier for me to pm.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#553

Ishita, i had saved your update for the last to read because from some of the comments i got the hint that it was pretty emotional and i was in no mood to cry last week...😆 but now i read it finally and i have to say you did make me cry, with this update of yours but this update also made me smile the depth of mayanks love for nupur overshadowed everything it gave me a feeling of fulfilment reading through his words!😳😳😳

Ahh the dairy,, what a rollercoaster of feelings and emotions hidden in there and you did a great job by bringing them out and placing them infront of nupur letting her know just how much mayank loves her...as if she didn't know before...but you know what they say mohabbat izhar chahti hai!😳 you can go on loving someone for a lifetime but until you don''t put your love into words they would never know..

Though the best part was mayank and baujii relationship, how you showed that they both bonded when they lost nupur...one person whom meant the world to them..it was truly emotional yet very realistic, in mjht we never got to see this when we should have...the fatherly feel in bauji never came out....we never got to see his vunerable side of loosing his elder daughter...we never got to see his forgivness....! but its okay ..your update today filled that wish of mine also...so no regrets"😳😳

This update was beyond any praises in the world, you handled it with such care and depht that each word and emotion seemed to be just meant for them. I guess this is those times when less is said is much better....BUT i couldn't resist myself 😆 from commenting big...you have outdone yourself Ishita.

You know i loveeeeee this ff of yours right?Just Amazingggg👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

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I'm really terribly sorry girls but I won't be able to update until the weekend. I'm in the middle of my final presentations and things haven't been going too smoothly in the last two days...and I won't be free until the friday. I'm really sorry but I promise to make up for it.