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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
brilliant update yaar
the dairy part was superb....how he missed her n yearning fr her.n the patch of bauji n his,the naigra fall, his feelings, emotions.u described them beautifully n dat got me little emotional...OUTSTANDING👏👏

the last where nupur cuddled in him n the kiss ...ahh amazing

u write vry beautiful.......

HATS OFF 2U

Thank you!😊

I'm glad u found it emotional..

If I did even a tad bit justice to this part, it's because of Arjun's superb acting and some of the vms I was watching while writing that part.

Cuddle & kiss 😳- I just had to add it in to show her reaction. I'm glad u liked it as well.

Again, thanks.

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Mulan.

@mulan.

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#542

i know i said i will write a longggg coment at the end but ISHITA U WRITE SOOOOO WELLL I JUST COULDNT RESIST!!!!!!! 👏👏👏
amazing amazing and amazing!!!!!!!!!!
"Morena express keeping quiet for 10 whole minutes'it's not something we see everyday. It's like a dream come true. Too bad, Samrat missed it," Mayank finished with a little sigh."
and
""Anyways, Ms.Bhushan. Bauji hasn't missed anything' U've made sure everything from the wedding was captured on video..Seriously, where did u find that video person? That stupid video guy was in my face while I was trying to reach Sam's phone"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hayeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
ishita its as if i am watching mjht again!!!!!!!!😍😍
soooo cuteeeeee MAyank and Nupur!!!!!!!! i simply looooveeeeeee this story yar!!!!!!! you are an awsomeeeeeeeee writer!!!!!!👏👏
ok i know this is very wrong of me to suddenly add a coment abt part 1 when u have already writn part 7 but i couldnt help it! sorryyy!!😳
but i will soooonnnn read all during this weekend hopefully and thn tht long coment is still due!!!!!😆

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#543

oh my oh my....sorry Ishita i didn't res my post properly...

but time allowed me to only complete your latest shot now....

Man i really can't describe how much I love this FF of yours!

at first the mood was soooo much different then the other parts, that I was a bit cautious in reading it...in a way I wanted to erase that memory from Mayurs story... but they way you have potrayed it is wonderful... the bonding of Mayank-Baujis relationship...how much they are similar...was wonderful... and then Nupur coming to cuddle with Mayank, giving a kiss..., and him trying to make her feel better and then his last line (thats what made me say oh my oh my 😳) it was all so sweet and special, and the sincerity of human relationships is maintained wonderfully with the great dialogues 😊

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-Symphony-

@-Symphony-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#544

ishi update soon haan...waiting eagerly😛

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ramsha

@ramsha.aslam

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#545

please update it soon,i'm really eager to read the next part and yes don't forget to add me to your pm list.thanks a lot.
your attempt is really commendable because everybody wanted to see a detailed picture of what will happen after the good news but unfortunately we didn't get a chance thanks to star one,they wound everything up in such a hurry...by the way now thanks to you we're reading and then imagining those moments which we've lost on-screen👍🏼

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: mulan.
i know i said i will write a longggg coment at the end but ISHITA U WRITE SOOOOO WELLL I JUST COULDNT RESIST!!!!!!! 👏👏👏
amazing amazing and amazing!!!!!!!!!!
"Morena express keeping quiet for 10 whole minutes'it's not something we see everyday. It's like a dream come true. Too bad, Samrat missed it," Mayank finished with a little sigh."
and
""Anyways, Ms.Bhushan. Bauji hasn't missed anything' U've made sure everything from the wedding was captured on video..Seriously, where did u find that video person? That stupid video guy was in my face while I was trying to reach Sam's phone"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hayeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
ishita its as if i am watching mjht again!!!!!!!!😍😍
soooo cuteeeeee MAyank and Nupur!!!!!!!! i simply looooveeeeeee this story yar!!!!!!! you are an awsomeeeeeeeee writer!!!!!!👏👏
ok i know this is very wrong of me to suddenly add a coment abt part 1 when u have already writn part 7 but i couldnt help it! sorryyy!!😳
but i will soooonnnn read all during this weekend hopefully and thn tht long coment is still due!!!!!😆

Thank you so much for the sweet comments! I'm so glad to know that u feel like u r watching MJHT...so kind of u.😃

No, it's alright. Reading ur comment takes me back abt 2 months back when I had started writing that part.

Will wait for that. 🤗

Thanks😊

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: Ishita16

Thank you so much for the sweet comments! I'm so glad to know that u feel like u r watching MJHT...so kind of u.😃

No, it's alright. Reading ur comment takes me back abt 2 months back when I had started writing that part. 😍

Will wait for that. 🤗

Thanks😊

ur always welcome!!!! :) 😊u write so well!! i have read 2nd part too!! but got so many assignments m not getting time to read all!! 😔 and i dont want to rush!!! its like m watching mjht and i want to enjoy every minute!!! 😍😍 moreover i need to store material for my Longgg coment na!!!!! so now i will coment after reading all!!!!!😳😳😳

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: ruexangel
oh my oh my....sorry Ishita i didn't res my post properly...
but time allowed me to only complete your latest shot now....

Man i really can't describe how much I love this FF of yours!

at first the mood was soooo much different then the other parts, that I was a bit cautious in reading it...in a way I wanted to erase that memory from Mayurs story... but they way you have potrayed it is wonderful... the bonding of Mayank-Baujis relationship...how much they are similar...was wonderful... and then Nupur coming to cuddle with Mayank, giving a kiss..., and him trying to make her feel better and then his last line (thats what made me say oh my oh my 😳) it was all so sweet and special, and the sincerity of human relationships is maintained wonderfully with the great dialogues 😊

No worries, dear. It's allright. 😃

Thank you! I know what u mean, even I've wanted to erase those 3 years😭😭 but separation can strengthen ur love (it totally does, personal experience) and so I decided to show this part of their life. I'm glad u liked my portrayal...Mayank-Bauji relationship...was one of my personal fav.

Thank you so much!! So glad to hear u liked it. 😊

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PureBliss

@PureBliss

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#549

I read all the parts just now...and god they are amazing!! Specially the last part which left me speechless. Even though I'm an emotional person, I don't cry that easily...but this part brought tears in my eyes. Very well written. Pls cont. soon and add me to the PM list.